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Hello NA! almondsAndRain has joined the approval team as an artificer! If you've taken about three steps into the mechanic's chat, asked a question and were linked to the main site quicker than you can pour a bowl of cereal, you've likely become well acquainted with almonds! All your mechanics are about to be healthy and hydrated as heck!

First Noble Truth: Sermon of Suffering (Saisho Nōburu Shinjitsu: Kurushimi no Sekkyō) Type: Taijutsu [Jyuuken] Rank: Chuunin Cost: 25 Chakra + 25 Stamina + 1 Trigram Charge Damage: 75 Effects: The user will declare one Subtle Element that they know. If this technique successfully hit the target, the next time the target uses a technique with that element, they will lose those bonuses. Description: A technique created by Hokage Hyuuga Yatako as a means of teaching both philosophy and martial art to aspiring clansmen. Utilizing one’s chakra nature, the user first molds their chakra into a known element and then apply that chakra into their jyuuken style. The user will then make three strikes at their opponent, one to their stomach, sternum, then forehead. As the chakra seeps into their tenketsu, it binds to the matching element and diffuses its power. Points: 2

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You don't get DB rolls anymore, 4 is not a great return.

Eternity: Well, okay. I updated it to say 'gained' instead of 'accumulated' but I honestly feel like that clarification is unnecessary. I don't think our glossary needs an update for every word we decide to use. I get that this is the trading card philosophy, but it's such a negotiable change that these inaccuracies define the "custom" ability. I am going to leave the rest of the skill as is, because it is the most succinct way for my mind (and Miso's), but will change if required? Wrath: It requires one full turn to pass. Otherwise, it would be needless fluff to add that if it automatically regenerates through a natural passage of a turn. I will clarify it to be consecutive Main Phases. Spell: Added as a set up phase action? I feel like this is largely unnecessary, because anything that does not specifically state it is not a free action is automatically an action. I see where you're coming from, but I feel like NA's mechanics are "if you state a phase, everything is an action unless otherwise stated." Clarified reduction effects.

Just in time for Easter, Sol Pope has been promoted to GM! Hooray!

Permission Granted for making a Kaguya~! With that in mind, there are a few things to pick apart here as per the history. Feel free to send me a PM if you need clarification on anything! The clan population is on the rise. It was reduced during the war, but it's been growing. Given that there was a chunk taken for experimentation, the Kaguya by and large respect prowess over genes so if a bloodline donor accepted blood and wished to join, they would let them. After re-reading some of the clan sheet I can see where it may have been confusing so I've updated it! Otogakure had Kaguya since before Naruto time, so by this time the Kaguya have been well established in Oto. You're probably not going to have almost killed another ninja by accident. Perhaps another civilian, but at level 0 (you start at level 0) you're basically straight from the academy. Unlike the show, academy students are pretty weak and don't give Jounin a run for their money. It's unlikely whoever was in-the-know about the experiment could have likely handled the situation. IF you still want that angle, perhaps consider that Jurai escaped and almost killed a farmer or something? Gennin aren't made by other ninja, you would either have to be awarded the title from the Kyoukage or gotten a fake registration (which would not make Seji a legitimate ninja). Were you doing missions for Kiri or for Oto? Backing up, while there are sects of the family that exist in Kiri and in Oto they often see each other as foreigners and the villages aren't keen on letting them be buddy-buddy. As you're just starting your ninja career Jurai probably wouldn't think she was close to being Chuunin. As far as the rest of your character, make sure to list how much each skill costs! It's a lot easier to keep track when they start to add up and helps us to help you.

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Dragged this back into the garage, banged it up a few times and make it purtier. I played around with the Essence of Frost economy, making a higher bar in some instances, streamlined the effects and gutted a lot of bloat that...was fun to come up in certain instances but didn't go well in the long run.

I'll be away from this Friday to late late Sunday!

I'll take 5 for 2 Trebek.

I decided to buff the effect to better reflect the price.

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Oh right, the text right below the image el oh el. Just wanted to make sure it was actually listed and not stored as headcanon (#guilty). Approved.