Taochi Kirhen

[Guest Platnium]

Heh. Well, rather than wait for my custom technique to clear, I just grabbed a second one, I hope it's alright, based on my skills!

~User Data~

-Username: Platnium.

-Posting: Once a day, except weekends.

-Time Zone: Central standard time. (GMT-6)

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Name: Taochi Kirhen

Village: Kusa

Clan: None

Age: 14 years old.

~Appearance~

-Height: 5'11"

-Weight: 190 lbs.

-Hair Color: Dark brown.

-Eye Color: Pale green.

-Clothing: Grey Open vest with an oranged stylized flame on the back and simple muscle shirt with the same flame on the front, tan cargo shorts, and steel toed shoes.

-Physical Description: Fairly solid build and an ever-present grin of white to stand out against his tanned body. His hair is shoulder length and wild, falling loosely around his face and having a long, bound pony tail that reaches down the his waist, bound with metal clasps. A small stylized lantern dangles from a chain around his neck, his own symbol for hope and triumph over the odds.

Story/Background: Kirhen grew up under the watchful eye of his mother and grandfather, who did their best to spark his interest and teach him the ways of the ninja of Kusa. But to their dismay, Kirhen never cared much for all the running about and fighting they did, his intrests laying in the arts and spending his time lazing around under the sun.

But one day, on one of his wanderings in the surrounding area, the young Kirhen became lost after trying to take a short cut to reach home before nightfall. Lost, cold, and alone, the clouds gathered and promised a miserable, wet night for the boy. Tear-stricken, his saw a spark off in the distance, a small wavering flame that danced back and forth slowly and promised hope. Running to the beacon, Kirhen saw the face of his worried and relieved grandfather behind the lit veil of a lantern.

When his grandfather passed away years later, Kirhen felt he needed to honor his spirit and memory the only way he knew mattered, by asking to enroll in the academy. Though behind, Kirhen tried his hardest to catch up his peers.

The academy was hard on Kihren. The lad wasn't used to the disciplined and rigid life of the ninja, and classes were difficult for him, but he drew strength from his grandfathers memory and the drive to succeed and despite the odds, managed to graduate, if just barely and prove himself worth as a Gennin.

And now, his academy years are at an end...

Personality: Best described as a leaf on the breeze. Whimsical and friendly to everybody, even those whom would be his adversaries.

Though charismatic, he's more than a little flakey and has trouble remembering things sometimes, even important things. Dispite this, Kirhen would go to the ends of the earth and back again for those he considers his friends. But under it all, Kihren is willful and driven to succeed as a ninja above and beyond all things, to honor his grandfathers memory in death as he never did in life...

Likes: Slacking, food, sports and games of all sorts.

Dislikes: People who take life to seriously. Thunderstorms.

~Favorite...

-Food: Anything hot. The spicier the better!

-Color: Orange of any shade.

-Music Genre: Rock & Roll.

-Book Genre: Adventure and mystery.

-Hangout: The arcade or a grassy knoll to nap on.

-(Anything else you would want to add):

Ninja Stats

Level: 0

TXP: 0

-Stats-

(Health Power) 60

(Stamina) 40

(Chakra) 50

(Taijutsu) 40

(Defense) 40

(Ninjutsu) 30

(Resistance) 30

(Genjutsu) 50

(Concentration) 40

(Speed) 40

(Accuracy) 30

(Evasion) 50

Skills: Equipment-Warrior (staff) (+5 damage with staffs) Cost -1

Ninjitsu-Subtle elementals (fire) Cost -1

Genjutsu-The seeing mind. (Ignore first genjutsu effect.) Cost -2

Hindering-Self defense (opponent always goes first.) Cost +2

Techniques:

Sprout (Sutaba no Jutsu)

Type: Ninjustu

Rank: Gennin

Cost: 30 chakra. Must be done on the FIRST TURN.

Effects: 4 main phases from now, you may eat this bean. It will replenish your health by 70.

Description: By storing chakra inside of this bean, it becomes empowered.

Mythical Fire Flower (Katon Housenka)

Type: Ninjutsu (Fire)

Rank: Gennin

Cost: 20 per fireball

Damage: 20 per fireball

Effect: This skill may be used to launch multiple fireballs in one action. Each fireball beyond the first becomes progressivly easier to dodge; add 20 to the relevant stat when attempting to dodge any fireball beyond the first. This skill may also be used to target multiple people. One fireball per target suffers no negative penalties, but if ever multi-targetting and striking any target with more than one fireball, that target receivs a bonus of 30 to the relevant stat to dodge

each fireball.

Description: The ninja draws in a large breath of fire and shoots it out in many quite fast, small fireballs. Due to the nature the fireballs deal less damage than a single attack but may be used to hammer a target or strike multiple foes.

Basic Academy Jutsus:

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)

Type: Genjutsu

Rank: Academy Student

Cost: 10 Genjutsu

Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction.

Damage: None

Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)

Type: Genjutsu

Rank: Academy Student

Cost: 5 Genjutsu

Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g. use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you were that thing.

Damage: None

Effects: Change your appearance.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique)

Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: Academy Student

Cost: 10 Ninjutsu

Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle.

Damage: None

Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques.

Armor:

-Head:

-Neck:

-Body:

-Waist:

-Forearm(s): Village Amulet (right arm)

-Hand(s):

-Thigh(s):

-Calve(s):

-Feet:

Weapons:

-Main Weapon:

-Sub Weapon:

-Un-equipped Slot one:

-Un-equipped Slot two:

-Un-equipped Slot three:

Items--

-Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and/or 4 Needles

-Items in Vault: Nothing

-Money on hand: $125

Animals--

~Update Log~

Character Approval:

Leveled up:

Exp Earned:

~Money Log~

~Battle Log~

Wins:

Losses:

Draws:

~Mission Log~

Rank D:

Rank C:

Rank B:

Rank A:

Rank S:

Edited May 17, 2006 by Platnium

[Prophet]

Hmm...Edit your Background. It says you're from Suna. If you're wanting to be from the Hidden Village of Sand and then move to Kusa you'll have to take the immigrant skills.

Other then that your math checks out and the sheet looks good to go! Background could be a little longer but as it's fairly well-written it should suffice.

Edited May 4, 2006 by Prophet

[Guest DiZ]

You can't take the Martial Artist skill. You have to wait till a Jounin is capable of teaching it to you. Might have to length Personality as well, but meh, it might be ok. That's I can see that's wrong with the sheet, besides what Prophet already stated.

[Prophet]

...Thank you DiZ for catching my slip. Replace Martial Artist with another skill choice please.

[Guest Zenta Ri]

Hey, you should listen to them. They are experienced and can help you out with your flaws.

[Guest Platnium]

Thanks muchly for the advice, it's been changed.

[shizuki]

Zenta Ri, that was spam. Platinum, please include the costs of your skills.

[Guest Platnium]

Done. Better?

[Guest DiZ]

Looks ok me I suppose. Might have to length Background some more though.

[Kouta]

Ok, I see one flaw.....you're character is too old. Make them a bit younger, most people are not seventeen when they graduate the academy..it'd be disgraceful. Make him fourteen, I'd even say fifteen was ok, since he waited (average genin are 11-12), but not seventeen.

Otherwise..get to Kusa as quick as possible...approved upon changes

[Guest Tao]

your bg is too short for my taste..

It needs to be extended.

Everything seems fine as soon as you make the necessary changes

[Guest Platnium]

Alright. Age shall be reduced a bit and background will be lengthened shortly when I can think of more to add! n.n

[Cellar Door]

Transferred from Old Creation forum