Guest Den Posted May 22, 2006 Posted May 22, 2006 (edited) ~User Data~ -Username: Den -Posting: Usually once a day -Time Zone: Eastern ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Name: Kaneyama Atsushi Village: Kumo Clan: -- Age: 12.5 ~Appearance~ -Height: 4'9" -Weight: 91 lbs. -Hair Color: Dark brown -Eye Color: Green -Clothing: Light-colored shorts or pants, though usually the former, and a dark shirt for contrast. Sandals. -Physical Description: Slightly less physically fit than others of his age because he preferred to train his mind, and it does show. Atsushi tends to slouch when sitting. He has no scars and sports a light tan from the time spent outside training. His hair is shoulder-length, mostly straight, and parted down the middle, falling evenly on either side of his shoulders; he has no bangs. Story/Background: Atsushi is the second child of three, with both an older brother and a younger sister. His brother is training to be a medic-nin, while his sister is not yet a genin. His mother is a jounin, but his father is only a chuunin. Strangely enough, Atsushi has the best relationship with his sister; his father is too quiet, his brother too serious, his mother too scary. Easily making friends and managing to stay on most peoples' good sides, his childhood has been relatively easy. He was always able to bounce back from trouble because of his positive outlook on life. But now that he's graduated, the problems he faces will be more difficult... Personality: Atsushi rarely hides anything; one look at his face will tell you everything. He's generally optimistic and has unrealistic expectations, believing that he can do anything he sets his mind to. Obviously, he can't. He gets angry when people tell him that it's a naive way of thinking and rationalizes it by saying that they just aren't trying hard enough. Though he doesn't mind mocking himself for the sake of humor, he can't take a joke. Atsushi is sociable, outgoing, and has good "people skills". He is also very interested in why people act the way they do, and does not understand why they cannot change negative patterns of behavior overnight (ex: his peers making fun of others). It has been drilled into him to respect those who are older than he is, but Atsushi is learning that there are times when people don't deserve that respect. He has a tendency to overlook his own weaknesses, while focusing on others' too much. He is not as strong as he thinks. Likes: Wild animals, problem-solving, being the center of attention, cold weather. Dislikes: Less than 100% effort in himself and others, people who hide their emotions, secrets. ~Favorite~ -Food: Anything -Color: Yellow, Green, Gold -Book Genre: Horror, Mystery Ninja Stats Level: 0 TXP: 0 -Stats (out of 500)- (Health Power) 40 (Stamina) 40 (Chakra) 60 (Taijutsu) 30 (Defense) 40 (Ninjutsu) 50 (Resistance) 30 (Genjutsu) 40 (Concentration) 50 (Speed) 40 (Accuracy) 40 (Evasion) 40 Skills: (you start off with +2 points) -1 Poison Creator -1 Suble Elementals (Fire) -1 Subtle Elementals (Earth) -1 The Twisted Colors +1 Fearful +1 Merciful Techniques: Basic Academy Jutsus: (Gained automatically upon character approval) Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g. use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: (you may start with up to two) (personally created jutsus MUST be approved in the Jutsu Creation forum.) Wish; Dream (Negai; Yume) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Damage: N/A Effect: -80 accuracy Description: The user becomes the person most desired (or cared for if they desire no one) by the target in their eyes. This makes it hard to strike them for obvious reasons. Beginning (Akebono) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Damage: 30 Effect: Half of any damage dealt by this technique is absorbed back as life. Description: A lash of vapor swipes through the opponent, drawing at their very chakra and essence and lashing back to the user, revitalizing them. Armor: -Head: -Neck: Village Amulet -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weapons: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items-- -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and 4 Needles -Items in Vault: Nothing -Money on hand: $125 Animals-- (not requirement, mostly for clan stuff) ~Update Log~ Character Approval: Leveled up: N/A Exp Earned: N/A ~Money Log~ Everyone also starts off with $25 on hand and $100 in the bank. ~Battle Log~ Wins: N/A Losses: N/A Draws: N/A ~Mission Log~ Rank D: 0 Rank C: 0 Rank B: 0 Rank A: 0 Rank S: 0 Edited May 22, 2006 by Den
Guest Ichi-kun Posted May 22, 2006 Posted May 22, 2006 Looks good, but you have 520 stat points instead of 500 lol.
Guest Den Posted May 22, 2006 Posted May 22, 2006 Looks good, but you have 520 stat points instead of 500 lol. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> It seems I do. Thanks for pointing that out. It's fixed now.
shizuki Posted May 22, 2006 Posted May 22, 2006 Only issue is that you should expand your background to a couple of paragraphs.
