Eechi-go Posted July 2, 2006 Posted July 2, 2006 (edited) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~User Info~ -Username: Eechi-go -Posting: Every day -Time Zone: EST ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Basics~ Name: Kinsen "Raz" Rasen Village: Sound Clan: None Age: 15 Gender: Male ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Appearance~ -Height:5'9 -Weight: 128 -Hair: Spikey red hair that seems to jet out in diffrent directions, it is untamed. -Eyes: One eye is green and the other is blue, is you look really close, the eyes seem to have little spiral around the color part. -Clothing: He wears a form fitting shirt that is a redish color. The sleeves and down at his elbows and he occasionally leaves the shirt open(it has a zipper). His pants are a bit baggy because he doesn't like being restricted to movement by tightness. They are a greyish color and they go down to his ankles. He wears basic sparring sandals like all other shinobi do. He wears a wrisht band with the sound symbol in red and the rest in black. -Physical Description: He is around a medium build, he doesn't have big muscles nor does he have small ones. He doesn't have any scars to speak of, because he has some pretty powerful luck. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~History~ Background: Rasen was born into the Village of Oto, a village known for it's evil deeds in the past under their leader, Orochimaru. He wan named after the little swirls in his eyes. He was dubbed Raz in the academy by the kids around him. He was known as an oddball around the school, not many Oto nin had red hair, let alond two diffrent colored eyes. His father was a master guitar player and his mom was on her way to mastering the flute. They were somewhat famous to musicians in Oto. They left the village to travel the world to make money for the family. Raz choose to stay in Oto, he dreamed of mastering ninjustu and becoming a master musician. In order for him to do this he needed to finish his days at the academy. He has begun trying to create his own guitar and an amplifier for his sound justu's he learned in the academy. He has now graduated from the academy and awaits his chance to fulfill his dream. He began trying to touch up his sound jutsu but relised he cannot reach his full potential with sound unless he makes his guitar. Ever scince he relized this he has been working on his guitar day in and day out. He occasionally get mail from his parents sending him money to but enough tools to do so. He is determined to make Chunnin by the time they return. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Personality: Raz doesn't belive in any shinobi code, he doesn't think a shinobi should be used as a tool for their country. Therefore he used to get into fights with teachers at the academy. He is a bit easy to fool, because he has a hard time thinking through things when backed into a corner, but at the same time his luck saves him at the last minute and he becomes cocky when it happens. He is however, a good strategist when he can plan things out before hand. He is a bit of a pervert however, so people tend to take advantage of that and his ability to be fooled Likes: He likes fighting alot, he tends to just pick fights with random people just so he can test himself. He likes female company, alot, he wants to find somone in his life worth protecting and loving. He also loves ramen, like mos shinobi do. Dislikes: He dislikes others who are cocky as well, and tends to pick fights with them first. He hates people who would mistreat other people and animals as well. ~Favorite~ -Food: Anything with Cheese -Color: Blue and Green -Music Genre: Anything that uses a koto or other japanese instruments -Book Genre: Manga, Adult (assuming he steals them) -Hangout: Rooftops ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Ninja Stats~ Rank: Gennin Level: 0 TXP: -Stats (out of 500)- (Health Power) 50 (Stamina) 10 (Chakra) 100 (Natural Growth) (Taijutsu) 60 (Defense) 20 (Ninjutsu) 100 (Resistance) 20 (Genjutsu) 0 (Concentration)0 (Speed) 40 (Accuracy) 60 (Evasion) 40 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ Remaining Skill Points: 0 Skills: Second Wind Upon reaching 0 health, user regains 1Hp, but only once per battle. n/a -2 1 Strategist Once a battle, and only once, you may choose to have any one of your attacks become a critical hit for 1.5 times its usual damage. n/a -3 1 Subtle Elementals (Fire) You may learn an elemental jutsu that is not from your village (IE: Fire jutsus in Mist village). Remember that you must specify which element you bought with this skill (Fire, Mist, Wind, Earth, Lightning, Grass, Sound) n/a -1 Natural Growth (Chakra) A ninja with this gains +5 to the specified stat every level. n/a -2 Uncreative Cannot create any custom techniques. n/a +5 Pervert (Female) Whenever you battle an opponent of your prefered gender choice, you lose your first turn in combat. n/a +1 Skills learned from Jounins: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Techniques~ (Check out the Technique Page or create your own set for approval. If you are entering the Academy please remove the basic jutsus, you will learn them in the academy.) Basic Academy Jutsus: (You start off with these) Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates illusionary replicas of the user. They are unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as good distractions. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you actually were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects:Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: "Sound Type”Sound Cannon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 60 Charka Damage: 60 Effects: If done at melee range user will take half of the base damage. Description:. This attack can be performed two ways, one form one hand the other from the mouth (Almost never picked). (Hand) The user places their left hand on their right rist, as Charka is changed into both hands, then fires it is a massive bast that takes the form of sound, but could still be seen my the human eyes. (Mouth) User draws air into their body and holds their breath for one minute, then fires it is a massive bast that takes the form of sound, but could still be seen my the human eyes. A sound amplifier is need in order to use this. Air Slicing Blast (Zankuuha) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Ninjustu/ 50 Ninjutsu with Air Pressure Device. Effects: 40 Damage/ 55 Damage with Air Pressure Device. Description: A Jutsu which allows the user to freely control super sonic sound waves and air pressure. The cannons that are their arms can create blasts powerful enough to even destroy rock. Jutsus learned from Jounins: (These do not count towards your Jutsu limit. You must link to the topic in which you learned these) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Inventory~ Armor: -Head: Hitai-Ate -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weaponry: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items: -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, 4 Senbon Needles. -Items in Vault: Nothing. -Money on hand: $125 Animals: (If you want an animal you may purchase one via the market) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Update Log~ Character Approval: Leveled up/Exp Earned: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Transactions~ (How much money you have spent, when, where, and who approved it) Buy: Sell: Reward: Loss: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Battle Log~ (Practice arena battles don't count. Make sure to link to the topics. Wins: Losses: Draws: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Edited July 5, 2006 by Eechi-go
Guest Ichi-kun Posted July 2, 2006 Posted July 2, 2006 Ok since you asked me ill give a little input, over all its not to bad, could touch up the background with some detail since its a tad short. Your gen and con, take the 5 and 5 and put 10 into somrthing else since 5 gains you nooooo bonus, maybe put some into avasion since you may get attacked alot and not beable to dodge much. Other then that not much errors, ill leave it for the mods to decide that though.
Eechi-go Posted July 2, 2006 Author Posted July 2, 2006 Ok thank you very much for your input, I changed what you suggested
Matthias Drake Posted July 3, 2006 Posted July 3, 2006 Approved. Out of curiosity - If he likes traditional japanese music, why does he want a guitar?
Eechi-go Posted July 3, 2006 Author Posted July 3, 2006 (edited) When I say guitar I mean something like a Koto, he jus thas a hard time playing koto's, so he moved on to wooden guitars which are easier to handle in his opinon, and thank you very much. Edited July 3, 2006 by Eechi-go
Rei Posted July 5, 2006 Posted July 5, 2006 You've forgotten to select a stat for Natural Growth. Outside of that, I'd give you an approval.
Cloudnine Posted July 5, 2006 Posted July 5, 2006 (edited) Ermerm. . . although you have the modmin approvals. . . "Sound Type”Sound CannonType: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 60 Charka Damage: 60 Effects: If done at melee range user will take half of the base damage. Description:. This attack can be performed two ways, one form one hand the other from the mouth (Almost never picked). (Hand) The user places their left hand on their right rist, as Charka is changed into both hands, then fires it is a massive bast that takes the form of sound, but could still be seen my the human eyes. (Mouth) User draws air into their body and holds their breath for one minute, then fires it is a massive bast that takes the form of sound, but could still be seen my the human eyes. A sound amplifier is need in order to use this. Sound amplifier- is that required? Edited July 5, 2006 by Bifröst
Eechi-go Posted July 8, 2006 Author Posted July 8, 2006 Do instrumets count as amplifiers? Because as soon as he would be aprroved I was gona make his guitar....
Rei Posted July 8, 2006 Posted July 8, 2006 Do instrumets count as amplifiers? Because as soon as he would be aprroved I was gona make his guitar.... <{POST_SNAPBACK}> I suggest you create the guitar before he's moved, and then staff will work out this amplifier situation.
Eechi-go Posted July 11, 2006 Author Posted July 11, 2006 Guitar has been made, it needs approvals Guitar
Eechi-go Posted July 13, 2006 Author Posted July 13, 2006 Just one more approval is all I need, please?
