Guest saruo Posted July 12, 2006 Posted July 12, 2006 (edited) place me in any village ~User Data~ -Username: (saruo) -Posting: maybe once a day if not once a week -Time Zone:mountain time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Name: (uthidori sarake`) Village: none yet Clan: none yet Age: (9) ~Appearance~ -Height: (4"5) -Weight: (92) -Hair Color: (black) -Eye Color: (white) -Clothing: white shorts with blue ninja scale sandels and a baige jacket -Physical Description: (scar over right eye under eyebrow average build he is african american ) Story/Background: (uthidori sarake` has gone through many things like watching his father get annihalated by a member from his family rivals at the age of 7. He now lives with his mother and the rest of his family has suffered the same fate ,they are dead, from this rival family. He blames himself for not being their to protect his father that day and trains almost constantly to atone for what he thinks is his mistake.Since, his mother vowed , to his father , not to tell sarake` who killed him that night 2 years ago and since he cant remember anything about the family rivals , only that they exist and they will stop at nothing to kill him for some odd reason , he does not know who the family rivals are.knowing that they are after him he trains constantly so that he may fofill his dream of becoming a strong ninja so that he may halt the rivalry and get his revenge on the one who killed his father. but he still has moments where he feels as though he is just to weak to do it .So he vowed to his mother to never let someone hurt her nomatter what the cost and to stop the rivalry for her safety at least. Personality: (quiet thinker , problem solver, but sometimes cocky and annoying but mostly mysterious) Likes: (challenging fights) Dislikes: (a lot of things) ~Favorite~ -Food:curry -Color:blue -Music Genre:rock or rap -Book Genre:action -Hangout:training areas -(Anything else you would want to add): *these are NOT a requirement, but add more flavor to your character* Ninja Stats Level: 0 TXP: 0 -Stats(out of 500)- (Health Power) 150 (Stamina) 50 (Chakra) 60 gifted[+25%] (Taijutsu) 50 (Defense) 20 gifted[+25%] (Ninjutsu) 60 gifted[+25%] (Resistance) 15 gifted[+25%] (Genjutsu) 20 (Concentration) 15 gifted[+25%] (Speed) 20 gifted[+25%] (Accuracy)20 gifted[+25%] (Evasion)20 gifted[+25%] Skills: Skill Name: Gifted [evasion] Bloodline: regular skill Description: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Cost: -1 Skill Name:Self-Defense Bloodline:regular skill Description:Opponents always act first, no matter what. Effect:Opponents always act first, no matter what. Cost:+2 Skill Name: Uncreative Bloodline: regular skill Description: Cannot create any custom techniques. Effect:Cannot create any custom techniques. Cost: +5 Skill Name: Gifted [accuracy] Bloodline: regular skill Description: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Cost: -1 Skill Name: Merciful Bloodline: regular skill Description: Whenever you would deal the finishing blow in combat to an opponent, you must let them live with one HP left, only applies once a battle. Effect: Whenever you would deal the finishing blow in combat to an opponent, you must let them live with one HP left, only applies once a battle. Cost: +1 Skill Name: Gifted [concentration] Bloodline: regular skill Description: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Cost: -1 Skill Name: Gifted [speed] Bloodline: regular skill Description: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Cost: -1 Skill Name: Gifted [resistance] Bloodline: regular skill Description: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Cost: -1 Skill Name: Gifted [defense] Bloodline: regular skill Description: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Cost: -1 Skill Name: Contract Manager Bloodline: regular skill Description: Every time you take this skill, you may summon one additional type of animal (You must still get a contract)You may take this as many times as you want additional contracts. You cannot summon anything without this skill Effect: Every time you take this skill, you may summon one additional type of animal (You must still get a contract)You may take this as many times as you want additional contracts. You cannot summon anything without this skill Cost: -1 Skill Name: Gifted [chakra] Bloodline: regular skill Description: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Cost: -1 Skill Name: Gifted [ninjutsu] Bloodline: regular skill Description: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Cost: -1 Skill Name: Summon Affinity Bloodline: regular skill Description: You may have more than one summoned creature out at a time with each rank in this skill. You may take this 4 times Effect: You may have more than one summoned creature out at a time with each rank in this skill. You may take this 4 times Cost: -1 skill points remaining:0 Techniques: Mythical Fire Flower (Katon Housenka) Type: Ninjutsu (Fire) Rank: Gennin Cost: 20 per fireball Damage: 20 per fireball Effect: This skill may be used to launch multiple fireballs in one action. Each fireball beyond the first becomes progressivly easier to dodge; add 20 to the relevant stat when attempting to dodge any fireball beyond the first. This skill may also be used to target multiple people. One fireball per target suffers no negative penalties, but if ever multi-targetting and striking any target with more than one fireball, that target receivs a bonus of 30 to the relevant stat to dodge each fireball. Description: The ninja draws in a large breath of fire and shoots it out in many quite fast, small fireballs. Due to the nature the fireballs deal less damage than a single attack but may be used to hammer a target or strike multiple foes. Basic Academy Jutsus(Gained automatically upon character approval): Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: x Chakra (depends on summon level, see summoning rules) Damage: N/A Effect: Allows you to summon one animal. (See Summoning rules for more info). Requires the skill "Contract Manager" to preform. Description: Having signed a contract in blood, any ninja with this Ninjutsu technique can summon a beast, or beasts, from another plane of existence to use in battle. They must use their own blood as a "sacrifice" to summon them, after performing the hand seals corresponding with their animal and marking their point of summoning on the ground with both hands. Animals range from the famous Japanese Triad of the Toad, Snake, and Snail/Slug, to dogs, spiders, turtles, monkeys, and many more Armor: -Head: Village Amulet(no bonus-must be worn SOMEWHERE on your body) -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weapons: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items-- -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and/or 4 Needles -Items in Vault: Nothing -Money on hand: $125 Animals--(not requirement, mostly for clan stuff) ~Update Log~ Character Approval: (date, and by whom) Leveled up: (when? link it please) Exp Earned: (when? where? why? link it please) ~Money Log~ ~Battle Log~ Wins: (against whom?) Losses: (against whom?) Draws: (against whom?) ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: approve my summons heres http://ninja-academy-online.invisionzone.c...t=0#entry136991 Edited July 25, 2006 by saruo
Rei Posted July 12, 2006 Posted July 12, 2006 After a quick skim odf your character sheet I found a few errors. 1)His history is far too short; I'd suggest at least two paragraphs. 2) He's 2 Jutsu over the limit of free Jutsu
Guest saruo Posted July 12, 2006 Posted July 12, 2006 i correct ed all of that can u approve me or is their any more errors
Ironwolf Posted July 15, 2006 Posted July 15, 2006 HT, you are not in any position to tell him what will or will not happen, besides there is still work that needs to be done on this sheet before it can be approved. Physical Description and Clothion needs to be fleshed out, and I refuse to even considure a character who's clothing is "nejis shirt sasukes pants and ninja sandels." Pretend like we do not know what they look like, tell us what without using a compairison. Otherwise, you will be the first naked ninja.
shizuki Posted July 15, 2006 Posted July 15, 2006 http://ninja-academy-online.invisionzone.c...view=getnewpost
Guest saruo Posted July 25, 2006 Posted July 25, 2006 i fixed everything about the clothing so what now r u going to approve someone please approve
Guest Marie Posted July 25, 2006 Posted July 25, 2006 In case you didn't know, there was a reset and you have to make a new character sheet in the new creation area.
Kyoujin Posted August 8, 2006 Posted August 8, 2006 And one more thing....Gifted doesnt exist anymore.
