zilo Posted October 19, 2007 Posted October 19, 2007 (edited) ~Character Sheet~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~User Info~ -Username: Zilo -Posting: Every few days, possibly more. -Time Zone: Pacific Time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Basics~ Name: Kanja Furiko Village: Sunagakure No Sato Allegiance: Resistance Clan: N/A Age: 15 Gender: Male ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Appearance~ -Height: 5'6” -Weight: 110 lbs -Hair: Furiko has medium length blonde hair, with one bang of the golden mass covering his left eye. -Eyes: Hazel -Clothing: Generally clad in bright colors, Furiko loves to stand out. Yellow is a favorite color, and floral print shorts make him happy. Tighter shirts are also a must. The cutting edge of fashion in Sunagakure, Furiko tends to have a lot of magazines involving clothes and changes his style on a whim. -Physical Description: Lacking in upper body strength, Furiko makes up for it with his powerful legs. Skinny and on the light side, he resembles track runner. He commonly uses his toned abs and tanned body to attract the ladies at any opportunity. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~History~ Background: Born into a middle class family, with no ninja to speak of, Furiko was destined to own his very own grocery store. His father was a mere grocer, and his mother was a home-maker. She spent her time rearing Furiko and his six siblings. Although very charasimatic Furiko liked the simple life. He always enjoyed laying in the sun. He loved to wear the bright colors like yellow and orange. He was not a guy that would make trouble. So much to the fact that people are drawn to his extreme carfree life style. He normaly loved caring for the shop. His organazational skill were limited and he normaly lost alot of the shops things. A turning point in furiko's life is when he made the discovery of women. Not a just any woman. a woman named mimiruko that would change his life forever. She woke up somthing inside of Furiko. a passion he couldent explain. She made him want to leave his life of peace and do somthing exciting. She was crazy and in a dark way and Furiko loved it. She would make him explore restricted zones. Pull pranks on people and even get in situations that put his life in sevear danger. Mimiruko later broke his heart and it would be one of the hardest times of Furiko's life. A year later Furiko would be back to a more normal state, but the desire for excitment would never leave him. Also along with that would be his liking for women and danger. As his life progressed, he became more adept at using his innate charisma to beguile others. He was even able to con his way out of a life of boredom. By age nine, Furiko was enrolled in the ninja academy. The academy, a turning point in this particular young man's life. Furiko realized two things while attending a myriad of classes. One, he loved women. Especially, the cute ones. The other thing he came to understand about himself, was that he didn't really want to be a ninja. Ungifted in any particular shinobi art, Furiko coasted his way through school. He was often branded a class clown and an idiot by his teachers, but among his peers he was very popular. It wasn't until his final year at school that he realized that the life of a ninja was his only way out of an inherited life as a grocery store owner. Furiko wanted to travel the world, and meet women. So, he redoubled his studies and learned that his control over chakra was very precise. He also seemed to have an aptitude for the various arts of ninjutsu. Capable of using various elements, and in theory, a myriad of techniques, Furiko graduated with decent marks and at the age of thirteen. Unfortunately, not long after his graduation, his village was invaded by the nation of Cloud. The perfidious Raikage took control of the village for almost three years before the forces of the NCIA were weakened and Sunagakure No Sato was free. During the invasion, Furiko being the coward that he is, hid with his family. Now, with Suna liberated Furiko was ready to join the liberation front, be it in other countries. The underlying reason for joining The Resistance? Exotic women. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Personality: Always the optimist, Furiko tries to make the best out of every situation. Commonly branded a "skirt chaser,” Furiko does indeed love the ladies. He always remains polite in his endeavors. Despite his commonly sweet disposition, Furiko has an incredibly hot temper and commonly takes off on crusades to right some minor injustice. All in all, Furiko is in it for fun. He finds the ninja life exciting, and a great way to seem interesting around girls. Likes: - Flirting - Checking out hot girls - Sneaking around - Eating - Training - Doggies - Kitties - Birdys - Snow Dislikes: - Getting hurt - Getting made fun of - Boredom - Smelly things - Cereal - People that dont take showers ~Favorite~ -Food: Ramen (Not to be cliché or anything.) -Color: Blue ( Like my weeping tears.) -Music Genre: Punk-Rock -Book Genre: Newspapers -Hangout: Parks and quite places ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Ninja Stats~ Rank: Gennin Level: 2 TXP:109 -Stats (out of 600)- (Health Power) 40 (Stamina) 40 (Chakra) 100 (Taijutsu) 20 (Defense) 0 (Ninjutsu) 120 (Resistance) 0 (Genjutsu) 0 (Concentration) 0 (Speed) 100 (Accuracy) 80 (Evasion) 100 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ Remaining Skill Points:1 Skills: (1/5) Skill Name: The Path of the Scholar Description: Although quite rare, a few Ninja proceed down the path of the scholar, spending a lot of time in research and in trying to understand the world around them. These Ninja are not to be underestimates, however,as they can be quite deadly. Effect: Character gains 1 extra Jutsu Point per level Scholarly Mastery: Choose Two: -May gain 2 ranks of 'Scribe' for 1 skill point. -May gain 2 'Subtle Elements' skills for 1 skill point. Cost: -1 Restriction: Character may not have more than +2 points of Hindering Traits. Sandcastle Sovereign Effect: The user can use Sand jutsu without having the ability to use Earth, Wind, or even Twisted Colors. Description: Having lived in Suna and being taught with sand jutsu the ninja is able to use such jutsu without the great effort normally required by this. Requirements: Suna Ninja. Cost: 0 Ranks: 1 Subtle Elementals (Fire, Lightning, Water, Earth) You may learn an elemental jutsu that is not from your village (IE: Fire jutsus in Mist village). Remember that you must specify which element you bought with this skill. -2 Scribe You may inscribe techniques into scrolls. These techniques have 1/4, 1/2, 3/4, or 100% of the original posts/damage (depeneding on your rank in the skill). Any technique that ends up being a number less than one cannot be inscribed within the scroll. Ranks: 2 Cost: -1 -Hindering Skills: Pervert (Female) Whenever you battle an opponent of your prefered gender choice, you lose your first turn in combat. n/a Cost: +1 Fear of Elements (Water) User is stunned and disorganized for one post after seeing (Water) used against them for the first time in a match. n/a Cost: +1 Skills learned from Jounins: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Techniques~ Remaining Jutsu Points: Basic Academy Jutsus: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates illusionary replicas of the user. They are unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as good distractions. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you actually were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects:Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: (0/4) Beginning (Akebono) Type: Ninjutsu (Cloud) Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Damage: 20 Effect:: +20 HP to user if this connects. Description: A lash of vapor swipes through the opponent, drawing at their very chakra and essence and lashing back to the user, revitalizing them. Points: 2 Wind Blade (Kaze no Yaiba) Type: Ninjutsu (Wind) Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Damage: 20 Effect:: A very hard to dodge and especially penetrating attack. +5% chance to hit with this attack. Description: A sword of wind that forces compressed air to cut through the target. Since it is so fast and hard to see it is hard to avoid, and the wind goes right through all defenses. Due to the tempermental nature of wind the blow only maintains enough force to be dangerous with ten feet though. Points: 1 Shockwave Type: Ninjutsu (Lightning) Rank: Gennin Cost: 60 Damage: 60 Effect:s: N/A Description: You do 3 handseals and you begin to hear an echo-like noise that sounds like it's rumbling horribly. The area around you then turns pure white for half of a second from the lightning rushing toward your opponent. It's a powerful jutsu that is normally taught to new genin of Kumo. Points: 3 Jutsus learned from Jounins: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Inventory~ Armor: -Head: Hitai-Ate -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weaponry: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items: -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, 4 Senbon Needles. -Items in Vault: Nothing. -Money on hand: $125 Animals: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Update Log~ Character Approval:Azure Ria Leveled up/Exp Earned: 109 http://ninja-academy-online.invisionzone.c...showtopic=22515 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Transactions~ Buy: Sell: Reward: Loss: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Battle Log~ Wins: Losses: Draws: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Edited December 5, 2007 by zilo
Eechi-go Posted October 19, 2007 Posted October 19, 2007 This isin't that bad of a sheet actually, the history made me laugh a bit. It could be a bit longer, but you did essentially sum up things better then most new members do. The way you describe him, it makes it seem like he should get the 'pervert' hindering skill. I don't think it's required however. Other then that, I don't see too many flaws at all. You could be a tad more descriptive, but other then that, I say good job.
Cellar Door Posted October 20, 2007 Posted October 20, 2007 If I were you I'd switch out Pyromania for the Pervert (female) hindering skill, but it's your call.
Azure Posted October 21, 2007 Posted October 21, 2007 A pretty good first attempt, Approved. You need one more.
zilo Posted October 23, 2007 Author Posted October 23, 2007 um i might be new at this but does getting your player approved normaly take a week and a half? It seems kinda a long time....
Cellar Door Posted October 23, 2007 Posted October 23, 2007 You can't double post, dude. The rule on bumping is every three days. In your case it's been three hours
zilo Posted October 25, 2007 Author Posted October 25, 2007 This has been kinda 2 weeks waiting for approval. This is taking awhile...is there anyway to speed this up any?
Warr Posted October 25, 2007 Posted October 25, 2007 (edited) I think I want to smack Azure, but I might be 'nitpicky'. I'd prefer a longer history, maybe a bit of explanation as to what made the nine-year-old son of a grocer decide to be a ninja, oh, and also the fact that he's a pervert makes me think he'd hit on any girl who was moderately okay looking, but that's just my thoughts. Might I suggest making a girl be the reason the nine year old joined the academy? Maybe he was trying to impress her, then found himself in a 'sea of cuties'? *shrug* I'd also suggest explaining what made him develop such a flamboyant personality, and become a 'pervert', and if you're taking it, you should at least make him a pervert-ish individual, instead described as a 'sauve-ish ladies' man'. In addition to this, I'd like to know more about him during the invasion, and the two years of occupation. In addition, what he did during the 'peoples revolt' (which you can find described here and here ) I however see potential in you, so when you've done these things hit me up in PM and I'll look it over again. =) Edited October 26, 2007 by Warr
Eechi-go Posted November 21, 2007 Posted November 21, 2007 It does usually take a bit until characters are approved, however, as Warr said, you do have potential. You should post in approval threads for Warr and Azure, so they'll get around to looking at this once more for your approval. The sheet is pretty nice, I like it.
Rei Posted November 21, 2007 Posted November 21, 2007 (edited) Don't know why, but I like his style. Approved. Edited November 21, 2007 by Rei
zilo Posted November 22, 2007 Author Posted November 22, 2007 Cellar door told me to asked to get moved I'm not exactly sure what that means but, could sombody move my character?
Eechi-go Posted November 22, 2007 Posted November 22, 2007 You'll need to wait for an Admin to do that. Sadly, Cntr isn't exactly changing people's masks too quickly, and Shiz dosen't log on much, so it may be a while.
Shades Posted November 23, 2007 Posted November 23, 2007 on a side note, you're missing this skill: Sandcastle Sovereign Effect: The user can use Sand jutsu without having the ability to use Earth, Wind, or even Twisted Colors. Description: Having lived in Suna and being taught with sand jutsu the ninja is able to use such jutsu without the great effort normally required by this. Requirements: Suna Ninja. Cost: 0 Ranks: 1 which is standard to all suna character. Also, since wind is the standard element for suna, you know all five basic elements.
