...Rhianna... Posted November 8, 2007 Posted November 8, 2007 (edited) ~User Info~ -Username: …Rhianna… -Posting: Once a day or two -Time Zone: New Zealand ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Basics~ Name: Aomori Naomi (Emiko, Mihao, Kira) Village: Konoha Allegiance: Resistance Clan: none Age: 15 Gender: Female ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Appearance~ Picture: http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa239/s...rl/2c579dd5.jpg -Height: 5.8 feet -Weight: 52 kg -Hair: Naomi has below the shoulder length hair, usually pinned up in a choppy way. It's colorful because of the many hair strips she puts in it but it's naturally a dark brown, red-pink color. It's thinned at the ends, which gives the top a little more volume -Eyes: Naomi has one bright, emerald-green eye and one dark, sapphire-blue eye hidden behind long, thick eyelashes. She also wears eyeliner, mascara, and sometimes eye shadow. -Clothing: Naomi mostly wears short skirts or shorts, but every now and then she'll wear a pair of jeans or a dress. She likes to wear bright colored singlets, or tight fitting tops around the torso with baggy sleeves to hide weapons. Boots are Naomi's regular footwear, but sometimes she wears black slippers with stripy socks and lacy stockings cover her legs as well. -Physical Description: Naomi has an hourglass figure. She's very flexible from doing yoga every morning, which helps keep her acrobatic physic. She is average height for a girl with a thin but curvy figure. A light tan covers her body. Naomi's very pretty with a gorgeous smile. Her lips are usually covered in blood red lipstick, matching the color on her painted nails. High cheekbones and rosy cheeks give her a cute appearance, with a small dusting of freckles added when she's been in the sun for too long. The only disfiguration is a long kunai scar travels from the middle of her back to her belly. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~History~ Background: Naomi never knew her father; he left her mother before she was born. It didn't really bother her much, but as a little girl she always thought there was a part missing from her life, and that he was it. Life as a child went by quickly for Naomi; it was full of happiness, love and freedom. She was a gypsy girl, and she loved her traveling family. Her mother, Mai, was a very kind and spiritual women but very strong and haughty. Not long after Naomi was born arrived her little half-sister, Aiko. They were very close and Naomi was very protective over her. Because the gypsies were entertainers, Naomi was an acrobatic child. Her aunts taught her to sing and play instruments, while her cousins taught her tricks to baffle strangers. She could bend to extreme lengths, and perform illusions while the rest of the caravan sold homemade jewelry and other treasures from other towns. Aged eight, Naomi was sent to the ninja academy to train because it was an old family tradition. Nonetheless, she was excited to go. Four years later, she graduated and returned to the people with whom she called anyplace home. It was the right time too, because the Kumo invasion had just begun and her family needed all the ninja's they could get, even a green one such as herself. That night, upon her return, the caravan was attacked by the NCIA. Turns out, they were delivering weapons to the rebels, and someone had found out. Half drunk with the celebration and unprepared made the gypsies an easy target, and they went down quickly. Most men were killed in action and some women joined them, including Naomi's mother. The teenager would have helped fight, but she was ordered by her demanding mother to protect her little sister and find someplace safe. "As long as you two survive, nothing else matters to me” Was the last thing Naomi heard before half carrying Aiko away. The two stayed at their grandmothers until Aiko had her eigth birthday and moved to the training academy. Naomi lived in mournful silence for months before again, her home was attacked. This time she wanted to help, to defend herself and her relations. Her gran died almost instantly; having serious arthritis weighed her down. But with her out of the way the group played with Naomi, teasing her, testing her weak abilities. They made their youngest Gennin fight her, and as she turned around to fight her opposer a sharp pain seared down her side. She tried to ignore it, this pain was nothing to what she'd felt inside, but her energy became weaker and weaker. Her eyes traveled to her hips where a large red stain spread through her t-shirt. She fainted shortly after that. Naomi awoke in a pitch-black small room. There was no one else around, but plenty of food. For many days she was locked in that tiny little room, with no light for her eyes to see by, there was only touch to find her way. Slowly, after a week she felt herself starting to go crazy. She wasn't as sad as she had been in the past few months. There were people there, with her, only she couldn't see them. Voices. She spoke to them, and they became her friends. As well as the new inhabitants of her mind, she was experiencing different emotions, out of the blue. One moment she was normal, the next she felt extreme sadness, then anger. A month went by before someone found her, days after her last food and water ran out. They helped her recover quickly from the lack of sunlight and food. Naomi found after she was back to full health that there was a new determination and fire that had not been there before inside her. With anger and revenge in her heart Naomi joined the resistance to cause pain to those who had done so much hurt to her. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Personality: She is a strange girl. Very energetic, except in the morning. She is generally happy but that can change easily. She can be quite moody. She has an eccentric personality, mostly due to the fact that she has several. She's innocent like yet loves adventures. She is an amazing singer and can play heaps of instruments. Her two favorites are the flute and violin. She is slowly going crazy though, and usually seems to talk to herself though really it's the voices she hears in her head. When she changes personalities they like to have their own names, with eccentric personalities to match: Mihao: Shy, depressed, quiet, has a nervous laugh, flinches a lot, likes to hug things close, and scares easily. Emiko: Dodgy, flirty, kinky, bi-sexual, dominant and always happy. Kira: Dark, evil, cruel, doesn't like animals, likes to destroy things, to create pain, tends to be the better at fighting, angry and cold. ~~~ Likes: Naomi likes quiet moments of peace. She loves hugs, flowers, sparkly things, and animals. She likes to play games, to eat and fight for something. She enjoys watching the sun rise and set. She also enjoys a challenge. Dislikes: She dislikes mornings, the NCIA, cages, confined spaces and being a hostage, or trapped. She is very afraid of closed spaces, cages and hates being controlled in anyway. Beliefs: Naomi strongly believes in spirits, and that herbs and spices are the best medicine. She meditates. ~Favorite~ -Food: Candy or any kind of berry. Mostly anything sweet. -Color: Pink/rose -Music Genre: Classical modern rock -Book Genre: Magical, mystery, drama, romance, fighting/evil/brutal are her favorites. She'll read anything really. -Hangout: During the day: open fields with long grass and flowers. At night: by an open fire. -Season: Autumn (all the pretty colors) -Animal: Lizards are her favorite, but she also loves birds. -Plant: Pink cherry blossom flowers. -Instrument: Flutes and violins. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Ninja Stats~ Rank: Gennin Level: 0 TXP: 0 -Stats- (Health Power) 40 (Stamina) 60 (Chakra) 40 (Taijutsu) 60 (Defence) 20 (Ninjutsu) 20 (Resistance) 0 (Genjutsu) 60 (Concentration) 20 (Speed) 60 (Accuracy) 60 (Evasion) 60 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ Remaining Skill Points: 0 Skills: Name: Quick Learner Details: +10% EXP From Missions and Training. EXP given as holiday gifts or handed out from events by the staff are not included in this. Requirements: n/a + or - : -2 Ranks: 1 Skills learned from Jounins: none ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Techniques~ Remaining Jutsu Points: 0 Basic Academy Jutsus: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates illusionary replicas of the user. They are unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as good distractions. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g. use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you actually were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: ((Sound?)) Windmill Triple Blade (Soufuushasen no Tachi) Type: Taijutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 50 Effect:: The opponent takes 15 damage and has 1/4 his evasion on his next response phase. (example: 80 evasion would drop too 20 evasion for one turn.) Description: Ties the opponent down using strings attached too the ends of shuriken/kunai. Make sure you have at least two kunai/shuriken when you use this. Points: 3 Firefly (Hotaru) Type: Ninjutsu (Fire) Rank: Gennin Cost: 5 Damage: N/A Effect: Lights dark areas Description: Creates one to fifteen small phantom fireflies. These are beautiful to look at and light up an area very well. Excellent date jutsu, really impress your date. Points: 1 Jutsus learned from Jounins: none ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Inventory~ Armour: -Head: -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): The Hitai-Ate is usually wrapped around one of her thighs. -Calve(s): -Feet: Weaponry: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items: -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, 4 Senbon Needles. -Items in Vault: Nothing. -Money on hand: $125 Animals: None ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Update Log~ Character Approval: Levelled up/Exp Earned: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Transactions~ Buy: Sell: Reward: Loss: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Battle Log~ Wins: Losses: Draws: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Edited November 19, 2007 by ...Rhianna...
Warr Posted November 8, 2007 Posted November 8, 2007 (edited) =) Very good, even for a second try. The only thing I have to say is I'd suggest taking Quick Learner as your first skill, and to say that both of those techniques are "Fire/Konoha Type". Approved if you don't want to change it, if you do, and decide to spend your extra 20 Stat points, then PM me when you have, I'll stamp again. Edited November 8, 2007 by Warr
Taiki Posted November 8, 2007 Posted November 8, 2007 I agree with Warr, very nice!!! Just to let you know, you've got 20 stat points you can still throw in there, as you've only used 480.
Warr Posted November 8, 2007 Posted November 8, 2007 (edited) Which was noted by me, but I didn't bother to say as if she wants to not spend her full 500, she can spend the other 20 later. Restamped. Edited November 9, 2007 by Warr
...Rhianna... Posted November 12, 2007 Author Posted November 12, 2007 OK I made the changes XD just one more person to approve it and I'm done! yay lol
Azure Posted November 17, 2007 Posted November 17, 2007 Just one problem, you can not have Windmill Triple Blade, because you don't have enough stamina to pay for it.
Azure Posted November 17, 2007 Posted November 17, 2007 Logically, no. Could you know something that takes more energy to do than what you have? No, it's just like real life. Do you know what the other side of the world looks like if you do not have enough money to buy a plane ticket or a boat ticket? (Media doesn't count!)
Warr Posted November 17, 2007 Posted November 17, 2007 Azure, this isn't about logic, it's about systemic usage. If the character knows how to throw Shuirken and Kunai, they can throw a windmill shuriken. Furthermore, you could know HOW to do something but not have the physical capability to do it, even in real life.
Rei Posted November 17, 2007 Posted November 17, 2007 She can have it, she just can't USE it. Warr's right. No need to fight over something this trival.
Azure Posted November 17, 2007 Posted November 17, 2007 Yes, I know he's right, but I'm just saying that we shouldn't promote illogical usage of the system. The same goes for someone with sealed ninjutsu or a lower ninjutsu stat than the cost of the ninjutsu. They can't possibly use the jutsu so they can't fully know the ability either. But regardless, it's not really a huge matter, momentarily robbing on JP. Anyway, sorry for this Rhianna, Approved!
