Wolfun Posted June 5, 2008 Posted June 5, 2008 (edited) ~User Data~ -Posting: Daily, usually. -Time Zone: GMT ~Basics~ Name: Ikkitousen Suchi Hait (Often only introduces himself with his Branch name IE: Suchi Hait) Village: Kusa Nationality: Kusa Clan: Ikkitousen Age: 13 Gender: Male Allegiance: Resistance Edited June 5, 2008 by Wolfun
Wolfun Posted June 5, 2008 Author Posted June 5, 2008 (edited) Ninja Stats Rank: Genin Level: 0 TXP: 0 -Stats(out of 500)- (Health Power) 80 (Stamina) 80 (Chakra) 40 (Taijutsu) 80 (Defense) 0 (Ninjutsu) 40 (Resistance) 0 (Genjutsu) N/A (Concentration) 0 (Speed) 60 (Accuracy) 60 (Evasion) 60 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ Skill Point Tally:Used=8 Total=9 Remaining= 1 Remaining Skill Points: 0 Skills: Positive: The Path of the Warrior Description: Many Ninja go down the path of becoming 'the strongest' of their field. They will stop at nothing to achieve this greatness and be esteemed among their peers. Effect: Gain 1 extra Jutsu Point every 5 levels. Fighting Mastery: -Taijutsu Warrior: The skill 'Martial Artist' no longer has a 5-post Jounin restriction. May take 2 Ranks of 'Martial Artist' for 1 skill point. -Ninjutsu: May take 2 ranks of 'Ninjutsu Mastery' for 1 skill point (-1) Intestinal Fortitude Description: Like a great marathon runner, the shinobi's muscles are trained to go the distance, and seem to recover faster than others Restriction: User may not have any other skill (or bloodline skill) that effects Health, Stamina, or Chakra Regeneration. These skills may not be taught Rank 1 Effect: Gain 10% of your Total Stamina every turn. This replaces normal Stamina regeneration. Cost: -5 Guts Pose! Effect: Used in the Setup Phase as a free action. Once per battle, when character is reduced to 10% Health or lower (choose one of the following): 1. Any -one- Skill/Jutsu that has been used before that is usable 'Once per Battle' may be used again (must specify which Skill/Jutsu) 2. Opponent may not use Jutsu/Skills (except bloodline skills) in the next Response Phase. 3. Gain 10% of your Total Stamina Description: Offering a crisp smile and giving the 'thumbs up' sign, a Ninja is able to instill confidence to those around them that they will not lose, no matter the odds. It is said that the lotus blooms twice in Konoha. Cost: -1 Restriction: May not be used in the same turn as 'My Way of the Ninja!' or 'Hooray for the Big Boned People!' or 'Stroke of Genius!' Martial Artist Effect: +10 Damage to Punches, Kicks, and Taijutsu techniques. Ranks: 2 Cost: -1 Negative: -Seal Genjutsu Cannot use any Genjutsu techniques (+2) -Feeble Minded Easily Affected by Genjutsu. Genjutsu techniques last twice as long on you (+2) Advancement Seal (Concentration, Resistance, Defense) You may only have 50% points in this stat as there are in your lowest non advancement sealed stat. So if you have Advancement seal on genjutsu and the lowest other stat you have is defense, with a score of 100, you can only have a max of 50 genjutsu. (+3) Skills learned from Jounins: 0/4 Edited July 14, 2008 by Wolfun
Wolfun Posted June 5, 2008 Author Posted June 5, 2008 (edited) ~Techniques~ Jutsu Point Tally: Used=0 Total=4 Basic Academy Jutsus(Gained automatically upon character approval): Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: Jutsus learned from Jounins: 0/12 Edited June 10, 2008 by Wolfun
Wolfun Posted June 5, 2008 Author Posted June 5, 2008 ~Inventory~ Armor: -Head: -Neck: Village Amulet -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weapons: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items-- -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai -Items in Vault: Nothing -Money on hand: $125 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Update Log~ Leveled up and Exp Earned: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Money Log~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Battle Log~ Wins: (against whom?) Losses: (against whom?) Draws: (against whom?) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wolfun Posted June 5, 2008 Author Posted June 5, 2008 (edited) ~Appearance~ -Height: 5’2” -Weight: 100lbs -Hair Color: black -Eye Color: brown -Clothing: Hait often wears a pair of black baggy jeans that hang around his heels, and a white, black or scarlet long sleeved shirt. He rarely wears socks or shoes, preferring to walk around barefoot (in the village and around his home). -Physical Description: Hait is quite short and skinny, and complete with his clothing, it makes him look like anything but a ninja, much less a skilled Taijutsu user. This is why he actually wears this clothing style, however, to get the element of surprise on his opponents, also he dislikes shoes as they disrupt his ability to concentrate chakra to his feet. Though his hands are usually covered by the sleeves of his shirt, they are usually bandaged all the way up to his elbows to cover cuts and bruises from Taijutsu training, but also to pad it out a bit to defend against further damage to his arms (and on some occasions, he wears a pair of studded leather gloves over both of his hands; the inside padded for his own protection). He does not do this with his feet, however. Facially, Hait is quite gaunt, his face pale (although his whole body is actually pale, most of it is just covered) and reasonably bony, fat rarely having time to settle due to his harsh training regimes. He also has his clans emblems on his left leg (a shield) and on his right arm (a balled fist). ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Personality: Hait ’s personality mimics the way he looks. He is quiet, calculative and seemingly quite cold to anyone around him. He doesn’t do this on purpose, he’s just not very good around people, hates large groups of people, and people talking to loudly. That’s why he’d prefer one or two best friends than lots of regular friends. He also is rather sarcastic, which rubs people up the wrong way. Quite bizarrely, and very unlike his regular personality, Hait gets rather competitive and cocky during fights, especially against people his own age (he’s not stupid, and knows that provoking someone 10 times more powerful than him is going to end up leaving him a sack of smashed bones) where he can successfully put them off in their attacks. Likes: (What your characters likes) Fighting or training to music, sitting in trees to think, quietness Dislikes: (What your characters does not like) Noise, large groups of people, weapons ~Favorite~ (What’s your character’s favorite…) -Food: Egg Mayo Sandwhich -Color: Black -Music Genre: Casual Listening: Rock/Metal - Training/Fighting: Techno/Rave/Remixed metal -Book Genre: Comedy or Sci-fi -Hangout: In trees -(Anything else you would want to add): ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~History~ Background: Hait has had somewhat of a hard life due to the harsh and hard training of his clan. Born straight into battle as they were, he had most of his scars by the time he was 5 years old. Although, he was cared for by the clan itself rather than his parents specifically (but like almost all families, he has a special bond with his parents that he lacks with the clan at large), much like a pack of wolves. Around the time he was 5 years old, he was started to be treated slightly differently by the rest of the clan, due to the way he looked. Unlike the other muscular and bulky children of the clan, Hait rapidly grew thinner and more sickly looking as he aged, giving the impression that he was no longer worthy of being part of the clan, and should have been killed as a baby with the other sickly newborns. It was this spark that focused Hait rather furiously to train to show that he wasn‘t as weak as everyone was saying he was. Verbal insults grew increasingly more popular against him, but his muscles grew toned and strong, whilst still remaining somewhat smaller than other of the population, giving him the upper hand. Whilst he looked weak, he was probably stronger physically due to the amount of training he did. By the time he was 7 years old, another, much bulkier member of the clan attacked him. This was the ‘straw that broke the donkeys back’. Hait let out a fury unexpected from such a small and quiet being - severely injuring and knocking out his opponent in three simple strikes. This very surprising outburst, and near death of a fellow clans member meant that Hait quickly gained recognition; not only that but a new, almost sort of unwritten rule was placed within the clans subculture. “Never judge a book by its cover.” After the ‘incident’, the clan became much kinder towards Hait; his parents were proud of his self defence and praised him, but also reassured him that he looked fine the way he did and not to pay attention now after he had shown how strong he was. After the whole NCIA fiasco, the Ikkitousen clan wasn’t really affected. The large, and somewhat threatening force was purposely removed from Kusa and informed not to do anything unless instructed. The clan would be the Kusa’s trump card if it needed them, as revealing them to the NCIA too soon would end in their destruction. Because of this, Hait is rather unaware of the entire thing happening. He knows that it IS happening, but doesn’t really understand it due to the lack of information trickling back to the incredibly small and hidden village where the clan now dwell. Up until his 13th birthday and passing of the Academy in Kusa, Hait didn’t really lead much of an interesting life. He trained his Taijutsu at an excessive level, somewhat shunning his basic Ninjutsu, aiming to show that you don’t need to look the part of a Taijutsu user to be a Taijutsu genius. Now that Kusagakure has been freed from NCIA control, the clan remains largely outside of Kusa affairs; although Hait now has moved back into the city to continue his training as a Shinobi. Edited July 14, 2008 by Wolfun
Cellar Door Posted June 5, 2008 Posted June 5, 2008 (edited) You didn't post any of the battle relavent statistics, techniques, skills or logs. EDIT- Never you mind, I'm a douche. Edited June 5, 2008 by Cellar Door
Wolfun Posted June 8, 2008 Author Posted June 8, 2008 Bumpage? (It's been three days, so I can bump again, right? >_>)
cntrstrk14 Posted June 10, 2008 Posted June 10, 2008 You might want to like, bold the name of your skills or something to seperate them a bit nicer. Also, to know a 'thorn style' technique you need to learn the 'thorn style' taijutsu style from the skills page.
Cellar Door Posted June 10, 2008 Posted June 10, 2008 Actually... Thorn Style can be found on the "Jutsu Rules" page, under Taijutsu Styles. Follow me!
Wolfun Posted June 10, 2008 Author Posted June 10, 2008 Bam, done. *will learn the Thorn stuff later*
Terrick Sukrai Posted June 21, 2008 Posted June 21, 2008 Just so you know, Kusa is now free from the NCIA, so you might want to put that in your history too. If you get approved, take a look through Kusa's topics and you'll see what I mean.
Wolfun Posted June 23, 2008 Author Posted June 23, 2008 Well, if it has just occured, Hait's clan would still remain out of Kusa for atleast a short while, so it wouldn't effect him at all really. Hell, Hait probably doesn't even know what's going on (not that he's oblivious, he just doesn't care at all).
abeiros Posted July 2, 2008 Posted July 2, 2008 Well, everything looks fine to be but I saw a small mistake that might bite you :] In your skill section for Martial Artist its kinda wrong, you have this. Martial Artist Effect: +5 Damage to Punches, Kicks, and Taijutsu techniques. Ranks: 2 Cost: -2 but in actuallity, you can take two rank for the price of one, because of your path effect. And also, in the effect you should state the additional damage with all the ranks together, so 2 Ranks would give you +10 Damage. Also, you cannot forget the rule in the skill section where you can only take 1 Rank of a skill [unless noted] every five levels starting at level 0, though I remember a friend telling me, or reading it on the site somewhere, that for paths such as yours, you can take 2 Ranks every five levels. :] So in conclusion it should look like this! Martial Artist Effect: +10 Damage to Punches, Kicks, and Taijutsu techniques. Ranks: 2 Cost: -1 PS: I like you Background :] And mind my sloppy posting, in a hurry >_>
cntrstrk14 Posted July 7, 2008 Posted July 7, 2008 From my count you are shorting yourself a skill point. I only count 8 spent.
