shinobi523 Posted May 30, 2011 Posted May 30, 2011 ~User Data~ -Posting: I may post at least once a day depending on my availability. I am in afghanistan right now so work may come up. -Time Zone: hmmm Afghanistan ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Vital Statistics~ Name: Nara, Jin-e Clan: Nara Birthplace: Konohagakure no Sato Current Residence: Konohagakure no Sato Age: 13 D.O.B.: 18th October 2102 Sex: Male ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Appearance~ -Height: 5"10 -Weight: 100 lbs -Hair Color: pale blond -Eye Color: blue -Clothing: Jin-e wears a sleevless grey shirt that he covers in a black long sleeve jacket with the nara clan symbol on the back. He wears grey pants with his shirt tucked in and usually a belt. He dislikes traditional ninja sandles and prefers black combat boots. -Physical Description: Rather skinny he has pale skin from going out mostly at nights. He is not very special looking. He is plane and speaks quietly he is the guy that most people just walk by and never remeber. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Personality: Very timid and shy. He has a habit of speaking quietly and only voicing his opinion if absolutely necessasry. Despite this he has a strong sense of right and wrong and will not falter from that even if it means he needs to step up and be the center of attention. Likes: quiet and secluded places, books Dislikes: crowds Favorites: -Food: soba noodles -Color: grey music genre: soft music Book Genre: Horror or mystery -Hangout: Forests or on top of buildings at night (Anything else you would want to add? Anything you'd rather leave out? Go for it.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Background~ Current Allegiance: Konoha hidden leaf village Relationships: (You can use links here, if they have sheets) -Parent(s): Unknown -Sibling(s): -Significant Other(s): -Pet(s): -Teacher(s): -Friend(s): History: It was a quiet night around the leaf village until the sound of crying was heard near the edge of the forest. A young woman from the Nara clan and her husband went to investigate. What they found was a scene of carnage. A local group of bandits had been masacered. Throates were crushed and others were decapitated and stabbed from what looked to be a katana. No one was left alive except for a small baby boy found clothed in a black leather jacket with a grey Nara clan symbol on the back. Unable to leave the boy in the hands of the creatures of the forest the man and woman took him back to the Nara clan estate. Medicle ninjas were summoned to insure the boy was safe. He was perfectly fine and also found to have Nara blood in him. Due to the take over of Konoha however his true parents were never found. The man and woman chose to raise him along with their son and daughter and pretend as if he was their own. As the child grew it became apparant that he had the potential to be a shinobi and would often spend his time wandering the estate at the dead of night just so he could sit on the empty roofs and watch the stars. At the age of ten he was told how he was found near the forests edge. He still loved his adopted parents but a hunger had been awoken in him to find his real ones. Unfortunately this tale was leaked out by a few eavsdropping children and soon the tale was spread through the Nara estate that Jin-e was nothing but a basterd child found amongst corpses. The teasing and taunting caused Jin-e to rucluse even more than before. Hardly ever leaving the house during the day he only felt safe and free at night ads he moved from the shadows to the roof tops. Because of the Leaf villages occupation by hostile forces Jin-e was not able to attend traditional ninja school but self taught himself many basics. Because of this he has an interesting style but is still proving to be rusty on several things academy students would call basics. Due to his age he was unable to assist during the rebellion but now that he is thirteen and Konoha is in an era of peace he is ready to head out into the world and forge a name for himself as a shinobi and to find his true origins. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Statistics Death Bonus: None Rank: Gennin Level: Zero [0] TXP: 0 Total Stat Points: 500 -Stats- (Health) 70 (Stamina) 50 (Chakra) 80 (Taijutsu) 20 (Defense) 20 (Ninjutsu) 60 (Genjutsu) 0 (Concentration) 20 (Speed) 60 (Accuracy) 60 (Evasion) 60 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ Skill Point Tally: 2 Remaining Skill Points: 2 Skills: Skills learned from Jounins: ~Techniques~ Jutsu Points: 0 Used : 4 Available : 4 Total Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10x Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction. Effect: Adds +5x evasion and +5x accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. A bunshin is considered to have 0 evasion and rolls to dodge whenever it is targeted in the user's response phase. The value of x is the number of clones you have made. Maximum of 8 bunshin can be made. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Effects: Change your appearance. A character 25+ levels above the one who uses this technique can see through it. Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You take that physical form, but only to a certain extent, such as body shape and size. You cannot, for instance, turn your arm into a bow and start firing ammunition at an opponent. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Damage: None Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. Skip your main and setup phase this turn. You can only use this 1 time per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. Jutsu learned from Jounins: (You can learn up to 12 JP of jutsu from Jounin for free! Link to where you learned these techniques.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Inventory~ (7 Slots Used [15 Slots Total]) --Armor: -Head: -Neck: -Body: -Waist: Leaf Village Headband worn as belt -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: --Weapons: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: --Item Listing -Items on Hand: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and 4 Senbon Needles -Items in Vault: None -Money on Hand: $125 -Money in Bank: 0 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Logs~ Exp Earned: Transaction Log: Mission Log: Rank D: 0 Rank C: 0 Rank B: 0 Rank A: 0 Rank S: 0
AgeReborn Posted May 30, 2011 Posted May 30, 2011 All I found were about 4 spelling errors, other than that, seems good to me.
