Soujira, Okitake

[Akayuuki]

~User Data~
-Posting: Once a day + Multi posts on weekends
-Time Zone: Eastern
-Character Slot: 1

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~Vital Statistics~

Name: Soujiro, Okitake

Clan: None

Birthplace: Kumo

Current Residence: Kumo

Age: 16

D.O.B.: 29/7/2099

Sex: Male

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~Appearance~

-Height: 5’8”
-Weight: 110 Lbs
-Hair Color: White
-Eye Color: Dark Crimson
-Clothing: Okitake likes to be in  semi-formal wear whenever possible, his pants tend to be black or a light grey with a rather nice leather belt, generally untucked is a light colored or black and white dress shirt. That is unless he needs to be in ninja attire, than he falls in line with the kages formal ninja wear. 
-Physical Description: Thin and agile like a cat, Okitake was never what most would call “Athletic” he usually sucked at sports but that was all for good reason. Okitake was born with an ectomorph style frame, his body sleek no matter how much muscle he put on, it just became more and more dense. His skin untouched by scars or scrapes, he kept to his studies and himself. Coming down just below his jaw line, Okitakes ghost white hair contrasts eerily with his eyes, giving off an aura of malice. The one defining mark on his body that anyone has been able to spot is a small slightly off color circle at the nape of his neck, other than that his skin is flawless, so much so girls are often jealous of how soft and perfect it seems.

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~Persona~

Personality:

Personality…..Such a thing is hard to sum up in words because no matter how much one tries, they will never fully be able to understand how or what it is that makes up their personality. Okitake is what most would call a passionate person, when Okitake does something, he goes all the way, no matter the cost. This also includes the types of moods he can be in, one does not have to look long at Okitake to figure out what kind of mood he is in. When he is happy, he is the king of the world, nothing can bring him down and he jumps into most if not all situations headlong with a fire that burns bright for all to see. However the other side of the coin is the complete opposite, when he is down, he is borderline depressed, most can see it nearly right away, his soul burned out, his aura of happiness and gumption all but flamed out. When he was born his mother always knew he was going to be a rather crazy go get toe of kid but, she never expected this.

Ukitake while sometimes completely immersed in his current task will often seem to ignore those around him, on more than one occasion he has been called rude or obnoxious. It’s not that Okitake likes to disrespect others, it’s just a part of him that he can’t really change.

Likes: Unagi, Hair Product, All you can eat joints, Fantasy Books, Physical Training, thinly sliced potatoes, black and white cats, hanging out.

Dislikes: Interruptions, Milk, white rice, Red, Oranges, Ice, Dogs

Favorites:
-Food: BBQ Unagi
-Color: Green
-Music Genre: Country
-Book Genre: True Crime
-Hangout: Unagi bbq’s r us

Edited March 3, 2015 by Akayuuki

[Akayuuki]

~Background~

Current Allegiance: Kumogakura

Relationships:
-Parent(s): Soujiro, Ito – Soujiro, Sazuki
-Sibling(s): Hojiro - Naoko
-Significant Other(s): N/A
-Pet(s): Silvia – Capuchin Monkey [House Pet]
-Teacher(s): N/A
-Friend(s): Shiriya, Makoto

History:

Soujiro, Ukitake was born the eldest son to the Soujiro family, a family mostly known for their supreme cattle raising abilities, the Soujiro brand of highly sought after beef pushed his family into great renown for quite some time. Coming up as a child through infancy and early toddler-hood his life was good, the whole family’s life was good, this is the part where most would expect some nasty turn of events but, that’s not how this happens, not with a bang…but more of a fizzle. Eventually business started to drop in their area, restaurant’s closed and the Soujiro family was forced to sell off most of their stock to rivaling business across the way. They were left with just a few resolute business, family friends if you will that ran their own lively hood. The war war wasn't something that affected them very much, buisness increased a bit to feed new ninja but, afterwards buisness went back to normal, they were left alone for the most part. A moderately sized hot spring at the very edge of the Soujiro delivery route was their main business to sell too after their fall, it was at this hot spring, at a very young age Ukitake met one of his first friends.

 

Living in a country type setting didn’t have you seeing a lot of kids just running around in the streets playing every other day, no it was a lot harder to get friends where he lived, hell it was even harder to keep them. Ukitake would always be the one to volunteer to help his father with the beef deliveries no matter what it was he had going on at the time, he would drop whatever it was just to help out. Ukitake felt it was his duty to do so as the eldest son, he had to help share the burden of protecting the families’ assets in this time of need. It was a noble way of thinking that this young man had, his father always welcomed the help, and he was a rather large man, able to swing a side of beef over his shoulder with a single arm. Tall with dark skin, hair black as night, his muscles were stand like and sinew-y, always wearing the same butchers outfit, he was a reliable dad, not much else could be asked for in a man.

 

Makoto was the only name he remembered from that area, by the time Ukitake turned about 14 he started to train for the shinobi academy, and he knew that the academy trained you but, he wanted to be better. He had this things about training, he always liked to be over prepared when he entered any kind of situation that was new to him, not just with physical activities, but also with mental ones. Ukitake was brought up by his mother’s values, she was always diligent, patient and understanding, she would let small things slide, and punish big ones accordingly. She was just but fair in her own right, though the back of Ukitakes head wouldn’t agree with you on that one hundred percent of the time. Finally on his 15^th birthday, Ukitake took the entrance exam for the ninja academy of Kumogakure and was accepted as an Academy student, it didn’t take him long to figure out he was HORRIBLE at all things chakra related, it was really bad. The academy wasn’t a bad or a good place for the young lad, he coasted through and relied on his physical abilities to get through most of the classes, his real story…starts now.

Edited July 23, 2014 by Akayuuki

[Akayuuki]

Statistics

Death Bonus: None

Rank: Gennin

Level: Juuichi

TXP: 4,700
TXP to Rank: 100
Total Stat Points: 1,600

-Statsistics
(Health) 400
(Stamina) 280
(Chakra) 10
(Taijutsu) 220 [+40 dmg]
(Defense) 200
(Ninjutsu) 0
(Genjutsu) 0
(Concentration) 0
(Speed) 150
(Accuracy)150
(Evasion)190

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Statistic Additions:

Health 400
Stamina 280 [-10 + 10% Regeneration]
Chakra
Taijutsu 220 + 40 dmg  (+55 Taijutsu Attacks & Melee Weapon Attack)(+30 Basic Attack)(+25 Projectile Attack)
Defense (-50 Damage)

Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Concentration
Speed (Speed Percentile: 400)

Accuracy (+15% Chance to Hit)(+15 Ranged Damage)

Evasion (+19% Chance to Evade)

 

~Skills~

Skill Point Tally: 5/13

Remaining Skill Points: 8

Free Skills:

- Savior: (+100 Defense/One ATK)
- Guard Expertise: Rank 1 (+3 Block)

Skills:

- Path of the Defender

• Enlightened Defender
• Unbreakable

- Defensive Martial Artist: Rank 2 (-10 DMG)
- Resistance Mastery: Rank 2 (-10 DMG)
- Steadfast Durability: Rank 2 (-10 Stamina)
- Intestinal Fortitude: Rank 1(%10 Stamina Regen)

- Momentum Style

Mass when coupled with velocity not only creates a field of science, but also defines the basics of hand to hand combat. The Momentum Style exploits this scientific certainty in order to deal the most devastating attacks possible to its enemies. Every movement of their style allows them to speed up the movement of their bodies through the help of centripetal force and fluid movement. However, if at any point the user begins to slow or stutter in their pattern they will notice an immediate detriment to their effectiveness. Because of this, Momentum Style users rely on combinations of techniques, usually ending in a devastating crash of building force against their opponent.
Momentum Charges reward the user bonuses based on the amount of charges that they currently have. However, there is also a risk of taking additional damage if they are hit at higher speeds. A user may, during their setup phase, lose as many Momentum Charges as they want as a free action. As well, any turn that the user does not use at least one Momentum Style technique they lose a Momentum Charge.
0 Charges: No bonus.
1 Charge: The user gains +3% of their base speed, all damage dealt to them is increased by 2%.
2 Charges: The user gains +6% of their base speed, all damage dealt to them is increased by 4%.
3 Charges: The user gains +9% of their base speed, all damage dealt to them is increased by 6%.
4 Charges: The user gains +12% of their base speed, all damage dealt to them is increased by 8%.
5 Charges: The user gains +15% of their base speed, all damage dealt to them is increased by 10%.
Additionally, the user may perform a technique that requires the use of Momentum Charges.

Requirements:
Kumogakure Ninja or 5 post training session with a ninja who already knows this skill.

Skills learned from Jounins: N/A

Edited April 6, 2015 by Akayuuki

[Akayuuki]

~Techniques~

Jutsu Points: 7 Used : 7 Available : 14 Total

|| Ninjutsu ||

 

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)

Type: Genjutsu
Rank: Academy Student
Cost: 10x
Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction.
Effect: Adds +5x evasion and +5x accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. A bunshin is considered to have 0 evasion and rolls to dodge whenever it is targeted in the user's response phase. The value of x is the number of clones you have made. Maximum of 8 bunshin can be made.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)

Type: Genjutsu
Rank: Academy Student
Cost: 5 Genjutsu
Effects: Change your appearance. A character 25+ levels above the one who uses this technique can see through it.
Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You take that physical form, but only to a certain extent, such as body shape and size. You cannot, for instance, turn your arm into a bow and start firing ammunition at an opponent.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique)

Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: Academy Student
Cost: 10
Damage: None
Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. Skip your main and setup phase this turn. You can only use this 1 time per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques.
Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening.

 

|| Taijutsu ||

 

Cloud Arc Strike

Type: Taijutsu [General]
Rank: Gennin
Cost: 60 Stamina 
Damage: 75 
Effect: N/A 
Description: The user will rush towards the opponent with a wide sweeping arc kick. The arc in which this attack hits is larger than normal attacks of its level, making it more accurate than most.
Cost: 3

 

Yosei-Ryu: Nakaba Jidou [Momentum Style: Semi Automatic]

Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Genin
Cost: 64 [16/Strike]
Damage:[/b] 20/Strike (Four Strikes)
Effects: N/A
Description: Using the basics of of the momentum style, the user of this jutsu brings his elbows close to his body, and lets loose a fast and short barrage of attacks that pummel the solarplexes, the striking pattern of the attacks allows for quick follow up strikes. Many have said that this attack looks similar to the wing chun style of martial arts.
Points: 4JP

 

 

Jutsu learned from Jounins:

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~Inventory~
 

9/15

--Armor:

-Head: Hitai-ate (Blue)

-Neck:
-Body:
-Waist:
-Forearm(s):
-Hand(s):
-Thigh(s):
-Calve(s):
-Feet: Taijutsu Weights

 

--Weapons:

-Main Weapon:
-Sub Weapon:


--Item Listing

-Items on Hand: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and 4 Senbon Needles

-Items in Vault: None

-Money on Hand: $25

-Money in Bank: 0

Edited May 25, 2015 by Akayuuki

[Akayuuki]

~Logs~

Exp Earned: 4,700

EXP Log:

+400 XP For Cleaning a sushi shop [Link]
+600 XP For Falling off a Mountain [Link]

+600 XP For Being chased by a Demon [Link]

+900 XP For Crackin down on Graffiti [Link]

+400 XP For Escortin an Asshole [Link]

+800 XP For Lockin up some Kids [Link]

+1000 XP For Finding the Truth [Link]

 

 

Transaction Log:

+$100 For Cleaning a sushi shop [Link]
+$200 For Falling off a Mountain [Link]

+$200 For Being chased by a Demon [Link]

+$150 For Crackin down on Graffiti [Link]

+$150 For Escortin an Asshole [Link]

+$200 For Lockin up some Kids [Link]

+$100 For Finding the truth [Link]

-$1,200 For Taijutsu Weights [Link]

 

Mission Log:


Rank D:

- My, My you're Dusty! [D Rank] {400XP + $100}

- Off the Beaten Path [D Rank] {400 XP + $150}

Rank C:

- Repairing the Heavens [C Rank] {600XP + $200}

- Obsidian Skies [C Rank] {600 XP + $200}

- Exciting Tales of the Pale Ninja [C Rank] {900 XP + $150}

- Mission: Stick Fingers [C Rank] {800 XP + $200}

- Mission: Keeping it Down [C Rank] {1000 XP + $100}

Rank B:
Rank A:
Rank S:

Edited March 30, 2015 by Akayuuki

[Hardcore Skittlez]

Statistically, things add up correctly. I would however suggest that you change some of your stats around. Aside from Tank Stats(Health, Chakra, Stamina) and the bottom three(Speed, Evasion, Accuracy), the other stats work in intervals of 20. So, you'd get a +5 modifier for 20 Ninjutsu, but a +0 modifier for 10 ninjutsu. Same for defense, concentration, et cetera. You -can- keep it on odd numbers, it would just be inefficient.

 

For the character itself... I have to say that I'm fond of the idea. Haven't seen any Rancher/Farmer type characters in awhile, if at all- so it's a pretty refreshing change of pace. The only thing I would advise you check up on is the calendar(http://www.ninja-academy-online.com/calendar.php), and make sure to address how your character was affected by the Kumogakure blitz/the war that followed. If they weren't disturbed by it, that's all you need to say.

 

Overall, good job!

[Leon]

You also get momentum style for free in this case as you did not take the free lightning or cloud element. I also might suggest (following pts stat suggestion) that you consider lowering ninjutsu to 0 if you do not see yourself using it at all. You could tack on those ten towards one of your bottom three stats!

 

Good job on the sheet!

[Akayuuki]

Okay i switched acc/defense down to 60 and up to 60 respectively, however for ninjutsu it doesnt really matter to me atm if i get the modifier or not haha.

 

Added in a snippet about how the war didnt effect them all that much minus a little spike in meat sales than a trickle back down to regular buiness, thanks for the feedback!

 

 

Thanks for the idea, changed Nin to 0 and Stamina to 80

Edited July 23, 2014 by Akayuuki

[Hardcore Skittlez]

Everything adds up. Good job! Approved.

[Rei]

Approved and moved. 

[wolfnin]

Moving to inactive characters.