tygerin Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 (edited) Name: Vanguard Type: Genjutsu Rank: Chunin Chakra Cost: 134 Effects: User gains Haste effect and +40 to speed stat for two turns Description: The ninja forms the seals in order to open their mind, loosening their control over their muscles to allow them to move faster for a short period of time Points: 5 Name: Hand Tremors Type: Genjutsu [Elemental Archetype: Lightning] Rank: Chunnin Chakra Cost: 150 Ghost Damage: 50 Effects: Target suffers from Destroy Weapon Description: The ninja forms the seals in order to access the bioelectrical input within their target’s mind, confusing the firing of their nervous system to constrict and relax their muscular input at a rapid rate, dropping whatever they are holding and unable to grasp it again. To them, their prized method of dispatch has been taken away Points: 5 Name: Enraptured Type: Genjutsu [Elemental Archetype: Lightning] Rank: Chunnin Chakra Cost: 150 Ghost Damage: 50 Effects: Target suffers from Charmed & Distracted for two turns Description: The ninja forms the seals in order to access the firing synapses in the target’s mind, changing the way which the user is perceived by the target. For the most part, they now think of the user as a long lost crush, and this is indeed a sparring match… no need to go full steam against your heart no is there? Points: 5 Quote Distracted You have a -5% Chance to Dodge against all physical attacks. Max Duration: 2 turns Cost Points: 20/turn Charmed You are charmed by [Character], which is by default the opponent who inflicted the effect. When attacking this character you apply 50% of your total damage modifiers. In addition, when the character who has charmed you is hit by an attack made by you while you were charmed, they may choose to ignore one Status Effect of their choosing from the attack for it's entire duration. Max Duration: 2 turns Battle Limit: 4 turns Cost Points: 30/turn Destroy Weapon One target weapon chosen by your opponent that you possess is destroyed if the attack came from a source equal to or higher than your ninja rank. Max Duration: -- Cost Points: Chuunin - 100 Haste Your total Speed is increased by 15%. Max Duration: 3 turns Cost Points: 35/turn Edited February 13, 2017 by tygerin
Pwnzie Posted February 11, 2017 Posted February 11, 2017 Math checks out, I dont see any issues here. Approved
Rhapsody Posted February 13, 2017 Posted February 13, 2017 Statistically these are fine but how would the person dropping the weapon make it break? (Hint: have them smash it or something)
tygerin Posted February 13, 2017 Author Posted February 13, 2017 (edited) Its not in making the weapon break, its in removing the ability of the weapon user to even pick it up for the remainder of the battle. Each time which they attempt, they simply can't grasp the weapon. hence, it is as debilitating as a broken weapon, since it no longer can't fulfill its usage. Unless the person has the ability to excel at performing weapon attacks with the weapon in their mouths or held by their feet, its as good as broken for them Edited February 13, 2017 by tygerin
Rhapsody Posted February 13, 2017 Posted February 13, 2017 I mean I get it now, but the technique doesn't say that.
Pwnzie Posted February 14, 2017 Posted February 14, 2017 (edited) Ah...Well I can see both sides I suppose for the old previous wording, however this new wording seems clean and good enough for me to restamp. [Was talking to him when he originally made this, which is why i didnt see the confusion] Re-Approved.** Edited February 14, 2017 by Pwnzie
cntrstrk14 Posted February 14, 2017 Posted February 14, 2017 So Hand Tremors, I will approve this, but I'm going to list the ways this can be role played around that you are leaving yourself open to by not changing it like Rachel suggested. She wasn't confused, she was trying to make your jutsu better. By just making them drop it and not pick it up you open up the following weirdness that could be exploited by 3.16. Here is the list of things... • Free Handed attribute would basically just not make this work. If its a wrist brace blade or something that doesn't require hands this will not really work. (Any other ability that doesn't use the hands works here too). • An ally could pick up and use the weapon. • A summon / clone could pick up and use the weapon. • Any Genjutsu release could be reasoned to fix this and let them pick it up again. You seemed pretty cool with the wording you had though so I'll go ahead and move this. Approved
