Magen; Matoi Kasane | Demonic Illusion; Demon-Clad Layering |魔幻・鬼纏重ね

[Pwnzie]

 

Magen; Matoi Kasane | Demonic Illusion; Demon-Clad Layering |魔幻・鬼纏重ね

Type: Genjutsu | Dojutsu Sharingan | Hijutsu Uchiha Shinji | 
Rank: Jonin
Cost: 210
Effects: +200 Defense, +150 Speed for 1 turn. 
Description: Genjutsu that focused on using ones chakra as a form of shielding or armor, going up and down the arms and legs, with additional support for his shoulders and torso/ chest area, his demon clad layering was far from impenetratble, but it was able to at leastslow down or somewhat neutralize some of the shock of an attack, stopping some small weapons even in certain cases. The beauty of this technique is that it is seemingly invisible to everyone else, so they see weapons bouncing off thin air, which gives Shinji a further advantage to exploit. 
Points: 7
 

Magen; Matoi Kasane | Demonic Illusion; Behemoth-Clad Layering |魔幻・鬼纏重ね

Type: Genjutsu | Dojutsu Sharingan | Hijutsu Uchiha Shinji |  
Rank: Sennin
Cost: 480
Effects: +400 Defense, +400 Speed for 1 turn. 
Description: Genjutsu that focused on using ones chakra as a form of shielding or armor, going up and down the arms and legs, with additional support for his shoulders and torso/ chest area, his demon clad layering was far from impenetratble, but it was able to at leastslow down or somewhat neutralize some of the shock of an attack, stopping some small weapons even in certain cases. The beauty of this technique is that it is seemingly invisible to everyone else, so they see weapons bouncing off thin air, which gives Shinji a further advantage to exploit. 
Points: 12

Edited February 28, 2017 by Pwnzie

[Azure]

Setup phase jutsu are limited to once per battle.  In addition, they're limited to half of their rank cap (Jounin: 4, Sennin: 6).  Double in addition, Setup phase jutsu aren't for self-buffing anymore, let that be done in the main phase yo.

[Pwnzie]

Yeah def spaced that change when I was making these, made it easy for you, they're now main phase. 

[PandaMattMatt]

How long do these buffs last?

[Pwnzie]

Clarified, and added an effect, hows this? 

[Pwnzie]

Poke

[Rhapsody]

I'm not sure how I feel about paying half price on a second turn. Maybe if the upkeep on the second turn was .6 instead of .7?

[cntrstrk14]

I'm going to shoot down the bonus for Genjutsu Shaper. This was the type of bonus which sounds fine in other games or in instances when making content for an unknown character, but the reality is that we all make content for our characters that currently exist. This is similar to the only 4.0 bonuses that would require Elemental Specialties or certain stat point totals in order to be used and then get bonuses. The truth though is that you were already going to take the skills or allocate the points in that way and there is no real 'cost' to this. For instance, if we allow bonuses for having skills where does it stop? You already get the bonuses that the skills give themselves, they don't also need to make techniques more powerful as well. 

 

For comparison sake, this would be like Syaoran making a technique that gets to be half price because it requires you to have "Combinatorial; Cloud, Combinatorial; Ice, Combinatorial; Sand, Combinatorial; Sound, Combinatorial; Steel, Combinatorial; Wood, Combinatorial; Acid, Combinatorial; Dust, and Combinatorial; Gravity". Those are just skills he has.

[Pwnzie]

Yeah I guess I see where that could be interpreted that way, I hadnt been thinking like that when designing it, specially since Shinjis primarily ninjutsu based, but I see your point regardless. Ill pull the bit about genjutsu shaper benefiting it at all. 

[cntrstrk14]

First one looks good. The second one needs to say how long the bonuses last.

[cntrstrk14]

Approved

[Leon]

APPROVED! 

 

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