Kouta Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 (edited) • Kanpa [ Cold Wave ] Type: Genjutsu Rank: Chunnin Cost: 145 Chakra Damage: 5 Ghost Damage Effect: This jutsu inflicts 2 Turns of "Hypothermia; 2" and 2 Turns of "Slow". This jutsu also reduces the target's Speed by 7 for 2 Turns. Description: A simple genjutsu, a single handseal and an intense glowing of the eyes are its only visual cues before the target feels an icy cold hand grip their heart, filling their veins with an intense, debilitating cold. While only an illusion, its effect is very real, as the target is known to have lips turn blue or exhale frosty breath as their body tricks itself into lowering its own core temperature. Cost: 5 JP • Akumu Kaen [ Nightmare Blaze ] Type: Genjutsu Rank: Chunnin Cost: 145 Chakra Damage: 10 Ghost Damage Effect: Inflicts 1 turn of "Exposed" and 1 turn of "Frozen". Inflicts two turns of "Scorched". Description: The a single handseal will launch the jutsu, whose first sensation is a hot wind. The jutsu targets two distinct applications. First, it invokes that helpless, weak form of being a child, and then surrounds them with a monstrous blaze, usually linked to their childhood home. The double whammy of illusions layer atop one another to completely expose the target, while simultaneously giving them sensation of intense burns while they try to fight their way out of the hellish fire. Cost: 5 JP !Costs! Cold Wave Hypothermia; 2 for 2 Turns = 60 CP Slow for 2 Turns = 70 CP 5 Ghost Damage = 5 CP 15 Speed Reduction = 10 CP 145 = 5 JP Nightmare Blaze Exposed x1 = 40 CP Frozen x1 = 35 CP Scorched x2 = 60 10 Ghost Damage = 8 CP 143 CP = 145 CP = 5 JP Edited February 28, 2017 by Kouta
cntrstrk14 Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 Cold Wave: Approved. Crossed Wires: Denied at Chuunin. This is a Sennin+ or Forbidden style ability as it is essentially super Weaken on a vast majority of characters.
Kouta Posted February 28, 2017 Author Posted February 28, 2017 As Jack Sparrow says: "So the principle is sound, we're just arguing over price" I'll come back to that when I have more time and don't seek quick approval processes. Changed Crossed Wires completely into something more standard.