Rinha Secret Technique: Borrowed Power Ball | リンは秘術: 借り力玉 | Rinha Hijutsu: Kari Ridama

[Princess]

 

 

 

Rinha Secret Technique: Borrowed Power Ball | リンは秘術: 借り力玉 | Rinha Hijutsu: Kari Ridama
Type: Ninjutsu [Hijutsu: Rinha]
Rank: Chuunin
Cost: 70 Chakra
Damage: 50
Effect: When using this technique, the user declares a Subtle or Combinatorial Element skill they possess, this technique becomes that element. Then, the user may spend 30 Absorbed Chakra a;b;c or d to choose a Subtle or Combinatorial Element skill possesed by the character named in the Absorbed Chakra, and apply that element to this skill in addition to any it already possessed. This may be done once per Absorbed Chakra statistic per use of this technique, for up to a maximum of two different characters. This may be used up to four times per battle.
Description: While conjuring the reflections of those whose chakra they posses is the primary use of the Rinha's bloodline, another more direct approach was discovered by Rinha Otome in her training. By focusing their absorbed chakra into a condensed ball of chakra, they could impart a fraction of their captured essences' powers into a single devastating blow.
JP: 10

Rinha Secret Technique: Borrowed Power Ball II | リンは秘術: 借り力玉 II | Rinha Hijutsu: Kari Ridama II
Type: Ninjutsu [Hijutsu: Rinha|Evolving]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 135 Chakra
Damage: 200
Effect: When using this technique, the user declares a Subtle or Combinatorial Element skill they possess, this technique becomes that element. Then, the user may spend 30 Absorbed Chakra a;b;c or d to choose a Subtle or Combinatorial Element skill possesed by the character named in the Absorbed Chakra, and apply that element to this skill in addition to any it already possessed. This may be done once per Absorbed Chakra statistic per use of this technique, for up to a maximum of three different characters. This may be used up to four times per battle.
Description: While conjuring the reflections of those whose chakra they posses is the primary use of the Rinha's bloodline, another more direct approach was discovered by Rinha Otome in her training. By focusing their absorbed chakra into a condensed ball of chakra, they could impart a fraction of their captured essences' powers into a single devastating blow.
JP: 12 (Evolving 4; Rinha Secret Technique: Borrowed Power Ball )

Rinha Secret Technique: Borrowed Power Ball III | リンは秘術: 借り力玉 III | Rinha Hijutsu: Kari Ridama III
Type: Ninjutsu [Hijutsu: Rinha|Evolving]
Rank: Sennin
Cost: 360 Chakra
Damage: 500
Effect: When using this technique, the user declares a Subtle or Combinatorial Element skill they possess, this technique becomes that element. Then, the user may spend 30 Absorbed Chakra a;b;c or d to choose a Subtle or Combinatorial Element skill possesed by the character named in the Absorbed Chakra, and apply that element to this skill in addition to any it already possessed. This may be done once per Absorbed Chakra statistic per use of this technique. This may be used up to four times per battle.
Description: While conjuring the reflections of those whose chakra they posses is the primary use of the Rinha's bloodline, another more direct approach was discovered by Rinha Otome in her training. By focusing their absorbed chakra into a condensed ball of chakra, they could impart a fraction of their captured essences' powers into a single devastating blow.
JP: 16 (Evolving 4; Rinha Secret Technique: Borrowed Power Ball II)

Edited August 22, 2017 by Princess

[Princess]

Maths time!

50 damage is 40 chakra at chuunin rank, I set the choosing the element of the attack at 100 chakra for no reason, so we're at 140.

THEN! Adding a subtle element to a technique in addition to those is already has costs 10% (14 here) the cost of the technique, couldn't find it say anywhere what that would be for combinatorials, so I doubled it and then added some more to round it off for the Absorbed Chakra. At most, you get 400 per stat, and using this would drain hard on those pools you use for summoning additional reflections. That said, open to changes on cost here especially. At chuunin rank you get 200 in two stats, so assuming you've hit enough enemies/made enough friends you can do a 3 element attack. Which is cool. But balance? Who knows! Note that this doesn't have those skills, so you only get to use the additional subtle from the element you already possess. The others just become that element and get to use its effects.

 

Bloodline is here so you can check out how Absorbed Chakra is gained/stored and all.

Edited August 17, 2017 by Princess

[Pwnzie]

Uhhh. I think this looks fine? Unless I am missing some potential broken way to use this, cant really think of one that would warrant denying it. Pending a mod+ agreeing this is fine, Im comfortable approving this for now. 

 

Approved.

[Princess]

Just cleaned wording up a little, fixed a typo and then removed a redundant X value. Effect remains identical.

[Peregine]

Combining multiple combinatorial elements usually requires the Shaman-locked Element Blending and it's only for two chosen elements. I guess I'd feel more comfortable with this if it had a 2 per-battle limit or so? 

[Princess]

Made it evolving, doubled the JP at each tier to make it 4 uses instead of 2, and now capped the amount of absorbed chakras you can use at a time on it by rank.

Also made the cost to add your own element to it 30, so that it matches the Absorbed Chakra costs for adding them from your other sources, so the cost dropped a bit.

Edited August 21, 2017 by Princess

[Cellar Door]

After taking my suggestions, I think this is approvable.

[Leon]

APPROVED!

[Princess]

Is that an approval @Cellar Door or you giving people permission to approve?

[Cellar Door]

It was an approval. I just forgot to bold it.