Low Posted September 22, 2017 Posted September 22, 2017 (edited) ~User Data~ Quote -Posting: Once a week, or twice.-Time Zone: +5 GMT-Character Slot: 1 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Vital Statistics~ Quote Name: Hoshigaki LinClan: Hishigaki ClanBirthplace: KirigakureCurrent Residence: KirigakureAge: 17D.O.B.: 2099, SummerSex: Female ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Appearance~ Quote -Height: 5’5”-Weight: 55KG-Hair Color: Blonde-Eye Color: Blue-Clothing: shirt and trousers-Physical Description: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Quote Personality: Angry,Likes:Boar MeatDislikes: SeafoodFavorites:-Food: Chicken Soup-Color: White-Music Genre: Country Music-Book Genre: Adventure and Magic-Hangout: BedroomLin deals with social Anxiety on a regular basis. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Background~ Current Allegiance: Hoshigaki Clan Relationships: None -Parent(s): - -Sibling(s): - -Significant Other(s): - -Pet(s): Dog named Kagame -Teacher(s): - -Friend(s): - Kai, Kizuna History: Quote Lin was always rather selective of who she chose to interact with. The mornings would see her mother making her some of the greatest pancakes that she had ever tasted in the world. She would have Maple syrup, Orange Juice and Hash Brown to go with her breakfast. That was divine. Lin's mother always got annoyed with her daughter waking up so late. She always complained about boys coming to visit her. Ninja's... Lin's mother was extremely critical of the world, what they did and how corrupt the whole concept of Ninja's were. She certainly did not wish Lin to be one. Alas, it couldn't be helped. Lin was diagnosed with a rare bloodline ability that she inherited from her father. This was signified by the slightly bluish complexion of her skin, and the set of gills the girl had on the side of her face. These were unmistakabe traits of the legendary Kisame who made renown to the entire Ninja world with his unique bloodline. The mother could only sigh in frustration as her daughter quietly enjoyed her breakfast. She did nothing but hang around with boys all day long. That would explain her tomboyish looks. She digressed. Her eyes shifted to the picture of the 3 of them hanging on the walls behind her daughter. A black haired man shark like teeth was lovingly smiling and holding their daughter and her in their arms. Where are you Sozen Her heart longed to see her husband, who had gone MIA ever since Lin was only a year old. Lin's glanced at her mom while pretending to be eating her breakfast. She recognized that look. Fuck. She hated that look. That good for nothing man had left them when she was too little to remember him. The only way she even knew who he was through photographs in albums and the one stuck on the wall with the 3 of them. At this point in her life, Lin did not even bother hating a man that never existed. Only her mother was constantly waiting for a man that never returned. And she hated that. Damn. I hate this bitch She pushed her food away and got up, dragging her chair back as she did. Lin wanted to scold her mother, but, shes the one who took care of her and made her able, and raised her to be an independent woman. She owed much of her life to her mom. How could she say anything to her? And so, the only device Lin was left with was to leave the house. Really, those boys she hung with, talked to, they weren't that interesting. One was a fatty nerd named Kai who spent much of his time looking through books and constantly going on about something like a ... Philosophy on Sharks or something, Lin never understood what he was talking about. They had a friend, the neigborhood bully Kizuna, who, to be honest was just a sparring partner. "I'm out mom," Lin stated briefly as she walked past that picture frame, her hands clenched and gritting. Why. Why did he leave us?! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Statistics Death Bonus: Rank: Genin Level: 0 TXP: Total Stat Points: 500 -Stats- (Health) 100 (Stamina) 50 (Chakra) 100 (Taijutsu) 50 (Defense) 100 (Ninjutsu) 50 (Genjutsu) 0 (Concentration) 0 (Speed) 0 (Accuracy)50 (Evasion)0 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ Quote Skill Point Tally:Remaining Skill Points: (You start with 2)Skills: Inner Calm Your are more efficient with your chakra, doing more with smaller amounts than others. Chakra-Based Techniques cost 5 less Chakra per ninja rank of the technique. This shares ranks with the skill 'Steadfast Durability'. Ex: Genin techniques cost -5 Chakra, Chuunin techniques cost -10 Chakra, etc.Rank: 10Cost: SP -1 Steadfast Durability Your stamina knows no bounds! Your body is able to push harder and for longer durations than that of your companions.Stamina-Based Techniques cost 5 less Stamina per ninja rank of the technique. This shares ranks with the skill 'Inner Calm'.Ex: Genin techniques cost -5 Stamina, Chuunin techniques cost -10 Stamina, etc.Rank: 10 Cost: SP -1~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Techniques~Jutsu Points: 0 Used : 4 Available : 4 Total Hidden Mist Skill Body Replacement Technique | Kawarimi no JutsuType: NinjutsuRank: Academy StudentCost: x ChakraEffect: This technique may be performed as a Free Action in the Response Phase following a failed dodge roll. When determining the cost of this technique "x" is equivalent to the cost of 1 basic attack or small weapon attack that the user failed to dodge. The damage and effects of that basic attack or small weapon attack are negated. The user may take no action in the Setup Phase or Main Phase on the turn this technique is used. This technique has a 5% chance to fail. This technique may be performed 1 time per battle.Description: A life-saving technique for most young shinobi, the Body Replacement Jutsu has been a staple in academy learning for many years. By utilizing their ability to manipulate chakra, with quick movement, a skillful shinobi is capable of switching their position with another object to evade damage. By creating a simple optical illusion, the user of the Kawarimi no Jutsu can make it appear as though they were damaged or even killed by the opponent's attack. Some ninja become extremely adept in the usage of this technique, and have even been known to swap places with hazardous materials to trap their enemies.Points: Free Upon Creation Clone Technique | Bunshin no JutsuType: NinjutsuRank: Academy StudentCost: 5x ChakraEffect: This technique may be used in the Setup Phase or Main Phase. When determining the cost of this technique "x" is considered to be the number of "Clones" created by the user and may never be greater than 2. "Clones" have 1 Health and 1% of the user's other statistics. "Clones" are not physical, and may not use items, techniques or attack during their turn. The user of this technique gains +20 Evasion or +20 Accuracy for every "Clone" on the battlefield. The effects of 'Clones' may be ignored by any character with heightened senses (i.e; Byakugan, Path of the Sensor, Inuzuka Smell Tracker, etc). This technique may be used in the Setup Phase 1 time per battle.Description: A technique that most students are required to be proficient in before they can graduate from the academy, the Bunshin no Jutsu is the most basic of the myriad of clone techniques that exist in the world. By properly molding their chakra, the user is capable of creating near perfect replicas of themselves. Unlike most bunshinjutsu, the basic clone technique does not produce physical clones but creates something more akin to a projected image, which is a real image that has no form. The Clone Technique is considered an E-Ranked jutsu, and is not very powerful, but with practice and ingenuity many shinobi have come to use it in masterful ways. Most often stalling by hiding out among their clones, or setting themselves up for a strong offensive.Points: Free Upon Creation Transformation Technique | Henge no JutsuType: NinjutsuRank: Academy StudentCost: 10 ChakraEffect: During any situation in which a character with this technique would need to calculate their "Visibility Score", they may use this technique to reduce their "Visibility Score" by -10%. "Visibility Score" reduction caused by this technique may be ignored by any character with heightened senses (i.e; Byakugan, Path of the Sensor, Inuzuka Smell Tracker, etc).Description: The Transformation Technique is a time-honored staple of nearly every shinobi academy the world over. Its concept and execution are both extremely basic, making it a perfect training technique for young students. By molding chakra around their body, the user of the Transformation Jutsu is able to temporarily take on the physical characteristics of another person. Though the Henge no Jutsu rarely offers a perfect disguise, clever ninja have been using it for hundreds of years to confound their foes.Points: Free Upon CreationJutsu learned from Jounins: (You can learn up to 12 JP of jutsu from Jounin for free! Link to where you learned these techniques.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Inventory~ Quote --Armor:Hitai-ate-Head:-Neck:-Body: Standard Flak Jacket-Waist:-Forearm(s):-Hand(s):-Thigh(s):-Calve(s):-Feet:--Weapons:-Main Weapon: Double Edged Sword-Sub Weapon: Kunai--Item Listing-Items on Hand: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and 4 Senbon Needles-Items in Vault: None-Money on Hand: $125-Money in Bank: 0 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Logs~ ==== Everything is kept quite brief. My first character here so forgive me for my noobiness. Edited September 22, 2017 by Low
Ichigo Posted September 23, 2017 Posted September 23, 2017 (edited) Not to bad for a first sheet. I would personally remake the sheet and have multiple posts. I would have 1 post for basic info. One for persona and favs, 1 for background. 1 for skills. 1 for jutsu. 1 for logs. also when copy and pasting from other sources hit CTRL+Shift+v and it will paste as basic text and none of the background or the coding. Also, the quoting everything seems unnecessary. As for content. I would toss in some more info about her Persona, besides Angry. Background. I would toss in some info about her being at the Academy, and things she did there. She is 17, and still a Gennin? Not sure if you were going for that but most the gennin would be 11-14. But at the end of the day its 100% up to you, but explaining to us why she is a Gennin at 17 would get us into your thought process. Edited September 23, 2017 by Ichigo
