Tw33dle Posted February 20, 2018 Posted February 20, 2018 (edited) Smoke Style: Kemuri Ningu no Jutsu [Smoke Shuriken] Type: Genjutsu [Elemental; Smoke l AoE] Rank: Genin Cost: 40 Chakra Damage: 10 Ghost Damage Effect: This AoE does not target any of the user’s allies. Description: Ikko places all opponents on the battlefield in a genjutsu where they believe he is throwing a shuriken at each of them. JP: 2 Edited February 26, 2018 by Tw33dle
Leon Posted February 20, 2018 Posted February 20, 2018 Hey Tw33dle, On this one the cost of the technique is off. 10 damage - 10 cp Impaired Eyesight - 15 cp With the total of these 2 being 25 you would then multiply this amount by 3 or 4 depending on what form of AOE you want (targets all players or targets opponents only respectively). Since this is a gennin technique the maximum CP you can get up to is 80, the current effect is not doable with the damage and impaired eyesight. If you want to keep your effects similar you will could raise the cost to 75 and have the jutsu target all players on field.
Tw33dle Posted February 20, 2018 Author Posted February 20, 2018 Edited and removed the status effect. Should work now.
Kouta Posted February 26, 2018 Posted February 26, 2018 (edited) While the costing of it may imply it, you should add back in the Effect line that says "This AoE does not target any of the user's allies". Also, while it is implied, the way your tag reads [Elemental; Smoke; Aoe] those look like three different tags, instead of [Elemental; Smoke | AoE]. So I'd delineate that a little cleaner so nobody gets confused. Edited February 26, 2018 by Kouta
