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Saiken, Asashi

Time Archetype: Finesse, Agility

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Name: Heightened Perception
Type: Genjutsu [Time]

Rank: Gennin
Cost: 28 Chakra
Effects: The target of this technique gains +18 Evasion and +18 accuracy for one turn.
Description: By manipulating chakra and targeting yourself or an ally, it is possible to slow down their perception of time and convince them that they are more agile. This belief is realized through the power of the subconscious and manifests as real effects.
Points: 2

 

 

Edited by Saiken, Asashi
Merged two jutsu into one
Posted (edited)

Numbers look good! To improve the phrasing for the effect, you can say 'The target of this technique gains x stat for one turn.' Generally, techniques can target the user and allies unless otherwise stated. 

 

I'm also going to move this out of Creation Approval Requests and into Custom Genjutsu. I typed up some info on the Custom forum and the Creation Approval Request forum in my other post here. Let me know if you have any questions!

 

 

EDIT: Approved on 06/02 with edits made

Edited by Cloudnine
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While this technique is perfectly approvable, I would just like to point out that the Accuracy and Evasion Stats only give modifers in groupings of 10. So +18 evasion would only end up being +1% chance to dodge. Same with Accuracy. If you wanted to make it +20, to the stats, so that your bonus ends up being +2%, it would only cost you 16 chakra and it would still be only 1 jp.

 

Let me know what you think by replying to this thread. If you want to leave it how it is, I will definitely stamp this! If you want to change it, let us know!

Posted

If you're combining the two, you need to combine the costs too. This would cost 28 chakra, not 14.

Also Panda, 18 rounds up to 20 with the 10% addition from Time. So 18 is functionally always at least 20 for a time genjutsu, but hey, it saves like 3 chakra? #worthit.

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