fuhgahkra Posted February 5, 2021 Posted February 5, 2021 (edited) Name: Snow release; Mighty howl of the Fox | Setton; Húlí de how jiào no jutsu | 塞顿; 狐狸的强大呼 Type: Genjutsu [ Elemental | Snow] Rank: Chunnin Cost: 76 chakra Damage: 70 ghost damage, 20 stanima damage Description: a powerful genjutsu trick of the Thera Foxes. If an outsider somehow wanders into their territory, they turn their gazes to memorize them. Mentally confusion them in the direction and reason they are going outside. If deemed hostile, the Foxes add the illusion of walking in harsh cold weather, the sensation is so powerful that the body physically feels the damage from the mental attack. Points: 3 Name: Snow release: gaze of the Fox Type: Genjutsu [Elemental | Snow] Rank: Gennin Cost: 60 chakra Damage: 10 ghost damage, 30 stamina damage, 20 chakra damage. Description: The caster puts the body into a trance of walking through heavy snow, slowly sapping away their energy to move. Points: 3 Name: Snow release; Snow blades of Thera | Setton;De xuě dāopiàn | 塞顿; 的雪刀片 Type: Genjutsu [Elemental | Snow] Rank: Gennin Cost: 10 chakra Damage: 5 stamina damage, 5 chakra damage Description: By entering the target's mind on a fundamental level, the caster creates the sensation that they are being pummeled with shards of sharp snow shurikens. Points: 1 Edited February 6, 2021 by fuhgahkra Updating using feedback
fuhgahkra Posted February 5, 2021 Author Posted February 5, 2021 The first justu follows the 4:5 ratio for the damage. ~70.4 rounded to 70 for 88 damage. Damage to stanima is 1:1 so 20 for that. Total cost is thus 90. The other 2 are nice and simple following the 1:1 ratio for gen damage and tank reserve damage
Cloudnine Posted February 6, 2021 Posted February 6, 2021 Math checks out, just specify in the damage section of each tech that it's ghost damage. The [not submitted yet] blurb in the two gennin ranks can prolly be removed too.
almondsAndRain Posted February 6, 2021 Posted February 6, 2021 To add onto Jeannie's changes, Chakra and Stamina damage count towards the damage cap, so the first one is way over it. Also, please list the damage types in the damage field instead of the effect one. So, for example, the second one would say something like: Damage: 10 Ghost, 20 Chakra, and 30 Stamina damage. The effect field can be removed after or just say "N/A", since it doesn't do anything for these techs.
fuhgahkra Posted February 6, 2021 Author Posted February 6, 2021 (edited) Sorry about that mistake. If my math is ccorrect it's 20 for the 20 stamina damage and 56 for 70 ghost damage. Bringing the total cost to 76 which is still 3 cp for a chunnin tech. Edited February 6, 2021 by fuhgahkra Fixing grammar [grrr]
