Guest Full-metal Dragon Posted January 4, 2006 Posted January 4, 2006 (edited) ~User Data~ -Username: Full-metal Dragon -Posting: dk -Time Zone: eastern standard time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Name: Myizuki, Jubei Village: kiri Clan: (Your clan's name, and a link to it's page) Age: 15 ~Appearance~ he wears a mask from his nose down. a scar across his left eye. his hair is dyed white, natural is red. spiked back -Height: 6'2 -Weight: 153 lbs -Hair Color: white -Eye Color: red -Clothing: no shirt, wraps over his abs and around his back, sandals and wraps going from his ankles to his knees, short black mask from his nose down -Physical Description: very ripped, scar on left eye, 39 scars on entire body. white hair, spiked back. Tall almost always smiles. wears a mask upto his nose. that's dark blue. wears dark blue knuckle gloves. Story/Background: Jubei was brought up spoiled thinking he was going to be the best, because his father was a greatly know nin for his incredible strength, and that he was a genius in the academy. Jubei was never trained by his father, because he was never around. He was doing missions for kiri at all times. Jubei's mother didn't want him to become a ninja who's never there like his father so she didn't enroll him in the academy & kept telling Jubei that he wasn't old enough. One day mizukage was walking through the village, he saw Jubei and asked him why he wasn't in class. Jubei laughed & told him that he wasn't old enough. The Mizukage said, " well how old are you?" Jubei said 7. The mizukage said " you should have been training at 4. Jubei sat there with a blank stare not saying anything. He was furious to find that his own mother betrayed him. Mizukage took him to his mother and found out who his father was. Told Jubei's mom that he will be at constant training for the next few months. She said nothing just wishing she left the village with him before this could have happened. The Mizukage took him to the academy & put him in a class with the first years. After class the mizukage took him for an intense training every day. by the age of ten he was in with the year he was supposed to be in, and at the top of his class, In skills & knowledge. The Mizukage asked him what he was going to do after he passed, (with flying colors). He sayed "I'm going to surpass my father, and someday become the strongest living ninja. and maybe someday even surpass you." Personality: A cocky kid who will try anything to surpass his father. And likes any women that breathes Likes: ramen, women, fighting, and training Dislikes: idiots, loudmouths, those who oppose him ~Favorite~ -Food: shrimp, ramen, pizza -Color:blue -Music Genre:n/a -Book Genre:n/a -Hangout: any where he can train hard with no distractions Ninja Stats Level: (Your character's current level)(starts off at ZERO) TXP: (total exp. All exp you gain, stacks onto itself) -Stats(out of 500)- (Health Power) 100 (Stamina) 45 (Chakra) 50 (Taijutsu) 50 (Defense) 25 (Ninjutsu) 50 (Resistance) 20 (Genjutsu) 50 (Concentration)20 (Speed) 50 (Accuracy)20 (Evasion)20 Skills: (Checkout the General Skills page)(you start off with +2 points) Name = Quick Learner Detail = It takes 1 less post per 10 to learn a new technique. Must always post at least 2 posts to learn a technique. Requirements =n/a + or - = -1 Ranks = 5 Name =Gifted (chakra) Detail = .When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Requirements = n/a. + or - = -1. Ranks = Once per stat Techniques: Basic Academy Jutsus(Gained automatically upon character approval): Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: Secret Might (Kyuusho Chikara) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Damage: 60 Effect: Damage dealt is "ghost" damage. If the damage would cause the target to die they are completely stunned for one post instead. Description: The user creates the form of any type of water jutsu they wish, regardless of level or restrictions, and uses the phantom jutsu to crush their opponent, shocking them senseless. Spin Cycle (Jiten Shuuha) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 Damage: 25 Effect: A successful strike reduces defense by 20 for the next three posts. Description: A small whirlpool of water is created under the target and stabs up with great force, causing damage and disorientation. Armor: -Head: Village Amulet(no bonus-must be worn SOMEWHERE on your body) -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weapons: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items-- -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and/or 4 Needles -Items in Vault: Nothing -Money on hand: $125 Animals--(not requirement, mostly for clan stuff) ~Update Log~ Character Approval: (date, and by whom) Leveled up: (when? link it please) Exp Earned: (when? where? why? link it please) ~Money Log~ (how much money you spent, when, and who approved it) ~Battle Log~ Wins: (against whom?) Losses: (against whom?) Draws: (against whom?) ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: Edited January 5, 2006 by Full-metal Dragon
Rei Posted January 4, 2006 Posted January 4, 2006 Would you stop maknig sheets. Yu've made at least four in the last three days and have changed little if anything on them. Choice one village/sheet and stick to it.
Guest Yachiru Posted January 4, 2006 Posted January 4, 2006 go here for techniquesand you can only pick 2 from your village which is mist, i recommend secret might and maybe a general technique like shadow shuriken and when you put your techniques they should look like this Secret Might (Kyuusho Chikara) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Damage: 60 Effect: Damage dealt is "ghost" damage. If the damage would cause the target to die they are completely stunned for one post instead. Description: The user creates the form of any type of water jutsu they wish, regardless of level or restrictions, and uses the phantom jutsu to crush their opponent, shocking them senseless. and they should be under the "other techniques" section and you can dellete the "extreme endurance" skill from there the technique section is just for the normal three jutsu's you get so you delete five names of techniques you have there put not bunshin no jutus, henge no jutsu, and kawarimi no jutsu and for skills it should look like this Gifted [Accuracy] When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). -1 note that you dont have to put accuracy in the gifted skill you can put others ones to like Taijutsu or Chakra it up to you to choose and Quick Learner: It takes 1 less post per 10 to learn a new technique. Must always post at least 2 posts to learn a technique. Rank 1 -1 also you get 2 skill points when you make your character so you wasted two skill points on those skills(gifted and quick learner) but there are hindering skills and you can put those in there too and they should look like this Uncreative Cannot create any custom techniques. +5 so you would have 5 skill points left to use on something and you can only have a max of 6 hindering skills ((more physical dicription and maybe a better Background, the background okay but kinda chezzy)) well thats all i see right now so do what i told you and you might get it approved and can an admin give him the "introductory thing" where it say welcome to NA and has the links to all the stuff.
Guest Shikyo Posted January 4, 2006 Posted January 4, 2006 FOR THE LAST TIME EXTREME ENDURANCE IS NOT A TECHNIQUE
Azure Posted January 4, 2006 Posted January 4, 2006 Secret Might is listed twice so i think you should find anoter technique instead of the second one because having two of the same thing doesn't do anytthing
Khaos Posted January 4, 2006 Posted January 4, 2006 1) I'd recommend you put your stats in multiples of 20. it'll make it easier for you in battle. 2) Since your character is perverted, you should have the correct skill. 3) You're unable to any of your techniques, your ninjutsu/genjutsu needs to be at least the same value as the cost f the jutsu. Advice: there's really no need for your stamina to be that high, take out like 50 or so and spread those points among other stats. Use these, seriously FAQBattle System Character Creation Basics Role Play Basics Official Locks
