Guest Avatara Posted January 30, 2006 Posted January 30, 2006 (edited) ~User Info~ -Username: Avatara -Posting:sometimes -Time Zone:Us/Canada ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Basics~ Name: Kazama Jin Village:sand Clan: n/a Age: 14 Gender: Male ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Appearance~ -Height: 5'11 -Weight:100lbs -Hair:short black -Eyes:dark red -Clothing: black shirt black jean shorts black jean jacket -Physical Description:many scars by his eye ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~History~ Background:His family is a rich family with a legacy to leave.They expect him to be the greatest member.So naturally he has a huge chip on his shoulder.But of course they did not get what they thought.From the moment he was born they knew he was a failure.he was determined to prove them wrong.As a family tradition he was enrolled into the the acadamey. So he trained harder and harder untill near death.He woke up in the hospital a week later in the hospital. When he got out he trained even harder.Untill his family got angry with him for making then seem like liars.So they dis owned him and kicked him out of the house.He now lives in an apartment the village gave him. He now trains as much as he wants as long as he wants. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Personality: Likes: peace and silience. Dislikes: class clowns, choas ~Favorite~ (Characters' favourite...) -Food:crab ragoon -Color:black -Music Genre:depends on his mood. -Book Genre:fiction -Hangout:outsides of town -(Any other favourites you want to add): ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Ninja Stats~ Rank:Gennin Level: ZERO TXP: 0 -Stats (out of 500)-0 (Health Power) 100 (Stamina) 40 (Chakra) 50 (Taijutsu) 50 (Defense) 50 (Ninjutsu) 50 (Resistance) 20 (Genjutsu) 30 (Concentration) 20 (Speed) 20 (Accuracy) 30 (Evasion) 20 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ (Checkout the General Skills page. If you are entering the academy do not fill this out yet.) Remaining Skill Points: (You start with 2) Skills: none Skills learned from Jounins: (These do not count towards your skill points limit. You must link to the topic in which you learned these skills) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Techniques~ Basic Academy Bunshin no Jutsu Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates illusionary replicas of the user. They are unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as good distractions. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you actually were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects:Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: Jutsus learned from Jounins: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Inventory~ Armor: -Head: -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s):Hitai-Ate -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weaponry: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon:none -Un-equipped Slot two:none -Un-equipped Slot three:none Items: -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, 4 Senbon Needles. -Items in Vault: Nothing. -Money on hand: $125 Animals: (If you want an animal you may purchase one via the market) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Update Log~ Character Approval: (Date, and by whom) Leveled up/Exp Earned: (Link to the topic where you gain exp. points. Make sure to include a description, the amount of exp. points gained, and whether it merited a level up) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Transactions~ (How much money you have spent, when, where, and who approved it) Buy: Sell: Reward: Loss: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Battle Log~ (Practice arena battles don't count. Make sure to link to the topics. Wins: Losses: Draws: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: Edited February 11, 2006 by Avatara
Guest kuratg Posted January 30, 2006 Posted January 30, 2006 Dude, it's NOT cool to post unfinished character sheets.
Guest Spirit Guide Posted January 31, 2006 Posted January 31, 2006 they think its funny? Well it isnt! They probably just don't understand the system so in other words. You've Been Noob'd
Azure Posted January 31, 2006 Posted January 31, 2006 (edited) look, if you want any respect around here fill it out i meen you probably didn't jave time then but if anything you at least you could have posted if half done then barley anything EDIT- i was alittle harsh....sorry Edited January 31, 2006 by Raizen
Guest Spirit Guide Posted January 31, 2006 Posted January 31, 2006 just for people to make sure it was just a joke even thoguh you could've saved it on word
Arashi Posted January 31, 2006 Posted January 31, 2006 To Kuratq, Spirit Guide and Raizen: Don't call others noobs, as all of you are very nooblish too. Avatara have said that he would finnihs it later, so I don't sees the problem. What you just did is called SPAM, and that isn't cool or respected here on NA...
Rei Posted February 1, 2006 Posted February 1, 2006 they think its funny? Well it isnt! They probably just don't understand the system so in other words.You've Been Noob'd <{POST_SNAPBACK}> *Slaps* for a new member to bad mouth another is taboo, if you honestly think you'll make friends here by doing that crap you're sadly mistaken. Cann't wait for you to make a mistake so I could do the same. More than likely he won't finish anytime soon or at all. No need for more posts.
Guest the99tailedfox Posted February 7, 2006 Posted February 7, 2006 ok you need two skills you have none. make your story longer gramer + spell check. two tecs. and you dont if you want your Hitai-Ate on your forearm than you need to erase one or the other
Guest the99tailedfox Posted February 10, 2006 Posted February 10, 2006 ok david i know your new at the site so ill save you the trouble of going to the Dot Com site. so you can only pick 2 of these justus and you have to put down the full dicription of the move.ok here you go Shield of Sand (Suna no Tate) Type: Ninjutsu (wind) Rank: Gennin Damage: N/A Cost/Effect: -Konoha Jutsu's = 3 chakra for every 1 damage -Kiri Jutsu = 3 chakra for every 1 damage -Suna Jutsu = 1 chakra for every 4 damage -Kumo Jutsu's = 1 chakra for every 2 damage -Iwa Jutsu= 1 chakra for every 4 damage -Kusa Jutsu = 2 chakra for every 1 damage -Oto Jutsu = 5 chakra for every 1 damage -Weapons = 1 chakra every 3 damage -Taijustu = 1 chakra for every 3 damage --If the opponent's applicable stat (taijutsu or ninjutsu or accuracy) is more than or equal to double the user's ninjutsu, then the shield is bypassed and the attack cannot be blocked. --If the opponent's applicable stat is more than or equal to the user's ninjutsu, then the chakra:damage ratio is halved, so that 1:2 will become 1:1. --If the opponent's applicable stat is less than or equal to half the user's ninjutsu, the ratio is doubled, so that 1:2 becomes 1:4. Description: The basic defense of the Wind ninja. This creates a shield of the element of Sand that can absorb any jutsus, taijutsu, or basic attacks in general. This shield is the one seen in the Naruto Anime. Third Eye (Daisan no Me) Type: Genjutsu (wind) Rank: Gennin Cost: 1 Damage: N/A Effect: Acts as a sensory input aside from the normal eyes of the ninja in all ways. Description: Uses fillaments of sand to create a small floating eyeball that will send feedback to the one who created it as if it were their own eyeball. Hurricane (Shippuu) Type: Ninjutsu (wind) Rank: Gennin Cost: 20 Damage: 10 Effect: This ability leaves an opponent staggered for their next post, cutting all attack attributes in half when trying to hit with any ranged attacks or jutsus. Description: A flurry of wind surrounds the target, spinning them wildly and lifting them a bit off the ground before slamming them back down. It does little damage, but leaves their perception highly skewered and makes ranged attack difficult. Wind God (Kaze Kami) Type: Ninjutsu (wind) Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 Damage: 25 Effect: Increase damage by 15 points if used against a member of an Earth based clan or village. Target immediatly is forced fourty feet away. Description: This is a straightforward attack for the most part, sending incredibly strong buffets of wind at the opponent and knocking them flying a good ways. It's beauty is against members of the opposite element, earth, where the wind, guided by some malignant force senses the chakra in them and buffets them for additional damage as they fly. Wind Blade (Kaze no Yaiba) Type: Ninjutsu (wind) Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 Damage: 20 Effect: A very hard to dodge and especially penetrating ttack. This attack reduces evasive skills used against it by 20 as well as ignoring any armor used against it. It must be used very close to melee range though. Description: A sword of wind that forces compressed air to cut through the target. Since it is so fast and hard to see it is hard to avoid, and the wind goes right through all defenses. Due to the tempermental nature of wind the blow only maintains enough force to be dangerous with ten feet though.
Guest sasukepwnz Posted February 11, 2006 Posted February 11, 2006 Alright i will try and help you out with this here are the problems, 1. If you are an academy student then you do not have the three basic jutsus henge no justsu, kawarimi, and bunshin no jutsu. You will recieve those upon graduation from the academy. 2. You have used 20 too many stat points, you used 520 when only 500 should be used. 3. Extend the background, look at some othe rpeople's sheets to kind of get an idea of the length of the backgrounds. 4. Remove all of the stuff that is in parenthesis then the sheet looks better, with the things in parenthesis looks like forgot to edit something out of it! Good luck with the sheet if you fix the things I listed the admins and the mods should approve.
