Guest Uncreative Username Posted February 12, 2006 Posted February 12, 2006 (edited) ~User Data~ -Username: Uncreative Username -Posting: At least once a day, unless something important keeps me away from the computer -Time Zone: EST ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Name: Sakurai Ryo Village: Kumo Clan: N/A Age: 11 and some months ~Appearance~ -Height: 4'10" -Weight: 80 -Hair Color: Light brown -Eye Color: Dark brown -Clothing: He dresses in dark, earth-tone colors, but mostly green. The style of clothing tends to vary, but he seems to prefer shorts to pants (due to a particular spar with a friend, during which he tripped over the long legs of his pants and thoroughly embarrassed himself). -Physical Description: Ryo has a normal tan from spending most of his time outside, being with his friends or training. He is less muscled than some boys his age, which accounts for his weakness in Taijutsu. There are a few scars on his body, small nothings from accidental cuts that went a little too deep. Story/Background: Ryo is fortunate to have two living parents, but sometimes he is secretly disappointed by them. Some people are the offspring of prodigies, of legends, or at the very least, someone who has earned a good reputation in the village. Both parents are more than capable fighters, but their personal quirks leave something to be desired. In general, they lack certain social skills and always seem awkward when interacting with others, which often leads to them being perceived as a bit strange. Ryo never wanted to be the best ninja in the village, merely one that people noticed and respected (as opposed to being viewed as his parents were), which is not the best motivation. He always had many acquaintances, but uses the word 'friend' sparingly, and only in his own mind -- he would never risk a confrontation. He's glad he was able to begin such relationships before his peers were old enough to be too judgmental. This is a crucial time in his life, as he is about to begin "real" training and he is only beginning to grow up. He still has a lot of time to change, to acquire new reasons for doing what he does, to have new goals and dreams. Of course, that's assuming he realizes that his "friends" might not always be his friends, and that being himself doesn't automatically mean that he'll be ridiculed. Personality: Not so much a "go-with-the-flow" type as a "change-with-the-flow" type, he tries to keep in control of a situation as much as possible, but then forces himself to adapt if/when it spirals out of control. Because he's continuously trying to change himself to fit different situations, he's very out of touch with himself, and therefore tries to make up for it by surrounding himself with others who are unique and confident. This is also due to a slight inferiority complex. Very energetic and extroverted on the surface, while much more reserved inside; likewise, Ryo is prone to making rash decisions in a crowd and taking more time to think them over when he's alone. Hopefully, as time goes by, he will learn to be himself more often and stand up to his companions. He wants to be a medic-nin in order to become more useful. Likes: Confident people. Knowledge. When people depend on him. Loyalty. Dislikes: Over-confident people. Dogs (but, for some odd reason, not wolves). Arguing/fighting with people he cares about. ~Favorite~ (What's your character's favorite…) -Food: Almost anything spicy, though he has a very low tolerance for it. -Color: Yellow -Book Genre: Historical fiction, and even some nonfiction Ninja Stats Level: 0 TXP: 0 -Stats(out of 500)- (Health Power) 60 (Stamina) 40 (Chakra) 40 (Taijutsu) 20 (Defense) 40 (Ninjutsu) 40 (Resistance) 40 (Genjutsu) 50 (Concentration) 50 (Speed) 40 (Accuracy) 40 (Evasion) 40 Skills: (Checkout the General Skills page)(you start off with +2 points) Automatic: +2 Characters start off with +2 points. The Seeing Mind: -2 You have studied Genjutsu for a very long time and can see through many of the 'less skilled' Genjutsu of your opponents. Your rank in this skill determines how many times you can ignore the effects of an enemy Genjutsu technique. Fearful: +1 Whenever an opponent uses a technique that can only be used by the ninja rank above your current one, you freeze up and lose one turn. Savior: -1 Once per team battle you may choose to take an attack in place of your ally without need for any rolls. Apply all armors against this attack regardless of if it is supposed to bypass armor or not. When you take the hit, you gain a +10 to the relevent defence skill. Cannot be used against Genjutsu. Self-defense: +2 Opponents always act first, no matter what. Adept Medic: -1 Healing Jutsus, and standard curative items are 10% more effective for each rank bought in this skill. Release Chakra: -1 A counter method to moves such as 64-points. So it restores use of chakra if it is sealed. This technique can not be performed on ones self, but may be used on others at will. Techniques: (Check out the technique page) Wish; Dream (Negai; Yume) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Damage: N/A Effect: -80 accuracy Description: The user becomes the person most desired (or cared for if they desire no one) by the target in their eyes. This makes it hard to strike them for obvious reasons. Feast of Famine(Chisou Futei) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 20 Damage: 20 Effect: If this technique hits then roll 1d100. Roll 35 or lower and you may strip the opponent of one armor piece or weapon of your choice for the remainder of the battle. Description: An oddly thick cloud engulfs the foe, strangling them and cutting off their breath. While distracted so the cloud goes to work on the opponent's more material belongings. Basic Academy Jutsus(Gained automatically upon character approval): Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: (you may start with up too two)(personally created jutsus MUST be approved in the Jutsu Creation forum.) N/A Armor: -Head: Village Amulet -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weapons: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items-- -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and 4 Needles -Items in Vault: Nothing -Money on hand: $125 Animals--(not requirement, mostly for clan stuff) N/A ~Update Log~ Character Approval: (date, and by whom) Leveled up: (when? link it please) Exp Earned: (when? where? why? link it please) ~Money Log~ (how much money you spent, when, and who approved it) ~Battle Log~ Wins: (against whom?) Losses: (against whom?) Draws: (against whom?) ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: Edited February 12, 2006 by Uncreative Username
Rei Posted February 12, 2006 Posted February 12, 2006 Pleas tell me why your character needs to start with five justu instead of two.
Guest the99tailedfox Posted February 12, 2006 Posted February 12, 2006 (edited) wait rei is right too many justus. (to Rei)-He probly didnt read that you need two justus. spell check. i might not be correct but you have too many skills.....and if you do or dont. you need to put the description of the skill. Edited February 12, 2006 by the99tailedfox
Azure Posted February 12, 2006 Posted February 12, 2006 if i did my math right, he would end up with 2 skill points left over, because the points cancel each other out, now if you're allowed to have that many skillsto start with, i don't know
Guest Sweet Neodaddy Posted February 12, 2006 Posted February 12, 2006 You're allowed as many skill points as hindrance permits. Six hindrances to start.
Guest the99tailedfox Posted February 12, 2006 Posted February 12, 2006 yea i was adding up the Automatic: +2 The Seeing Mind: -2 Fearful: +1 Savior: -1 Self-defense: +2 Adept Medic: -1 Release Chakra: -1 you start off with 2+2-2+1-1+2-1-1=2 i mean can you do that. cause if you can than he put on 2 more skills. i dont know we will have to ask a adman Raizen
Guest Uncreative Username Posted February 12, 2006 Posted February 12, 2006 Pleas tell me why your character needs to start with five justu instead of two. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Sorry. Fixed that. i might not be correct but you have too many skills.....and if you do or dont.you need to put the description of the skill. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> It says that you are given a +2 to begin with. That's what the "automatic: +2" means. I apologize if that wasn't clear. I added the descriptions, as well.
Guest kuratg Posted February 12, 2006 Posted February 12, 2006 How come, instead of writing out your character's name in his history/personality, you've got 'Name'? xD I'm guessing you forgot to edit that out.
Guest Uncreative Username Posted February 12, 2006 Posted February 12, 2006 Yikes. I edited so much that I overlooked the most obvious thing... ><;;
Guest Uncreative Username Posted February 16, 2006 Posted February 16, 2006 I don't mean to seem impatient, but I'd like to bring attention to the fact that it's been three days since anyone has posted in this topic. (If I still need to edit something, please don't hesitate to ask.)
Cloudnine Posted February 16, 2006 Posted February 16, 2006 Imma not a modmin. XP But good job. Everything looks great, its literate, exceptional vocabulary. ^^ Just...check out my sig. Shirahime's not related to your character in any way.
Guest Uncreative Username Posted February 20, 2006 Posted February 20, 2006 Is there a reason this topic has been ignored for another five days? (Should I be PMing someone about this?) Agh. I apologize if I seem rude or annoying. I understand that mods have lives outside of the forum and all of that. ><;;;
Rei Posted February 20, 2006 Posted February 20, 2006 (edited) Tip: Unless you plan on becoming a medical Shinobi don't dabble in their skills. Is there a reason this topic has been ignored for another five days? (Should I be PMing someone about this?) People have lives unless you find a way to draw their attention they won't bother looking. Edited February 20, 2006 by Rei
shizuki Posted February 20, 2006 Posted February 20, 2006 Mmm...Rei does have a point. Unless you're going full medic, it's not advised to take medic stuff. Otherwise, approved.
Guest Uncreative Username Posted February 21, 2006 Posted February 21, 2006 (edited) Tip: Unless you plan on becoming a medical Shinobi don't dabble in their skills.People have lives unless you find a way to draw their attention they won't bother looking. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Very energetic and extroverted on the surface, while much more reserved inside; likewise, Ryo is prone to making rash decisions in a crowd and taking more time to think them over when he's alone. Hopefully, as time goes by, he will learn to be himself more often and stand up to his companions. He wants to be a medic-nin in order to become more useful. Agh. I apologize if I seem rude or annoying. I understand that mods have lives outside of the forum and all of that. ><;;; <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Edited February 21, 2006 by Uncreative Username