Guest Itako Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 shikka-naru: first, you defile Shikamaru's name. Second, you called me a boy. Third, that was utter complete spam. TAKE IT SOMEWHERE ELSE.
Guest shannon _mcintyre Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 (First WHO IS THIS SHIKA NARA GUy two HES SPAMMING ON SOMEONES CHARACTER SHEET three Whatcha mean about my sentence structer can I have an example pm it to me so it wont be spam)
Guest Itako Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 If you can't type in proper sentences in your posts, that's enough evidence for me that you don't have good structure.
Guest shannon _mcintyre Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 PROVE IT ON MY CHARACTER SHEET (sorry for the spam)
Guest Itako Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 Shannon: ... yeah, I can't actually *see* your character sheet. And sentence structure should apply to *everything* you write, not just your character sheet.
Guest shannon _mcintyre Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 (edited) "Urgh" he then mutters to himself "not like you actually do it either" ((anyway we are suppose to be here to leave comments for this character sheet so my apologies for all of this but remeber that bit of advice ok)) Edited June 6, 2006 by shannon _mcintyre
Guest Itako Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 .... "And that, class, is an example of terrible sentence structure," she concluded.
Guest shannon _mcintyre Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 ((And that class is an example of serious spamming now compare whats worst))
Guest Itako Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 (edited) The fact that you're determined to have the last word is admirable, but you're just as much a hypocrite (in regards to the spam) as me. And yay, I've made myself an enemy. I think. -edit- I'm really done this time. I've made my enemy. I'm fine. -edit- And the grammar thing is worse, trust me. Edited June 7, 2006 by Itako
Seigen Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 (edited) (Sorry for spam)Guys(And females) can you stop spamming the man's sheet. If you really want to argue, pm each other or go to the spam forum. Edit. And ditichi, my from the looks of it, all you need to do is expand your personality a little more and maybe give yourself some more heath(dont have to) and you should be straight Edited June 6, 2006 by Hitsugaya Toushiro
Guest shannon _mcintyre Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 (Urgh consider me an rival, im defenatly looking forward for the next chunin exams)
Guest Rei-Chun Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 My word, more than eighty posts on one sheet with no approval to how for it. Just to make everything a lot easier I'll point out most of the flaws on your sheet. There was a war going on between them and the village hidden in the Rocks. Only the two Kages know how it started. David's parents were fighting in it. Secret wars are few and far between, even if they exist each side needs people to fight. A war between two people is more of a fight or encounter. Also, if only the Leaders knew about the ‘war' how did his partners fight in it? It's wise to note Iwa (stone/Rock) is a Superpower nation whole Oto (sound) is a newer village. Unless the generations have give Oto more power, money and influence they'd fall to the Stone nation within days. Kashuni was very mean beacause he had a very bad experience as a child and he kidnapped David. No one knows anything about it. It's hard to believe a kidnaping could take place and no one knew about it. Logically his parents would know the following day. His other goal is to kill Kashuni when he gets older for revenge of his brothers death. Huh? His bother was never brought up in the story nor was his death. Unless written perfectly by the Academy standard reneger sorties aren't welcome. Please explain how he ended up in Kusa.
Azure Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 1- you have that a stat is gifted so you must put it in the skill section of your sheet just put Gifted[insert stat here]-1 2-You must put what you can summon on the contract maneger skill. You can create your own or get permission from a creator of an approved one.
