Cellar Door

Point taken.

Grandma dissing is wrong.

That's my input... but you're going to want to wait and hear what the admins and mods say about it.

Yeah... there's nothing cool about living to be old and wrinkly. It's really just kind of sad.

I've never liked Panic. I Write Sins Not Tragedies turned me off to them. You probably have a 100% chance of living longer than me... I smoke and do other things that are bad for you.

Even though you've been on the site longer than me... I'm still gonna say hi and welcome (It's because I'm older than you... I'm welcoming you to life!) I'm also gonna say "Panic At The Disco! WTF?" but that's about it. You're a cutie by the way. (I know, that's creepy on many levels... I'm kidding... don't run away.)

Hahaha... yeah, I was in a bad mood earlier. Sorry Az... I didn't mean to sound like a total bastard. (I'm a lot of bastard... but not all...) Next, you should probably tweak your jutsu effects. Taijutsu attacks don't use chakra. That makes the description confusing. You could make it a Taijutsu/Ninjutsu combination, and if I were you I'd make the cost of the attack variable. 10 stamina and 10 chakra per x amount of damage... just to make it more fair. I mean if somebody is dealing a whole lot of damage... kicking their ass right back for 60 points is a lot unfair. This is also going to sound picky, but you are incompetent. You meant you're bad at typing but you aren't ignorant. It's a picky thing... but knowing that kind of thing isn't bad. Trust me. Ignorant = Lacking knowledge in something. Incompetent = Unable to perform an action to the correct effect. Have you made a character yet?

I'm in a good mood tonight, so I'm going to give you some constructive criticism. I won't even begin to address the actual effects of the jutsu, until you fix the eye rending syntax errors you posted. I've seen worse, but you're not going to get anything approved like that. Here are some easy steps to keep in mind when making something legible. A- Capitilize the first letter of every sentence, proper nouns, and anything else the author deems important. (I know you tried hard with the capitilization, but you missed one... go find it.) B- Commas, and the other literary tools lumped into the punctuation category are used to make a work of prose more easily understood... not more confusing. Remove uneeded commas, and add needed ones. C- When trying to glean information from text, the reader (me) likes to understand a sentence without have to guess at what word the writer (you) had unsuccesfully tried to convey. In a simplified vernacular... spellcheck it. D- That first sentence under the "Effects" category actually gave me tourette's syndrome. You're gonna want to fix that one, before we're all screaming obscenities at strangers. (WTF?) If you follow the rules I've listed, you're posts henceforth should not make people want to gouge out their own eyeballs with blunt instruments. Also, fragmented and run-on sentences, while not unnaceptable are generally frowned upon, and thought of as sloppy in this wide, wide world of language. Lastly, If you're going to join, and/or speak in an area populated by people of above average intelligence... please, and I cannot stress this enough, at least make an effort to be intelligent as well. (i.e. Look at the date of threads, don't post in dead threads, use correct grammar and sentence formation... etc)

Shijo... really. You get owned everytime you post. I can tell you why that is. One, you use smileys much too much. Two, U use in7ern3t language. Those are both bad. Did this thread have a purpose, other than French, hotness and owning?

A flaming stick enhances any situation... arson makes me lawl.

... Then hit them with a stick?

Don't be sad Smexy, there's nothing funnier than punching a flaming japanese child.

@ Smexy: Yeah, I love Stairway... and I used to love Sir Page until he decided to let P. Diddy make a song to the beat of Kashmir... Do you like Black Dog? @ Ichi: I like a lot of music, but I've been really into Godsmack lately. Any of the old classic rock bands are pretty good in my book, and most of the newer punk rock/emo bands have their merits. Just ask me about other bands. @ Kidori: Yeah, I've been to Grants Pass a few times. Nice place.

Yeah... It's tough being legal. Stupid sexy babies. (Disclaimer: KC does not find statutory rape funny in anyway...)

ZOMG! Can I touch your special area?

I live about forty miles south-east of Eugene/Springfield in a tiny little town called Oakridge. By southern... do you mean like Klamath Falls?

Name: Kevin, or KC (I've also been known to go by El Bandito, and Gargauth The Slayer.) Age: Eighteen Birthday: December 16 City: This one in Oregon. Grade: Senior Job: Painter, Bookseller, Cowboy, Carpenter, Jedi Knight, Pimp New to NA?: Yep. Favorite Type of Music: Rock Favorite Band(s): Led Zeppelin Favorite Song(s): "Ghost Riders In The Sky," - Spiderbait Favorite Type of Game: Shooter Favorite Game(s): Gears Of War, Halo 3, and of course Goldeneye (For the N64) Favorite System(s): X-Box 360 Overall Personality: Cynical Bastard BF//GF: Nope Relationships Good or Bad? Why?: Generally bad, I have commitment issues. Looking for that "special someone": Not even a little bit. Hobbies: Guitar, Free Lance Mercenary Work, Video Games, Philosophy Favorite Food(s): Sushi (I despise Ebi... nasty shrimp) Favorite Color(s): Black, Grey, Green Favorite Animal(s): Something with sharp nasty fangs, and talons... bunnies. Favorite Word(s): Seabass Favorite Phrase(s): "Smurfs are asexual. They don't even have anything under those little, white, pants." -Donnie Darko Favorite Books(s): Fight Club Favorite Article of Clothing(s): My Converse How long have you been reading/watching Naruto: A couple of years. Who is your favorite character: Zabuza... always has been, always will be. (It's the lack of eyebrows... sexy stuff.) Watch any other animes? If so which ones?: Cowboy Bebop, Tri-gun, Outlaw Star, and of course Gundam Wing.