Ichigo

Went with a slight redo of this

Ya, i was not taking the bleed as a 2:3 ratio but rather at face value. I think a lot of people had that notion. Fixed.

Plasma Bolt Type | Ninjutsu | Plasma Rank | Sennin Cost | 524 Chakra Damage | 246 Effect | This technique inflicts with 1 turn of status effect 'Burning; 450.' 3 Turns Migrane Description | Summoning a massive chakra pulse through the air around her, Hikari focuses on a point towards her target. Gathering the chakra into a finite point she unleashes a massive bolt of molten plasma chakra at her enemy. JP | 9

Done and Done!

Storm Cloud Defender Type: Ninjutsu | Lightning Rank: Sennin Cost: 555 Chakra Damage: 0 Effect: Grants Haste 3 Turns | Creates a Sand Shield around the user with 900 HP. Lasts for four (4) turns. | Usable twice per battle | May be used on an ally. Description: Creating a swirling lightning storm that surrounds the user. The electric field can repel attacks aimed towards them. Elements and physical attacks bounce off the shield as the cloud of lightning continues to surround the body cloaking them in an elemental armor. JP: 9

Lightning Scar Type | Ninjutsu |Lightning Rank | Jonin Cost | 205 Chakra Damage | 102 Effect | Inflicts 1 Turn of 'Burning' 200. 1 Turn of Deafened Description | Summoning chakra into her finger tips Hatake Tane unleashed a precision bolt of Lightning. The immense heat from the jutsu is aimed directly at the center of the opponent sending a surge of electric shocks through their body causing sever burning. The sound from the crackling lightning causes damage to the ears and disorientation. JP | 5 Lightning Scar II Type | Ninjutsu |Lightning Rank | Sennin Cost | 430 Chakra Damage | 210 Effect | Inflicts 1 turn of 'Burning' 300. Deafened 2 turns. Slow 2 turns Description | Summoning chakra into her finger tips Hatake Tane unleashed a precision bolt of Lightning. The immense heat from the jutsu is aimed directly at the center of the opponent sending a surge of electric shocks through their body causing sever burning. The sound from the crackling lightning causes damage to the ears and disorientation. Jolts of shocks continue to reverberate throughout the battle causing spasms that slow down her opponent. JP | 7

Lawlz, I don't judge

Ichi: Choke me hardy daddy Eeeechi: wut? Ichi: Wut?

I love the school uniform! I like how the lesser cooler Ichigo's thread turned into a kink

Touche, I just typed in Anime Dildo Gif, and i didn't get what I was looking for. Well not what I was looking for in a certain aspect, if you know what I mean MUAHAHAHAHAHAH

#Dildos Every gif I saw was NSFW. MY EYES!

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Flavour | For sure man, I didn't know about any of the Oto stuff, if you have information about the current state, that would be fantastic as I took my info from the Naruto era. As for an Organization, I have no issues with that. Affinity | Will change to meet you're requirements. Reaping | Don't mind dropping Everlasting| Will add that effect. I was focused on just adding an extra turn of the effect. Like others that add say 1 more turn of Afraid or whatever. But the damage does out weigh 30 CP of a status effect. Bloodletting Ill think of something that fits to have 3 skills. For the Jutsu, open to anything about it.

To my knowledge no one has attempted this. I made it more of a skill based system with no actual bloodline as Hidan was just insane and earned his 'immortality' by sacrificing people to Jashin. I made it a staple of the AS to sacrifice a life every 3 months to keep with the flavour. I also made it revolve around the Jutsu in order to actually do the damage from the show.

Jashin| | Death Controlling Possessed Blood Description:Little of Jashin and his ways is known to those who aren't his followers, so named "Jashinists". Jashin demands nothing less than utter death and destruction. In Akatsuki Hiden, Hidan frames this as a public service, saving people from the fear of death by killing them. Not much is known about Jashinism but has come up several times throughout the shinobi wars. Thought to have started in Yugakure no Sato when the country started to decline from a military shinobihood to a more passive tourist country. Despite this unique and terrifying ability the Jashin faith do not posses a kekkei genkai but rather powerful skills and jutsu. Jashin| | Death Controlling Possessed Blood Restrictions | -Must Role Play a human sacrifice once every three months (real time). Can be a PC or NPC or they will lose their Jashin favor. -Ranks may be taken every 15 levels Jashin | Affinity Effect. When user takes bleeding damage it is reduced by 10% per rank. Description:. Relishing in the spilt blood during a battle members earn a respect for the precious life liquid and have mastered ways to hinder themselves from losing to much blood during a fight. Restrictions : A 5 post thread to properly etch and place the symbol on the weapon of choice. Must sacrifice a human life to seal the symbol. (Can be NPC not a PC) Maximum Ranks | 5 Cost: -1 per rank Jashin | Everlasting Effect: When this character afflicts an opponent with the status effect 'Bleeding', that opponent is afflicted for an additional turn of 'Bleeding' after the current affliction ends that deals x damage, where x is 20% of the total 'Bleeding' damage afflicted Description: Mastering the ability of inflicting bleeding increases their chances to exploit enemies and make them suffer for longer. Cost: -1 Jashin | Bloodletting Effect: Description: Maximum Ranks: Cost: -1 per Rank Curse Jutsu: Death Possession Blood Type: Ninjutsu | Forbidden Rank: Chuunin Cost: 250 Chakra Damage: None Effects: RP Effect: Members that possess this jutsu have the ability to perform rituals that allow their bodies and the bodies of humans that have been linked and bound by blood. When performing the ritual any vital point pierced causing death would be halted to the member that belongs to the Jashin Faith while the opponent ceases to live. Battle Effects | Once the user and the opponent have been bound together, only by adding the effect ‘bleeding’ may they become bound. Once the user obtains the blood they must ingest it and start the ritual. Once the user is inside the ritual circle and damage done to them, or the opponent is reflected back to both. Full modifiers are added when performing jutsu. Full Defense and Concentration modifiers are added to both parties involved. Description: The ritualistic summoning circle that everyone should fear. Once the user obtains the blood on their enemy that make a ritualistic circle on the ground that is made from blood. Once inside the circle both the user and the opponent become bound. Once the user has ingested the blood from their prey they transform into a black and white menace. With the power from their faith in Jashin magnifies their immortality and are able to inflict jutsu on themselves and damaging their linked opponent. Points: 10

Molten Distortion Type | Ninjutsu |Lightning | | Rank | Jonin Cost | 281 Chakra Damage | 210 Effect | Inflicts with 1 turn of status effect 'Burning; 105.' 1 turn Fazed, 2 Turns Frozen Description | Mixing both specialties Tane, summons massive waves of fire and lightning to create an energy storm of chakra. Sending the massive wave of chakra into her opponent it causes lingering burning and jolts of electric shocks that continue throughout the battle. JP | 7 Molten Distortion II Type | Ninjutsu |Lightning | Rank | Sennin Cost | 512 Chakra Damage | 405 Effect | Inflicts 1 turn of status effect 'Burning; 294.' 1 turn Fazed, 2 turns Frozen Description | Mixing both specialties, Tane summons massive waves of fire and lightning to create an energy storm of chakra. Sending the massive wave of chakra into her opponent it causes lingering burning and jolts of electric shocks that continue throughout the battle. JP | 8

Raging Light Fang Type | Ninjutsu |Lightning Rank | Jonin Cost | 240 Chakra Damage | 210 Effect | Blind 2 turns. Description | Focusing chakra into her body Tane transforms the air around her. Massing a surge of electric current she sends a massive bolt of lightning through her torso and out her palm. The massive bolt is molten hot and has the ability to melt flesh from bones. JP | 6 Raging Light Fang II Type | Ninjutsu | Lightning Rank | Sennin Cost | 360 Chakra Damage | 300 Effect | Blind 2 Turns. Scorched 2 Turns. Description | Focusing chakra into her body Tane transforms the air around her. Massing a surge of electric current she sends a massive bolt of lightning through her torso and out her palm. The massive bolt is molten hot and has the ability to melt flesh from bones. Must like its previous version this one has other properties that make it hotter. JP | 6 Blind | 50 CP | 2 Turns=100 CP Scorched | 30 CP | 2 Turns = 60CP

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Hakkō Chakura Ken| White Light Chakra Long Sword| 白光チャクラけん The Midnight Blade Weapon Type: Long Sword Size: Medium Level: 30 Attributes: +240 Evasion | [White Chakra Release] Unique Chakra Blade Description: The Hakkō Chakura Ken was created much like many of the sister blades that are found throughout the Hatake Clan, as a tool for advancement. This particular weapon was made by a Hatake Tane's father as a gift for the young girl. The long sword weight, shape and design were all made specifically with Tane's fighting style, augmenting her unique strengths. Specifically, it takes advantage of her nimble frame and gives her expanded reach to compliment her overall physical build. Cost: 両 980 1200$ Stats 50$ Chakra Blade WIP

Selling back both of these | Hakkō Chakura Ken| White Light Chakra Rapier| 白光チャクラけん The Midnight Blade Weapon Type: Rapier Size: Medium Level: 30 Attributes: +120 Evasion | [White Chakra Release], Unique Lightning Inlay Description: The Hakkō Chakura Ken was created much like many of the sister blades that are found throughout the Hatake Clan, as a tool for advancement. This particular weapon was made by a Hatake Tane's father as a gift for the young girl. The rapier's weight, shape and design were all made specifically with Tane's fighting style, augmenting her unique strengths. Specifically, it takes advantage of her nimble frame and gives her expanded reach to compliment her overall physical build. Cost: 両 980 Hakkō Chakura Ken| White Light Chakra Rapier | 白光チャクラけん The Ethereal Edge Weapon Type: Rapier Size: Medium Level: 10 Attributes: +120 Evasion | [White Chakra Release], Unique Lightning Inlay Sharpened Edge - +10% to base damage on weapon, rounded up. Razor Edge - +20% to base damage on weapon, rounded up. This replaces "Sharpened Edge". Pristine Edge: +30% to base damage on weapon, rounded up. Description: Much like Tane's first Rapier this blade mirrors it almost identically except the colour is that of the sun. It's expert craftsmanship allows the elegance of power and speed by design. Cost: 両 980 Bringing me back to 980 from both.

Nice work :)

Roger

Not to bad for a first sheet. I would personally remake the sheet and have multiple posts. I would have 1 post for basic info. One for persona and favs, 1 for background. 1 for skills. 1 for jutsu. 1 for logs. also when copy and pasting from other sources hit CTRL+Shift+v and it will paste as basic text and none of the background or the coding. Also, the quoting everything seems unnecessary. As for content. I would toss in some more info about her Persona, besides Angry. Background. I would toss in some info about her being at the Academy, and things she did there. She is 17, and still a Gennin? Not sure if you were going for that but most the gennin would be 11-14. But at the end of the day its 100% up to you, but explaining to us why she is a Gennin at 17 would get us into your thought process.

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