Saturnal

http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/topic/41603-helation-no-jutsu/

Okay so after a few tweaks here and there and discussing with other members I have moved the Helation Techniques and applicable jutsu to this thread. The changes are satisfyingly simplified in this way to meet up with the vision I had in mind for them.

So after considering what was said by princess, I added the rules portion verbatum' to the skill Helation Mastery. As that is where the ability to form them is placed. I really like the limit of turns being able to use them. The link to this skill is now in the technique.

Thank you all for contribution and support, I just discovered the self-defense skill and will be going forward with it. So at this point scrapping this skill.

Revised the previous jutsu into a skill. Also took away AoE.

Helation Rules -A Helation is a non-targetable construct that lasts four turns from the phase it was created in. -The maximum number of Helations that can exist at any one time is 10X, where X is equal to the user's rank (ie gennin=1, chuunin=2). -Helations may only be utilised by techniques which explicitly state they use Helations. -At the end every turn, destroy any Helations controlled by a character that doesn't possess Combinatorial; Light. -Helations can also be utilized to illuminate an area of 10x feet radius and manipulated freely as long as the user can see it. (X=number of Helation on the field) Name: Helation Technique Type: Ninjutsu [Light] Rank: Genin Cost: 10x Chakra Effect: Create x Helations. X may never be more than 5 Description: Weaving seals, the user is able to create rings of light. JP: 3 Name: Helation Technique II Type: Ninjutsu [Light] Rank: Chunin Cost: 10x Chakra Effect: Create x Helations. X may never be more than 10 Description: Weaving hand seals, the user is able to create rings of light. JP: 4 (Evolving 1; Helation Technique) Name: Afterglows Edge Type: Ninjutsu (Light) Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 Chakra + (1) Helation to add status effect: Impaired Eyesight. Damage: 30 Effects: An attack that hardens the particles of light comprising x number of 'Helations' to the maximum of 10, named “Helations.” (X=rank gennin=2, chunnin=6, jounin=10) May remove a Helation from the field to add status effect: impaired eyesight. Description: The Helation spins, oscillating a razor-sharp edge, it is then shot out at opponent(s). JP: 3 Name: Light Refraction Type: Ninjutsu [Light] Rank: Genin Requirement: There is at least 1 Helation on the field Cost: 20 Chakra + x Helations Effect: User creates a shield of light with 20 health plus 10x health Description: Weaving hand seals, the user stretches the light particles of a single Helation to be used as a shield. JP: 1

Edits have been made to reflect the suggestions to validate the hindrance.

Skill Name: Procrastinator Description: Someone who is hesitant to act/always waiting till the last minute to act. Effect: Cannot perform any response phase jutsu for the first three turns of battle. Requirement: (none) Cost: +1sp