tygerin Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 (edited) Name: Yajū: Pinsāgādo | Wild Beast Style: Pincer Guard v1 Type: Taijutsu [Weapon: Morning Star | Wild Beast | Barrier] Rank: Chuunin Cost: 150 Barrier Health: 200 Effects: Response phase jutsu to protect user and ends with the response phase. Used in the response phase with a 5% chance to fail while losing their setup and main phases. If a melee-range Taijutsu attack deals damage to the barrier created by this technique the user of that attack is subject to the effects of any special abilities or attributes of the user's equipped weapon. Used twice per battle Description: The practitioner of Weeping Widow and Silent Sister crosses their arms with the weapons in hand, creating a barricade made of blades and in front of the user. As the blades itself run along the shaft and tip of the weapons, it causes damage to the unbeknownst attacker. Points: 6 +1 JP for weapon jutsu Weapon: +30 CP Name: Yajū: Pinsāgādo | Wild Beast Style: Pincer Guard v2 Type: Taijutsu [Weapon: Morning Star | Wild Beast | Barrier] Rank: Jounin Cost: 380 Barrier Health: 680 Effects: Response phase jutsu to protect user and ends with the response phase. Used in the response phase with a 5% chance to fail while losing their setup and main phases. If a melee-range Taijutsu attack deals damage to the barrier created by this technique the user of that attack is subject to the effects of any special abilities or attributes of the user's equipped weapon. Used twice per battle Description: The practitioner of Weeping Widow and Silent Sister crosses their arms with the weapons in hand, creating a barricade made of blades and in front of the user. As the blades itself run along the shaft and tip of the weapons, it causes damage to the unbeknownst attacker. Points: 8 [Evolved; 2 | Pincer Guard v1] +1JP Weapon: +40 CP Name: Yajū: Pinsāgādo | Wild Beast Style: Pincer Guard v3 Type: Taijutsu [Weapon: Morning Star | Wild Beast | Barrier] Rank: Sennin Cost: 900 Barrier Health: 1700 Effects: Response phase jutsu to protect user and ends with the response phase. Used in the response phase with a 5% chance to fail while losing their setup and main phases. If a melee-range Taijutsu attack deals damage to the barrier created by this technique the user of that attack is subject to the effects of any special abilities or attributes of the user's equipped weapon. Used twice per battle Description: The practitioner of Weeping Widow and Silent Sister crosses their arms with the weapons in hand, creating a barricade made of blades and in front of the user. As the blades itself run along the shaft and tip of the weapons, it causes damage to the unbeknownst attacker. Points: 14 [Evolved; 6 | Pincer Guard v2] +1JP Weapon: +50 Link to weaponry Edited December 1, 2017 by tygerin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cellar Door Posted November 30, 2017 Share Posted November 30, 2017 This will probably need to say "If a melee-range Taijutsu attack deals damage to the barrier created by this technique the user of that attack is subject to the effects of any special abilities or attributes of the user's equipped weapon." That makes it more clear, but I would also like to see a link to the weapon in question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tygerin Posted December 1, 2017 Author Share Posted December 1, 2017 edited the effects and added a link to the weaponry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cellar Door Posted December 2, 2017 Share Posted December 2, 2017 I would be more okay with this if it were a main-phase thing, if it had a higher chance to fail, or if it had a cool down. Right now, you can get some serious benefits for negating a technique and only have a 5% chance to fail. Getting exposed and bleeding on somebody is basically as good as making an attack on that turn. So you could:Make it a Main Phase Barrier This would broadcast your intentions beforehand and give your enemy the chance to choose how to deal with you. I think it's a fine option, and allows for counterplay without really compromising the integrity of your technique.Give it a bigger Fail Chance Increasing the fail chance on this would make it more like performing an attack to block an attack, and if you missed, you would still get hit, but if you hit, you'd handle the attack and then the enemy would take shots from your weapon. It'd need to be like a 50% chance to fail to be acceptable to me.Give yourself a cool-down Not being able to use another Response Phase Jutsu for 2 turns after this would also be an acceptable method of handling this to me. It would prevent you from spamming it against every attack, which would obviously cripple a taijutsu fighter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tygerin Posted December 2, 2017 Author Share Posted December 2, 2017 Two turn cooldown then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cellar Door Posted December 2, 2017 Share Posted December 2, 2017 Yeah, that would be acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pwnzie Posted December 11, 2017 Share Posted December 11, 2017 Approved! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
