My REAL character creation Part 1...

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Timezone: MST // GMT -7
Posting: 1-2 times per week
Character Slot: 3

Basic Info

Name:  Akio Akiyama
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Rank: Gennin
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Village: Konoha village
Birthday: February 9th

 

Appearance

 

Hair: short and black. Straight.
Eyes: Black
Height: 5"3"
Weight: 160 lbs
Skin: Peach

 

 

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Edited December 8, 2020 by Naruto Uzumaki

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Description: Akio is an outgoing young man. He always has on an old purple and black yoroi. His most noticeable feature is that his eyes shine like stars in the black night. Sitting below his bold, black eyebrows. The rest of the kid's features: rustled hair, bold cheek bones, are equally well sculpted. He has a face that is very recognizable. Like a kid who was playing in the dirt for some time. 

 

The The kid's hair is short and black, but in a bright light you can see some grey highlights. His hair stays rough most of the time, and is known to be the center of attention at all times. To keep his hair natural he combs it and shakes it to make it look rough.

 

In most situations, Akio is dressed in an old ninja yoroi that his father gave him when he was 6. For times when he must serve the Hidden Leaf, the only thing he changes is he puts one his his hidden leaf headband and some black sandals.

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Overview: Outgoing, loud, smart
Likes: Noodles, taijutsu, comedy
Dislikes: soft noises, being organized

Personality: Akio is a you listen here kind of guy. He is loud, but nice. Courageous and he has a very strong work ethic. He really has too personalities. At times he can be loud and obnoxious but when it's time he can be calm and thoughtful.

 

He likes to live out his life to the fullest. If one were to ask the kid for his opinion on anything he would hesitate to tell you what he is really thinking. The capability to stay calm and collected in even the most stressful of situations is possibly the kid's greatest talent.

 

Even though he is nice and outgoing on the outside, on the inside he is a bloodthirsty and kill worthy kid. To say that Akio is not a worthy ninja would be a mistake. While he might be laughing and playing on the outside he is always thinking if ways he could defeat you in battle.

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Arata akiyama: Akio's father, and idol. While he was a kid his father went into battle with a powerful enemy and almost died , but luckily he got up and fought to win. Despite almost dying to a man with one eye, the man has a strong capability to manipulate and get his way in battle. Arata is always ninja ready. Arata and akio go out and about anywhere because the powerful man is always ready to fight. Though he is a strong man, and still manages to protect his wife and kids, arata is still a family man. 

Aimi Akiyama: Akio’s mother is a woman of strength and stealth. She doesn't get spoted at all during battle. If ever going against her you must have great power or you will be lucky enough to get out alive. She is the wife of Arata, when arata and aimi were young they would always find an open palce to fight, once they did they would always play tricks on each other to get them off track. That is why she is so stealthy and arata is so manipulative. 

 

 

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Akio grew up in the noble family of Akiyama the son of a powerful ninja and a wise mother.He was born as an only child. Early life was mostly civilian, though Akio's  mother would often stress the importance of keeping a sharp knife in one’s purse. From his formative years, Akio was told that he would one day be a fine warrior like his mother and father. However, it was not until the NCIA was stripped away that the kid’s dream became a reality. 

 

Before the military coup, the family had lived on the sprawling Akiyama compound in konoha. In the final years of the regime they moved to the family’s vacation home in the coastal city of Arrakis. It was a decision Anazeru now openly regrets, as his wife became taken with the warm climate of Arrakis and somehow managed to convince her husband to let her and Akio stay in konoha permanently.

 

For now, Akio splits her time between attending his duties for the family and fulfilling missions for the Hidden leaf in the village and the surrounding country side. His father’s wishes have held him back in the shinobi world and he has fallen behind her classmates – some are now Chuunin, including Shiori – but Kozakura is determined to be successful in both her civilian and shinobi lives.

 

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Level: 0
Rank: Gennin
Total Experience: 000
Next Level: 0/400
Total Stats: 800

Health: 70
Chakra: 20
Stamina: 30
Ninjutsu: 40
Genjutsu: 40
Taijutsu: 20
Concentration: 100
Defence: 20
Speed: 140
Accuracy: 50
Evasion: 60

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Ninjutsu Mod: +10

Genjutsu Mod: +4 Ghost Damage, +10 Stat Drain, -10 Stat Drain.
Concentration Mod: +5% to hit with Genjutsu; +11% incl. Path of the Mesmer, -2% Ninjutsu cost, +5% to dodge Genjutsu.
Defence Mod: -5
Speed Percentile: 286
Accuracy: --
Evasion: +6% to dodge physical attacks.
Passive Critical Chance: 1%

 

Point Total: 6
Total Spent: 3
Total Left: 3
Gains:

2 – Creation
2 – Adv Seal Taijutsu & Accuracy

2 – Poor Stamina Manipulation

 

Spent On:

0 – Subtle Elements; Wind

0 – Genjutsu Shaper Rank 2
1 – Path of the Mesmer

2 – Second Wind

 

Character Skills
 

Path Related Skills:

Path of the Mesmer: For every 100 points in Concentration, this character gains an additional +1% to hit with Genjutsu based attacks. May gain 2 ranks of 'Merchant' for 1 skill point. Gain 3 ranks of 'Genjutsu Shaper' for free. (-1)

 

Clan Skills:

Null: N/A

 

Elemental Skills:

Subtle Elements; Wind: May use Wind element techniques. Any response phase techniques that blocks a Wind Techniques costs an additional 10% to use, rounded up. All 5 “Subtle Element” skills share ranks. (0)

 

Ninjutsu Skills:

Null: N/A

 

Genjutsu Skills:

Genjutsu Shaper R2: For every rank in this skill, status effects the user inflicts with Genjutsu on opponents have a chance to last one post longer based on the opponent's dodge roll. This will not allow you to break the maximum post duration of any status effect. On a dodge roll of 1-40, status effects last one turn longer. (0)

 

General Skills:

Second Wind: Once per battle, if the user's health would be reduced to zero or less, the user's health is reduced to 1 instead. If the user's health would be reduced below -25% of its total then this skill does not come into effect. (-2)

 

Teacher Trained Skills:

 Null: N/A

 

Hindering Traits:

Poor Stamina Manipulation: Before using a Taijutsu technique, roll a d10. On 1or2 Jutsu fails. You may not take another action this turn, but the stamina is not lost. May not have Sealed Taijutsu (+2)

 

Advancement Seal (Taijutsu and Accuracy): You are considered to have 80% of the base stat points in the chosen stat, rounded up. May only be taken once per stat. (+2)

Point Total:  4
Spent: 2
Remaining: 2
Gains:

4 – Creation

Spent On:

2 – Kaze Kame

 

 

 

Techniques

 

Kaze Kami | Wind God

Type: Ninjutsu [Wind]
Rank: Gennin
Cost: 30 Chakra
Damage: 30
Description: This is a straightforward attack for the most part, sending incredibly strong buffets of wind at the opponent and knocking them flying a good ways. It's beauty is against members of the opposite element, earth, where the wind, guided by some malignant force senses the chakra in them and buffets them for additional damage as they fly.
Points: 2