Blood Technique Resub

[K Mitsuhide]

Original HERE

Name: Ketsueki Heki (Blood Rend)

Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: Gennin, Shuurajou Clan Member

Cost: 23x Chakra (x being the number of crimson needles in the enemy’s bloodstream used)

Damage: 15x

Effects: 5x Bleed Damage per turn for 2 turns, any crimson needles used then dissipate. (3 Crimson Needles maximum)

Description: The Shuurajou clan member uses their own chakra-infused blood which is circulating through their opponents body to tear small gashes in their flesh. The blood that was torn out of their bodies then dissipates.

Points: 4

Name: Shinku Kei (Crimson Whip) Rank 1

Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: Gennin, Shuurajou Clan Member

Cost: (2.5)x Health, 30 Chakra (2x Chakra per turn of upkeep, to a maximum of 6 turns. Health cost is always rounded up.)

Damage: N/A

Effects: Creates a level x (Max 20) medium weapon for a maximum of 4 turns. This may be used as a basic weapon or in Shuurajou jutsu specifically calling for the use of a Crimson Whip. This jutsu may be performed during the setup phase as if drawing a weapon. Also, weapon may not exceed 50% user level, rounded down.

Description: The user pushes their hands together, palms pressing against one another. They then use chakra to pull blood from their body to create a whip of blood, which is then used to ravage the opponent.

Points: 4

Edited August 23, 2011 by K Mitsuhide

[Tsu]

gennin would have a hard time manipulating an opponents bloodstream. I would suggest altering the description to not do that until later levels.

[K Mitsuhide]

They don't use their opponent's own circulatory system but instead use the chakra- infused blood which they put into their opponent's body to do the damage.

[Tsu]

how do they put it there then?

[K Mitsuhide]

There is another technique that has already been approved called "crimson needles" in which newest are created from the user's own blood, and can then be thrown like senbon. When they cUse damage to the opponent, the blood enters their bloodstream for 3 turns.

[Azure]

Maximum of level 20 as well. Typically Chuunin techniques are where weapon/item creation begins but I'll be okay with it if it stays within limits. (I realize it says 50% of user's level, which I like, but I'd rather see an additional cap please.)

[K Mitsuhide]

I had originally thought to put a cap on the whip for gennin rank, so it's perfectly fine by me. XD

Doneface.

Edited August 23, 2011 by K Mitsuhide

[Azure]

Approvedface.

[Tsu]

Stampface!