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Rewrote the effects to be a bit more similar to raikiri and try to make more sense out of the deriving effects, ready for feedback/approval!

Redid this techniques effects to conform with the new system changes on 9.0.3

Doing a combat mission for Shinji soon that this could be relevant for if this could get a look over! Appreciate it yall

Shinjis back and I want to get him combat ready, can someone take a look at this please?

Chidori Nagashi | One Thousand Birds Current | 千鳥流し Type: Ninjutsu | Lightning Rank: Jōnin Cost: 1.5x Chakra Effect: When determining the cost of this technique 'x' is equivalent to the base cost of another technique which requires the skill 'Chidori Training; Poise', chosen by the user when this technique is performed. The chosen technique must be possessed by the user. This technique may be performed in the Response Phase or Main Phase: [This technique may only be used on Chidori Variants up to the Jonin level.] Response: The total damage of any unresolved, physical attack targeting the user of this technique is reduced by 50% of the total damage that would have been dealt by the technique chosen by the user when this technique was performed. If the damage of any attack would be reduced to 0 in this way then that attack is negated. The user of any melee attack that's damage is reduced by this technique has a 50% chance of being afflicted with 1 turn of the status effect 'Weakened' at the beginning of their next turn. This technique has a 5% chance to fail, and the user sacrifices their Setup and Main on the turn this technique is used. Main: When this technique is performed, the attack 'Lightning Swell' is applied to the battlefield as if by the climate effect 'Monsoon'. 'Lightning Swell' targets all characters except the user of this technique, deals damage equal to 50% of the total damage of the technique chosen by the user when performing this technique, and has a chance to hit equivalent to if the user had performed that technique. Any character dealt damage by 'Lightning Swell' is also afflicted with 2 turns of the status effect 'Weakened'. Description: The Chidori has long been considered a potent jutsu, called an assassination technique for the speed and precision at which it can deal fatal blows. That is not to say that it is a jutsu without weakness. A single shinobi facing multiple foes would be left at a tremendous disadvantage when using Chidori. To counter this, the Chidori Nagashi was invented. By channeling the chakra that one would use to perform Chidori through their whole body, the user is capable of generating a current of electricy around their body. This field is can be applied both offensively, damaging multiple enemies at once, or defensively to dampen the force of attacks. Those caught within the field of Chidori Nagashi are stricken with numbness that weakens the body and the tenketsu. Requirements: Chidori Training; Shape; Only usable on Chidori Variants up to Jonin Level. Points: 24 Reposting this up because KC doesnt want to deal with it, with his permission (and entirely created by him). Edit: Added in a clause specifying that it can only be used on techniques up to jonin level to eliminate any potential abuse for sennin techs (not that there are or plan to be any as far as I know, this way its covered).

Now that the item above has been approved, can I get an approval on this purchase :D

Because I just cant get even the slightest of breaks from life in general,what little remains of my family is getting even smaller, my uncles in liver failure, that just turned into heart failure. And this is all not even two months after my grandma passed away from dementia. To say that is been a rough few weeks just doesnt feel like it does it justice, and when I have so many stressful and traumatic things happening one after another I end up shutting down emotionally. But I miss you guys, Ive known a lot of you for more than half my life, and think of you all as my second family in a way, and now that I am at a better place with the grief I want to respark my activity / plans with characters. And @Ichigo you'll see a post from me soon in our spar, don't think I'm done with Tane just yet :P Love you guys, thank you for being understanding about all of this, but I am glad to be back.

Hey guys, I know I havent been too active lately, my epilepsy has been acting up Ive had 2 seizures in the last month so if Im not at the doctors office Im generally too exhausted to do much. [Especially writing a few thousand words], hopefully get a better idea of whats making them happen so often to get it a bit more under control. Still around on discord to, hope everyones doing better than I am lately..

Anddd fixed em both per your suggestions. Now properly named Chakra Shotgun 1 and 2 instead of 2 and 3

Oh shit I coulda sworn I edited it into both techniques when I added it to the first one, I have it properly added onto the second now, thanks! This should be good to go then.

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Since the chunin version has so little wiggle room to work with im going to just pull it and keep the jonin/sennin versions. 1 more app to go!

Fixed!!

Refunding 100$ for when link formation was pulled since there are no more ranged modifiers. Cash on hand: $88 + 100 New cash on hand: $188

Fixed cap and JP cost on it, made the other 2 evolving (which shouldnt affect costing).

Bump, just need a mod+ approval here.

Bump, double checked math.

Just need a mod+ app and this is good to move!

I think I get what you meant by replacing it with this: Hoho style taijutsu or taijutsu/Ninjutsu technique, tell me if I did get that done correctly, think I saw all the spots it needed to be changed in. [In regards to your first 3 points] and Re: it affecting so much of my chars techs, mainly wanted that to be mentioned in here so that other staff reviewing it understood the aftershocks of this being redone, and the knee jerk reaction of thinking I may have to resub so many techniques out of nowhere just wound me up a bit. Especially since I hadnt used Tetsuo much in the past six months, felt like I was being singled out for something thats been approved practically since tetsuos creation. Hes already had to weather several significant nerfs that I had to redo things for, fear effects changing and forcing a yokai redo, wep jutsu rules being changed and resubbing 20 techs, these last 9.0.1 changes to acc, I apologize if my initial reaction seemed a bit harsh, it pushed one of my defensive buttons. That was the problem in this case, I didnt really understand what Ryan was saying about it needing to be taijutsu in the sense that i just needed to add the words before what was there, to me a weapon attack implied taijutsu regardless of whether or not my character has chakra blade. [Same goes for it being a taijutsu technique that generated the charges since tetsuos moves are all taijutsu/nin tai hybrids weps or not], we were talking about it in the mechanics subchat on discord at the time and it still took a lot of back and forth before we were all on the same page. From what I can tell no one else had a tai style based around a weapon, so until today I didnt know any of this was even a potential problem, especially with it having been approved for over 2 years and used in several public fights.

My weapon attributes shouldnt be relevant to my taijutus style at all, thats a bit ridiculous. You dont deny skills based on what equipment someone has, or at least thats never been done before since I have been a member here... I dont know where that bolded part came from, I cant find anything to indicate elements being involved in the style being not allowed to use.... It was designed to be a 'weapon taijutsu style' when there wasnt any others around at the time, This style is used in almost all of his personal jutsu, Im talking about 30+ techniques, theres got to be some way this is workable, Im a bit stunned at how unexpected this was, tai style rules havent changed in 2+ years. Maybe this wording would be an effective compromise to allow him to use this style while holding weapons in each hand: Effect: This taijutsu style may be utilized while the user is holding weapons in each hand, [this does not modify or change the damage of techniques, essentially either doing a normal basic attack with no weapon modifiers]. Allows for the accumulation of “Flash” charges. A Flash charge is generated whenever a Hohō technique successfully strikes its target, or when the user successfully dodged an attack in the response phase. [User cannot gain multiple flash charges from different sources in a single turn]. - The user may spend one or more Flash Charge as a free action in the setup phase to increase the chance to critically strike with a Hohō Style technique by 4x%, as well as .5x turns of haste; with x being equal to the amount of charges spent. Haste bonus may never exceed 3 turn max duration limit. - The user may spend 2 flash charges as a free action in the setup phase to make the next hoho technique a weapon jutsu. Again I am not trying to get modifiers in any way shape or form with the first line there, only that he can still use this taijutsu style while holding a weapon in each hand (by hitting the enemy with the hilt of his sword, or one of the scabbards in a defensive type stance for skill logic) I am open to other suggestions, this was the only thing I could think of that would make sense with the skills logic and still be viable/useful for my character who is a dual wielding swordsman.

Refunding 100$ for when link formation was pulled since there are no more ranged modifiers. Cash on hand: $88 + 100 New cash on hand: $188

Refunding Link formation from Tsurugi No Totsuka Post removal of ranged modifiers for weapons. Cash on hand: $424 + $100 [Refund cost for link formation at full price from patch removal] Refunding at 50% of the price which comes to: $1,165 Cash on hand: $424 Total refunds from items in thread: $1,265 + $424 New total cash on hand: $1,589

Got it :D done!

Adjusted per your instructions Jeannie! Thanks