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Tsuriboshi | Suspending Star | 吊星 Type: Genjutsu | Evolving] | Rank: Jounin Cost: 215 Chakra Effects: This jutsu may be cast on the user of the technique. Increase the targets ninjutsu stat by +300 for one turn, as well as 1 turn of haste. Haste - Your total Speed is increased by 15%. Description: Mastery of control of ones chakra can come in many forms, however, when combined with genjutsu thats cast on yourself showing no physical manifestation of the change happening for an enemy; one can essentially give their attacks a supercharge and double their efficacy. This does come at a hefty chakra cost, but by raising the overall power of their ninjutsu techniques it also gives the user a slight boost in agility, intended to allow for even faster hand sealing to get the most out of their heightened power level. Points: 5 Tsuriboshi II | Suspending Star II | 吊星II Type: Genjutsu | Evolving; Suspending Star | Rank: Sennin Cost: 370 Chakra Effects: This jutsu may be cast on the user of the technique. Increase the targets ninjutsu stat by +500 for one turn, as well as 2 turns of haste. Haste - Your total Speed is increased by 15%. Description: Mastery of control of ones chakra can come in many forms, however, when combined with genjutsu thats cast on yourself showing no physical manifestation of the change happening for an enemy; one can essentially give their attacks a supercharge and double their efficacy while also upping their agility for faster sealing. This does come at a significant chakra cost to the user, this is all from past research the technique hasnt been used in decades so its unknown just how much of a difference it could make with a powerful technique following it up. According to the scrolls containing the jutsu formula the last time it was used was fighting one of the tailed beasts, there were numerous warnings about the dangers of using this type of genjutsu, the end result could be very unstable. Points: 6 [Evolving 1; Suspending Star]

Took out bleeding and replaced with an acc bonus, this should be all set now.

Ahh yes youre so right! Got the math fixed up and ready to go.

Fixed the effect max durations that I accidentally went over, took out impaired eyesight and replaced with exposed instead. Double checked my math on these, everything should be in order now.

Just need one more approval on this and its good to go! Thanks

Sounds good to me! Math has been updated / adjusted according to ryans numbers.

Just need 1 more approval on this and its good to move.

Numbers have been fixed, this is good to go, thanks man!

As most of you know I have some pretty serious health problems, which have only become much more of a pain (haha puns) in my ass thanks to the restrictions on opiates, having to find several new pain doctors after policies have changed for no reason preventing someone with a medical cannabis card from getting pain meds necessary to survive each day. Even though its been almost 3 years now since I had my first seizure and compression fractured 7 vertibrae on my spine still being in constant unrelenting pain. Because of the political climate surrounding opiates people in legitimate pain are having their scripts either yanked entirely or forcibly lowering doses for no other reason than their DEA badge number and intimidation from them. Im still unable to drive from the epilepsy, which makes finding a new job thats not work frmo home mch more difficult, I have seen 27 doctors now since the fall, which has had a significant effect on my overall psyche/stability unable to think creatively enough to write or post, or even do much art lately because of how terrifying o a situation I was in after my previous pain doctor out of nowhere says I have 1 month to find a new doctor after going to some convention and changing their practice policies prohibiting medical cannabis patients from getting more than 2 pills per day (which I have to take 4 of to me remotely tolerable. Oh and 4 days before the first vacation I have had since being in vegas for the shooting in 2017 I slip down a few stairs hitting my left side hard enough to warrant an ER visit, no more fractures but I was in so much more pain for the last week straight, ER informed me that they couldnt do anything for my pain other than give me ibuprofen 600mgs "because you are already on an opiate" Which considering I was and it wasnt even putting a dent in the pain may have been an indication of the severity, On top of that I seem to be having issues with literally everything lately, if its not the dispensary actually having a "drought" before 4-20, iits the fiances car getting a flat tire one day, and her pulled over by a cop for going 7 over the next day, its almost missing my flight back having to run through security, being locked out of the townhouse after fiances mom took our spare key with her (was locked outside when it was like 25 degrees the other day for twenty minutes not exactly dressed for a cold climate. Both of our familites driving us insane asking about wedding stuff (despite it being a courthouse ceremony with a party after lol, That combined with the usual stream of what the actual fuck kind of luck I have had has left me physically and mentally exhausted. I will be getting posts up soon enough, its just been a bit insane lately. tldr; been a rough few weeks, that ive been struggling to hold things together.

Tsu is fine with me making this, also added chunin and sennin ranks.

Whoops, I thought I pulled that part on the copy paste. Corrected that and fixed the math, should be all set!

Alright! Everything has been fixed on the wording, and turn durations/ordering, should be good to go!

Andd fixed!

The weird tags are literal copy and pastes of the previous ones that needed updating post 9.0, the one thing i overlooked and didnt change, changes made. Changed This technique is modified by ninjutsu at a ratio of 40:5 to what it is now. Removed the extra text and fixed tag, since the CP isnt even at the forbidden level anymore.

Being one of the users of this, I like the compromise and end result. Well done gents

Getsuga Tenshō | Moon Fang Heaven-Piercer | 超月牙天衝 Type: Ninjutsu | Taijutsu | Weapon; One Handed Longsword | Void | Hohō | Hijutsu; Hayashi Tetsuo Rank: Jonin Cost: 124 Chakra 124 Stamina Damage: 225 Effect: Response phase jutsu have an additional 30% chance to fail, by spending one flash charges, this bonus can be increased to 50%. Description: By drawing all of the chakra towards the very edge of the blade, the moment the blade begins to cut through the air as its slashed down towards an enemy the user needs to condense and pressurize their chakra until it is thin enough to fit in a crack and yet sharp enough to cut the top off a mountain with a wide enough stroke, as the blade is swung before releasing the chakra from its edge, the chakra is used as an agent magnifying the destructive capabilities of the slash attack, which flies forward in a swirl of blue light. This slash made by the sword typically takes the shape of a crescent moon or wave because of the shifting from one state of momentum to another. The Cho Getsuga Tenshō is a powerful technique with great force, creating wide spread devastation and a path of destruction in the wake of it being swung through the air with enough force and strength. A single strike from it can disperse an entire rainstorm and slice off the top of a mountain. Cost: 8 Cost= 1.3 (150 [225 dmg nin 2:3 ratio] + 40 [jounin weapon tech]) = 247 Splitting between chakra and stam should be 124 each Hidou Getsuga Tenshō | Devilish Moon Fang Heaven-Piercer | 非道もない月牙天衝 Type: Ninjutsu | Taijutsu | Weapon; One Handed Longsword | Void | Hohō | Hijutsu; Hayashi Tetsuo | Kinjutsu; Powerful Rank: Sennin Cost: 260 Chakra 260 Stamina Damage: 700 Effect: Response phase jutsu have an additional 30% chance to fail, by spending two flash charges, this bonus can be increased to 50%. Description: The darker version of this technique involves a different setup and mixture of chakra, the appearance also changes from the typical glowing blue color to a black that glows red, more demonic and sinister looking of an attack. The blade begins to cut through the air as its slashed down towards an enemy the user needs to condense and pressurize their chakra until it is thin enough to fit in a crack and yet sharp enough to cut the top off a mountain with a wide enough stroke, as the blade is swung before releasing the chakra from its edge, the chakra is used as an agent magnifying the destructive capabilities of the slash attack, which flies forward in a swirl of blue light. This slash made by the sword typically takes the shape of a crescent moon or wave because of the shifting from one state of momentum to another. The Hidou Getsuga Tenshō is a powerful technique with great force, creating wide spread devastation and a path of destruction in the wake of it being swung through the air with enough force and strength. A single strike from it can disperse an entire rainstorm and slice off the top of a mountain. Cost: 10 350 CP Damage @ 1:2 Kinjutsu Ratio 200 CP +50% Response Phase Fail Chance [400 * (50/100)] 50 CP Weapon Technique Total 600 CP - 120 CP Three charges = 520 CP Old Approved topic: Here

Mikadzuki Setsudan | Severing Crescent Moon | 三日月を切断 Type: Ninjutsu | Taijutsu | Weapon; One Handed Longsword | Void | Hohō | Hijutsu; Hayashi Tetsuo Rank: Jonin Cost: 158 Chakra 158 Stamina Damage: 225 Effect: Target afflicted with One turn of Clobbered, Metabolic Breakdown, Fazed. Clobbered - You may not use Jutsu with a CP value greater than twice your level. Metabolic Breakdown - All your regeneration is halted. Shares stacks with 'Metabolic Shock'. Fazed - Your Turn Order is increased by 60 - 10x, where x is your ninja rank. You may only be Fazed once per attack. Description: A variation of the Getsuga Tensou Technique, this specialized form of the attack relies on capitalizing on the users speed to deliver the assault in a manner of seconds, the quick strokes with the sword and speed at which your chakra can execute your bodys maneuvers is the key to the power of this technique. By combining the two in a precise ratio, one can set up with a body flicker to put themselves in optimal strike range for the cone like damage of this move. In the more powerful version of this technique, the attack explodes into an azure and blue storm of the explosive mixture of chakra thats unleashed from the flying sword slash. Cost: 8 150 CP Damage 40 CP Weapon Jutsu 40 CP Clobbered 70 Metabolic breakdown 15 CP Fazed Total 315 CP Mangetsu Setsudan | Severing Full Moon | 満月を切断 Type: Ninjutsu | Taijutsu | Weapon; One Handed Longsword | Void | Hohō | Hijutsu; Hayashi Tetsuo Rank: Sennin Cost: 230 Chakra 230 Stamina Damage: 225 Effect: Target afflicted with Two turns of Clobbered, Metabolic Breakdown, 1 turn of Exposed. Exposed - You get -50% to base Defense. Metabolic Breakdown - All your regeneration is halted. Shares stacks with 'Metabolic Shock'. Clobbered - You may not use Jutsu with a CP value greater than twice your level. Description: A variation of the Getsuga Tensou Technique, this specialized form of the attack relies on capitalizing on the users speed to deliver the assault in a manner of seconds, the quick strokes with the sword and speed at which your chakra can execute your bodys maneuvers is the key to the power of this technique. By combining the two in a precise ratio, one can set up with a body flicker to put themselves in optimal strike range for the cone like damage of this move. In the more powerful version of this technique, the attack again changes to the onyxian black and crimson glowing energy like its parent technique The Hidou Getsuga Tenshou. Cost: 9 150 [damage] + 80 [clobber 2] + 140 [m break 2] + 40 [expose] + 50 [sennin weapon] = 460 CP = 7JP +1 hybrid tax = 8JP Old Approved topic: Here

WiP Another Resub

Taiyou Houka-ya | Sun Fire Arrow | 寸火征矢 Type: Ninjutsu | Susanoo | Lightning | Hijutsu; Susanoo Rank: Jōnin Cost: 340 Chakra Damage: 210 Effect: When calculating chance to hit for this technique, increase the user's Accuracy by 210 points, Response phase jutsu used against this technique have an additional 20% chance to fail. Description: Through the combination of using some of the special chakra energy that the Susano'o is crafted from, in combination with his lightning natured chakra, the resulting mixture is a deadly combination of raw power and hundreds of thousands of volts of electricity. When Shinji mixes the two and then using the Susano'o's crackling, flaming orb in its right hand, he shapes a bow and arrow with his special chakra combination. All of the juiced chakra focusing itself on the arrow instead of the bow, once it was finished creating itself, the Susanoo would take aim with it and draw the string back. Shinji was in control of all of this, and was in charge of targeting where the arrow would strike, using his mangekyo sharingan as a guide he lines up the target with the bow and arrow, almost as if he could see through the susano'o's eyes as if they were his own, and then launches their destructive bolt towards the enemy, sparking and cracking with electricity as it roared through the air. Points: 8 140 (210 Damage + 140 (210Accuracy) + 60 (Response Phase reduc) = 340 Chakra Posting resub per 9.0.1 update, text has been changed to reflect new wording for taijutsu modifiers instead of 40:5 old ratio.

Banrai Hōkai Suruhoshi Taihō Bakuhatsu | Collapsing Star Roaring Cannon Blast | 崩壊する星の轟音大砲の爆発 Type: Ninjutsu | Lightning | Fire | Kinjutsu; Powerful | AoE Rank: Sennin Cost: 900 Chakra Damage: 600 Effect: This technique may only be performed by coalescence. - Coalescence [2; Banrai Hōkai Suruhoshi Taihō Bakuhatsu]: This technique does AoE damage. This technique does 1.5x damage to barriers/shields and has a 25% increased chance of a critical hit. Response Phase Jutsu used against this technique have an additional 25% chance to fail, even if they did not already possess a fail chance. The Mangekyo Sharingan must be active to use this technique. Condition: This technique may only successfully be used if one user is a Susanoo summon and the other user has the Mangekyo Sharingan active. Description: After hundreds of hours of practice and experimentation, Uchiha Shinji had success in combining the chidori technique along with his fire base chakra, the resulting electrified inferno was beyond his expectations, that coupled with the speed that he utilizes when using the raikiri technique; it leaves little time for the target to react or think for more then a few seconds let alone respond to the attack quickly enough to prevent serious damage. This was where his extremely fast speed was one of his biggest assets, and if he was under the effects of his blazing speed genjutsu it was even more deadly; only brief flickers of his shadow could be seen by his enemy because he was moving so fast. Similar to the raikiri technique in the sense that the user gathers lightning chakra in their palm focusing it into shape, Shinji's technique allows him to seamlessly mix his fire chakra in with the lightning, his hang glowed with a reddish orange, the screech emanating from his hand from it being both fire and lightning was indescribable, he took an idea from one of the more famous uchiha techniques that used a specific maneuver this would be based on. Shinji's experience with fire release was advanced enough that he didnt need to physically breathe the fire chakra from his lungs out for an attack, he had learned to control fire chakra using it on his hands, the totsuka sword once or twice, small weaponry. Once the fire and lightning are mixed together Shinji makes sure to distract his opponent with unpredictable erratic movements before waiting for the perfect opportunity to charge them and set off the explosion of fire and lightning energy with the force of a few thousand meters per second, almost turning the rubble created from the jutsu into shrapnel. Once his glowing red hand connected with his target all of the fire energy is expelled outwards in combination with the lightning release chakra that is already wreaking havoc on their bodies motor function along with a considerable amount of pain from that and the burns that usually followed after being hit with this move. This is Shinji's masterpiece, his trump card, to only be used in a life or death situation, it was far too powerful to be used otherwise. Restrictions: This technique may only be used once per battle. Cost: 14 Since this follows 1:2 ratios for kinjutsu here are the costs: Damage: 600 300 Chakra Cost. This technique does 1.5x damage to barriers/shields +25% Total Cost This technique has a 25% increased chance of a critical hit. +50% Total Cost Response Phase Jutsu used against this technique have an additional 25% chance to fail, even if they did not already possess a fail chance. +25% Total Cost Area of Effect x3 Total Cost So the cost would be... 300 * 2 (25%+50%+25%) = 600 * 3 = 1800 Chakra Total And since it is a coalescence, each character pays half so we cut that cost in two. 1800 Chakra / 2 = 900 Chakra For this jutsu it would be 28 JP (for a 1800 Chakra Jutsu), but then divided by 2 since its only able to be used as a coalescence. Points: 14 JP As before, orange is just commentary and red is needed changes.

Thanks for fixing the font issue! I mustve missed that. I corrected the elemental archetype tags, and did add 3 turns of impaired eyesight on the sennin tech bringing the total to 510. Should be good to move!

Oh you're absolutely right on the elemental archetype ryan, nice catch. Been awhile since I made an elemental genjutsu lol. All fixed up and good to go

Ryan clutch on the wording, thanks man! That sounds way cleaner, I got all of the text updated, double checked math and costs(and adjusted for being genjutsu ratios instead of ninjutsu) , this should be good to go once its moved to the custom genjutsu forum. Thanks gents

Raiton: Raigen Raikōchū I | Lightning Release: Flash Pillar I | 雷遁・雷幻雷光柱I Raiton: Raigen Raikōchū I | Lightning Release: Flash Pillar I | 雷遁・雷幻雷光柱I Type: Genjutsu | Evolving | Elemental Archetype; Lightning Rank: Chunin Cost: 105 chakra Damage: -- Effects: Target is under the effects of blind, exposed, and fazed for 1 turn. Exposed - Your total Defense is reduced by 50%. Blind - Your total Accuracy is reduced by 50%. You may not use any ability that specifically makes use of sight. Shares stacks with 'Impaired Eyesight'. Fazed - Your Turn Order is increased by 60 - 10x, where x is your ninja rank. You may only be Fazed once per attack. Description: Raigen Raikouchuu is a ninjutsu technique that generates a large flash of light which blinds the enemy through the use of a concentrated (and then detonated) orb of electric charged chakra. Tapping into that pool of electrical energy, the user compresses and condenses it into a sphere, which they basically detonate behind them creating the blinding flare like effect outwards from behind the user. You could say the end result of Flash Pillar is where the technique got its infamous name from its one of a kind finale, a massive pillar of pure white light emanating up towards the sky. A giant cylindrical pillar of white light bursting outwards. Points: 4 50 (Blind) + 15 (Fazed) + 40 (Exposed) = 105 CP Raiton: Raigen Raikōchū II | Lightning Release: Flash Pillar II | 雷遁・雷幻雷光柱II Type: Genjutsu | Evolving; Raiton: Raigen Raikōchū I | Elemental Archetype; Lightning Rank: Jounin Cost: 245 chakra Damage: -- Effects: Target's Blind for 2 turns, evasion is reduced by 150 for the next 1 turn, and fazed/exposed for one turn. Fazed - Your Turn Order is increased by 60 - 10x, where x is your ninja rank. You may only be Fazed once per attack.Blind - Your total Accuracy is reduced by 50%. You may not use any ability that specifically makes use of sight. Shares stacks with 'Impaired Eyesight'. Blind - Your total Accuracy is reduced by 50%. You may not use any ability that specifically makes use of sight. Shares stacks with 'Impaired Eyesight'. Exposed - Your total Defense is reduced by 50%. Description: Raigen Raikouchuu is a ninjutsu technique that generates a large flash of light which blinds the enemy through the use of a concentrated (and then detonated) orb of electric charged chakra. Tapping into that pool of electrical energy, the user compresses and condenses it into a sphere, which they basically detonate behind them creating the blinding flare like effect outwards from behind the user. You could say the end result of Flash Pillar is where the technique got its infamous name from its one of a kind finale, a massive pillar of pure white light emanating up towards the sky. A giant cylindrical pillar of white light bursting outwards. Points: 6 [2 evolving] 100 (Blind) + 15 (Fazed) + 40 (Exposed) + 90 (-150 Evasion) = 245 Raiton: Raigen Raikōchū III | Lightning Release: Flash Pillar III | 雷遁・雷幻雷光柱III Type: Genjutsu | Evolving; Raiton: Raigen Raikōchū II | Elemental Archetype; Lightning Rank: Sennin Cost: 455 chakra Damage: -- Effects: Target is afflicted with 2 turns of blind, 1 turn of fazed, 1 turn of exposed, and Targets evasion is reduced by 250 for 2 turns. Fazed - Your Turn Order is increased by 60 - 10x, where x is your ninja rank. You may only be Fazed once per attack.Blind - Your total Accuracy is reduced by 50%. You may not use any ability that specifically makes use of sight. Shares stacks with 'Impaired Eyesight'. Blind - Your total Accuracy is reduced by 50%. You may not use any ability that specifically makes use of sight. Shares stacks with 'Impaired Eyesight'. Exposed - Your total Defense is reduced by 50%.Blind - Your total Accuracy is reduced by 50%. You may not use any ability that specifically makes use of sight. Shares stacks with 'Impaired Eyesight'. Description: Raigen Raikouchuu is a ninjutsu technique that generates a large flash of light which blinds the enemy through the use of a concentrated (and then detonated) orb of electric charged chakra. Tapping into that pool of electrical energy, the user compresses and condenses it into a sphere, which they basically detonate behind them creating the blinding flare like effect outwards from behind the user. You could say the end result of Flash Pillar is where the technique got its infamous name from its one of a kind finale, a massive pillar of pure white light emanating up towards the sky. A giant cylindrical pillar of white light bursting outwards. Points: 7 [1 evolving] -250 evasion cost: 150 CP * 2 = 300 + 100 (Blindx2) + 15 (Fazed) = 415 CP I have Miso's permission to resub this ❤️

I see your Tommy Chong gif and raise you Ashton Kutcher from that 70s show lol.