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Hisame Honsou Approved, 600 EXP & 両120 Enjin Misotake Approved, 600 EXP & 両120

Problem: [Typo] Instead of "The Capital", its written as "he Capital" +25 EXP and 両10 I notice I missed a handful of these above. I will review them at a later date, but wanted to address the latest posting because it was a quick and easy fix.

Aki Sarada Approved, 600 EXP & 両120 Inuzuka Kenji Approved, 600 EXP & 両120

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Mahiru Sencha Approved, 600 EXP & 両120 @Potatosoupliker Sorry for the delay!

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Math break down! 225 Damage — 150 Chakra Burning 120 — 64 Chakra per turn (x2) +15% Chance to Critical — * 1.3 RPJ +20% Fail Chance — * 1.25 Double Subtle Elements — * 1.1 150 + 64 + 64 = 278 * 1.3 = 361.4 * 1.25 = 451.75 * 1.1 = 496.925 Total Chakra for Combined Jutsu 496.925 / 2 = 248.4625, rounded to 250 Chakra So the total cost for this jutsu would be 250 Chakra. The JP is then calculated for a 250 Chakra jutsu, but since it can ONLY be used in this way you divided it by 2. So the JP for a 250 Chakra Jounin jutsu is 6 JP, but then you divided by two and get 3 JP. So 250 Chakra & 3 JP.

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Reviewing the cost quickly, using the same costs we used in the Friend Cutter thread as a reference. I am putting the things unique to your version in blue just to be easier to see. 600 Damage — 300 Chakra Ignore Item — 80 Chakra 150 Bleeding — 60 Chakra per Turn (120 Total) Defense Ignore — 500 * 1.25 = 625 Chakra Speed Bonus — 625 * 1.15 = 718.75 Chakra RPJ Failure Chance — 718.75 * 1.5 = 1,078.125 Chakra Seal-less — 1,078.125 * 0.3 = 1,401.5625 Chakra Total Before Reductions — 1,400 (Rounded Down) AS Requirement Reduction — 1400 * 0.8 = 1,120 Skill Cost Reduction — 1,120 - 560 = 560 Final Cost — 560 Chakra So just update the cost to 560 and we are good to go!

Okay, some edits have been made so let's break this down! Damage: 600 300 Chakra Cost. This technique does 1.5x damage to barriers/shields +25% Total Cost ... and may not be intercepted by summons/clones. Remove this part. This technique being an AoE will already do that without needing to say that. This technique has a 25% increased chance of a critical hit. +50% Total Cost Response Phase Jutsu used against this technique have an additional 25% chance to fail, even if they did not already possess a fail chance. +25% Total Cost Area of Effect x3 Total Cost So the cost would be... 300 * 2 (25%+50%+25%) = 600 * 3 = 1800 Chakra Total And since it is a coalescence, each character pays half so we cut that cost in two. 1800 Chakra / 2 = 900 Chakra For this jutsu it would be 28 JP (for a 1800 Chakra Jutsu), but then divided by 2 since its only able to be used as a coalescence. Points: 14 JP As before, orange is just commentary and red is needed changes.

The Susanoo Unleashing would not be able to be considered for skill lock since it is already giving a bonus. A skill lock example would be like the Chidori or Rasengan skills where the only they do is give access to those techniques (and hence allow those techniques to get more power from that skill). If you want to prevent clones from intercepting this you could make it an AoE since the intercepting rules can only be used if the character was not the target of an attack.

Great, this is close... • I don't see the seal-less being paid for anywhere in the calculations. Should be a +30% total cost points. • Once you finish this make sure to re-check the JP points. I think the 7+ was a left over from Deriving? I think this should just be priced as a normal kinjutsu at this point which I think will bring your JP down by a decent amount when you're done even with the +30%.

1. Okay, so looking at the wording on the skill and after talking with KC it seems like this is not needed as long as the jutsu is a Coalescence. Shinji and the Susanoo can just both take it so I think we can remove this personal part. Based on the skill you copied, that wording means that you can just do this without any extra rules. 2. Okay, I think then we have a lot of fat to trim here. I am going to do a re-write and you can tell me if its doing what you want. I think the Coalescence rules can carry a lot of the weight here. Cost: [Total Cost / 2] Chakra Damage: 450 Condition: This technique may only successfully be used if one user is a Susanoo summon and the other user has the Mangekyo Sharingan active. Effect: This technique may only be used as a Coalescence. - Coalescence [2; Taiyou Houka-ya]: This technique has an additional 15% to critical hit. The target is afflicted with 2 turns of burning 200. Response phase jutsu used against this technique have an additional 20% chance to fail. Apply the effects of both subtle element skills to this technique if one of the users has them. Points: [Total JP / 2] • The part in red. Burning + Base Damage cannot go over the cap. For a Coalescence technique the cap is raised by +50% so for a Jounin Ninjutsu it is 480 instead of 320. But this is still pretty far above that. This will need to be reduced or the jutsu rank increased. • The part in blue. Since this can only be used as a Coalescence we can price it at half of the normal cost and just have the two users each pay their half. That's how Coalescence normally works so we can cut those extra words. I also didn't put a number here because of the problem in red above, which will change the cost. • The green part. Since you can only use this as a coalescence the JP is going to be divided by 2 and paid by each user when they take it. The JP calculation you were using was based on a jutsu that can be used as a normal jutsu AND a coalescence.

Breaking this down for my own reference like the other jutsu I took a look at. Deriving This doesn't exist outside Hyuuga anymore, I think we removed this so you should take this out. Damage: 600 300 Chakra Cost, done! To use this technique, the Mangekyo Sharingan Must be active, This is fine, its only slightly different than the Doujutsu requirement that is on all Chidori. Might net a little more reduction in cost but its very very similar. Also your capitalization here is weird. the target of this technique applies only 60% of their total Defense statistic when modifying the damage of this technique; additionally, the target may apply only a single item's effects when modifying or responding to this technique. Increase Enton Chidori's total damage by 3 for every 40 points of Speed that its user possesses. This is is good, this is all in line with Chidori at this level. Response Phase Techniques used against Enton Chidori have an additional 50% chance to fail, even if they did not already possess a fail chance. +50% total cost! good to go The target of this technique is afflicted by 2 turns of 150. 120 total, or 60 chakra per turn. If an eye-based advanced system is not active at the time of Enton Chidoris use, reduce this technique's base chance to hit to 15% and treat the user as if their Evasion statistic was halved against the next attack that targets them before their following turn. You can remove this, its superseded by the first phrase about needing the Mangekyou active. [Optional Conditional;] IIf the Etertnal Mangeyo Sharingan is active; the next attack and increase burning damage effect by an additional 50. The base damage of this technique is also increased by 200. I don't really understand what you mean here. Is this just extra effect if you have that doujutsu active? That doesn't seem really kosher, is there a reference that does this? It seems sort of like double dipping since having the higher level doujutsu is already better. Also, if this is an option you will need to have more JP for that option. Once again, orange is just my notes and red is what needs to be addressed.

So a few questions... Why is this personal to Shinji instead of just a jutsu he knows? Can you walk me through what you want the condition to be doing? It looks like you are re-stating how coalescence works but maybe I am not understanding.

First time doing approvals in awhile so going through each of these. Apologies if they are explained elsewhere. 700 Damage 350 Chakra, easy! The target cannot apply any equipment bonuses when responding to this technique. This seems like a skill locked jutsu type of bonus. Is there a reference for a current jutsu that does something like this that isn't skill locked? This technique does 1.5x damage to barriers/shields; Yep, +25% Total Cost multiplier is correct here. and may not be intercepted by summons/clones. Same as the first line, seems like a skill locked jutsu sort of effect. Normally to do this you need to also target the other characters with an attack, which would put it near AoE pricing. This technique has a 25% increased chance of a critical hit. +50% Total Cost is also correct, no issue here. The target of this technique is inflicted with 2 turns of Burning 210. 420 / 2 = 210 * 0.8 = 168 Chakra, or 84 per turn. Response Phase Jutsu used against this technique have an additional 25% chance to fail, even if they did not already possess a fail chance. +25% to the total cost, correct. If there is no eye based advanced system at the time of this techniques use, the chakra cost of this technique is considered to be 1.5x with X being its original chakra cost; and the user is considered vulnerable and stunned on their next turn. The reference you are citing is a skill locked jutsu which has different rules for approval. I don't see a skill associated with this, so we can't apply such a specific clause and reduction of cost. What is the +8 in the JP for? It's been awhile, I am probably just forgetting something. Lastly, why is this personal to Shinji? We don't really do personal tags for individuals much anymore, if at all. Comments in red need addressing, comments in orange are basically fine just me doing the math to check it so I don't need to redo it when I come back to this thread.

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You have these at 4 JP, should be 2 JP.

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