K Mitsuhide Posted February 10, 2011 Posted February 10, 2011 (edited) Name: Ketsueki Kensei (Blood Restraint) Rank 1 Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin, Shuurajou Clan Member Cost: 5 Health, 5 + 25/turn (prone upkeep) Chakra Damage: 10 Effects: Prone for x turns (maximum 4 turns) Description: Two small slivers of blood become like nails and punch through the feet of the opponent, pinning them into place. Points: 2 Name: Ketsueki Kaketsukeru (Blood Haste) Rank 1 Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin, Shuurajou Clan Member Cost: 35 Chakra per turn Damage: N/A Effects: Haste on self or ally for up to 4 turns Description: Using chakra, the Shuurajou clan member can manipulate blood to travel through the system better, allowing for faster speed in battle. Points: 2 Name: Ketsueki Zenshou (Blood Devestation) Rank 1 Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin, Shuurajou Clan Member Cost: 8 Health, 16 + 20x Chakra Damage: 10 + 10x (x being the number of Crimson Needles in the opponents bloodstream used, max 1 Per rank in Ketsueki Zenshou) Effects: 10 + 5x Bleed damage per turn for three turns Description: From the body of the Shuurajou clan member seeps dozens of droplets of blood. Each droplet then flies at the Shuurajou’s enemy in the attempt to slice them to pieces, while Shuurajou blood traveling through the opponent’s bloodstream may be used to tear from the inside out. Points: 4 Edited October 20, 2011 by K Mitsuhide
Hardcore Skittlez Posted February 12, 2011 Posted February 12, 2011 (edited) First; Prone may be active only 2 turns at a time, says so right in Prone's turn limit. cost would actually be 2(hp)+ 6(chakra)+ 25/turn Second; this one is fine third; sweet mother of my left nipple. What were you even doing to figure these numbers? THis took WAY too long to figure out exactly what your numbers represented, and I have concluded that your cost is all out of whack. The actual cost would be 34 chakra + 14x for its current effects. All; Fun fact, 1 hp in cost is equal to 2 chakra or stamina. So, you may pay 10 hp for a 20 chakra or stamina's worth of effects. Additionally, hp costs may never total more than half of the technique's total cost, so if you had something that cost 40, only 10 hp could be used in place of 20 chakra or stamina. Edited February 12, 2011 by thepaintrolley
Azure Posted August 22, 2011 Posted August 22, 2011 I don't like that the last one goes over the DP cap for any more than 1 Crimson Needle. I would prefer it either being bumped to Chuunin or limiting it to 1 Crimson Needle, please.
K Mitsuhide Posted August 22, 2011 Author Posted August 22, 2011 Done. Other ranks will be posted later.
