Storm Style: Laser Pointer

[ZeroFate]

Laser Pointer

Type: Ninjutsu [storm]

Rank: Genin

Cost: 20 chakra

Damage: 20

Effects: N/A

Description: The most basic of storm techniques, the user does a few hand seals and then aims two fingers at a target, firing a small beam of storm chakra to pierce enemies.

Cost: 1

Edited February 15, 2013 by Major

[Major]

Couple things.

 

I know you're intending this to be a Storm element technique, so I would just remove 'Storm Style' from the name and call it Laser Pointer. Under type, you'll add [storm] after Ninjutsu.

 

As this currently stands, the technique should cost 60 chakra to use it, and cost 3 JP to learn it. (check out the ratios and costs here.

 

I know you're wanting to make this a 1 JP technique, so the most damage in ninjutsu you'll be able to work with is 20, as you can see from the link above. 20 damage, at a cost of 20 chakra.

[ZeroFate]

Wish I'd looked at that before hand. Fixed.

 

Laser Pointer

 

Type: Ninjutsu [storm]

Rank: Genin

Cost: 20 chakra
Damage: 20
Effects: N/A
Description: The most basic of storm techniques, the user does a few hand seals and then aims two fingers at a target, firing a small beam of storm chakra to pierce enemies. 

Cost: 1

[Major]

It's all good, have to learn somehow. Anyways, we just edit our first post to make it easier to see the technique when you come to the page. I changed it for you.

 

Technique is approved, you just need one more now.

[ZeroFate]

Thanks, I figured I'd trip over the rules at least a few times. 

[Azure]

Approved.