K Mitsuhide Posted May 30, 2015 Posted May 30, 2015 (edited) Venomous Bite [Komodo Clan Exclusive] Effect: Once per battle per shinobi rank, one non-ranged Taijutsu technique directed against an opponent may be treated as also having 40 poison damage for 1 turn. Additional ranks grant an additional turn of poison damage, to a maximum of 3. This skill may not be used with any technique that already inflicts poison damage, and may only be used once per turn. May be taken by Komodo clan pets. Description: Whether it's a bacteria or a venom, no one knows for sure. Whatever it is, it's a deadly toxin to most living creatures. Komodo dragons naturally excrete this toxin within their mouths. Members of the Komodo clan have also developed this interesting trait, and they have no qualms over using it upon those they see as their prey. Ranks: 3 Cost: -3 per rank Primal Hunger [Komodo Clan Exclusive] Effect: The first time blood appears on the battlefield, the user of this skill is treated as having the status effect Enraged for 2 turns. User must use their main phase to attack an opponent. If the person bleeding is an ally, there is a 20% chance that the user of this skill will attack their ally instead. May be taken by Komodo clan pets. Description: The smell of blood to a predator... It's a most delightful thing. When a true predator picks up on that scent, their true nature is brought out like a monster in the night. It's difficult to control, but can be a useful tool in battle. Ranks: Cost: -1 Enraged: Your Taijutsu based attacks deal +20% base damage. Attacks that target you have a +10% chance to hit. Max Duration: 2 turns CP: 10/turn (Self); 15/turn (Opponent) Forbidden Land Font Edited May 30, 2015 by K Mitsuhide
Hardcore Skittlez Posted June 1, 2015 Posted June 1, 2015 First should definitely be pet exclusive. Also, doesn't indicate what the different ranks of the skill actually do, as the baseline effect only says "Once per Ninja Rank" rather than "Once per Rank in this skill" or somesuch. Should either clear up the wording to indicate what mulitple ranks accomplish, or just give the multiple ranks the axe. Second should probably be pet exclusive as well, but the effect lets me lean a little more toward an open-ended look on it. However, the effect is currently pretty vague- "blood" doesn't technically enter the battlefield until a character is afflicted with "Bleeding". If that's how it's meant to be, it should be a little more clear. Otherwise... RP logic would dictate that if you got cut with any bladed weapon, or were hit by any "sharp" technique, that would trigger this skill.
Cellar Door Posted October 22, 2015 Posted October 22, 2015 I don't see the need for them to be Pet-Exclusive. They look fine to me.Though, the second one is kind of whack. I hate the "when blood appears" because you can RP attacks that would make people bleed, or there's the status effect 'bleeding'. Which is which here?
Hardcore Skittlez Posted February 22, 2016 Posted February 22, 2016 Hasn't been touched in months. Housecleaning to dead.
