shinobi523 Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 (edited) USER DATA username: shinobi523 posting: a few times on weekdays, more on weekends timezone: north carolina name: Nara, Gensai village: Konoha clan: Nara Age: 15 APPEARANCE height: 5 feet 10 inches weight: 150 pounds hair color: dark blond eye color: blue clothing: black sandles, black pants, black short sleeve undershirt, gray sleevles jacket with Nara clan symbol ( black circle with a black line crossing the circle) on the back physical description: has a medium muscular body build, slightly tanned, a horizontal scar on his right hand on palm and on back side of his hand. STORY/BACKGROUND Nara, Gensai was just an average ninja academy student from the Nara clan. Gensai's father, grandfather, and great grandfather had been great Anbu. And Gensai's father wanted him to continue the tradition. But Gensai had no intention of becoming an Anbu, he just wanted to be an average ninja and support his village. That all changed one day when Gensai was on his way home from the academy. While passing by an alleyway he saw a konoha chunin, that had a reputation for being a bully, beating up one of his friends from the academy. Then something in Gensai snapped he couldn't stand to see one of his friends being hurt. He leaped at the chunin in a fit of blind rage, but the chunin mearly punched him and he went flying into the wall. Blood dripping out of his mouth Gensai layed by the wall unable to move. The chunin stepped towards Gensai and drew out his katana, then stabbed the katana into Gensai's right hand. The chunin enjoyed the pain he was causing to this annoyance as he called it. He then pulled the katana out of Gensai's hand and put the blade on Gensai's neck ready to slit it. Then out of no where a kunai comes flying and goes into the side of the chunin's head. The chunin fell dead in an instant. The last thing Gensa saw before he passed out was the Anbu that saved his life walking towards him.Gensai awoke a few hours later bandaged up in the village hospital with his friend in a seperate bed across from him. Gensai then saw the Anbu that had saved him standing next to him by the bed. The Anbu then told Gensai that the chunin Gensai encountered had gone crazy for some reason and had already killed two other low ranking ninja when Gensai had found him attacking his friend. The Anbu then told him that he had great courage and would one day be a great ninja. The Anbu then got up and left the room, leaving Gensai with his thoughts. If Gensai had listened to his father and wanted to be an Anbu would those other ninja still be alive. Would he have been able to tell that the chunin was going to kill those people. While he was lying in that bed healing he swore that he would become and Anbu and protect the weak and the innocent. Even if he had to give his own life to do so. PERSONALITY a very nice person to his friends, but to those who harm his friends and the innocent he is a ruthless fighter who will fight tooth and nail to defend any one who needs protection LIKES hanging out with his friends, training, defeating those that harm the innocent DISLIKES those that harm the innocent FAVORITES food: chicken soba color: black music genre: calming music book genre: horror hangout: any where with his friends STATS health power: 200 stamina: 110 chakra: 220 taijutsu: 100 ( + 60 when using fighting style) defense: 100 ( -40 when using fighting style ) ninjutsu: 140 resistance: 100 ( -40 when using fighting style ) genjutsu: 100 concentration: 70 speed: 200 accuracy: 240 ( +40 when using fighting style ) Evasion: 240 ( +40 when using fighting style ) level:13 SKILLS Poison creator: you may create poisons, this means that all poisons cost 25% less, since you need only buy the materials, but to get the discount you must make the required number of posts. It takes 10 posts to make custom poisons, and 5 for a poison from a ninja gear outlet. requirements= none costs 1 skill point counter sacrifice: Once per battle, instead of rolling to see if you dodge an opponents attack, you take the full force of the hit either standing still and grabbing hold of the opponent or by charging through the attack. The opponent ends up at point-blank range and cannot avoid the attack. requirements= none costs 2 skill points Quick learner: It takes 3 less post per 10 to learn a new technique must always post at least 2 posts to learn a new technique. requirements= none costs 1 skill point rank:3 Name: Hunt By Sound Description: Shinobi that have trained in this skill have discovered how to fight efectively even when their vision is impaired by simply ignoring what their eyes see and by focusing on what they hear with their ears. ( If from oto my permision is not required to learn this. If from anyother village you need my permission.) Level 1 Rank: Gennin Effects: Anything that would hinder the user's accuracy is only 75% as effective. Requirements: none Cost: 2 skill points, 1 skill point if from oto or you have subtle element sound subtle elements: Water, Stone, sound cost:-3 Skill Name: Forgotten Bloodline: regular skill Description: After along period of time the character will forget hoe to perform some of his/her lesser known skills. Effect: Player may remove any* skills from his/her character. Skill points may return as well. Cost: -1 ( forgot martial artist and kunai mastery ) Name: The Path of the Warrior Description: Many Ninja go down the path of becoming 'the strongest' of their field. They will stop at nothing to achieve this greatness and be esteemed among their peers. Effect: Every 5 levels, may add one Technique that has no special posting requirements to your character sheet without having to spend 10 posts. This Technique must be of your Ninja Rank. This counts towards your Jutsu limit Taijutsu Warrior: The skill 'Martial Artist' no longer has a 5-post Jounin restriction. May take 2 Ranks of 'Martial Artist' for 1 skill point. Cost: -1 Restriction: Character may not have more than +9 points of Hindering Traits. Martial Artist Rank 4: taijutsu basic attacks do +20 damage. Skill Name: Silent Homicide Fighting Style Bloodline: No, need my permission to learn Description: A fighting style used by assassins and those that fight using stealth and ghost tactics. The main focuses of the style are to strike fast, swiftly, and silently. You attack your opponent and then escape and then attack again. Doing this over and over until you have defeated the foe. Masters of the Silent Homocide Fighting Style have been said to be able to kill groups of people in close quarters without making as much as a sound. Users of the style train in taijutsu fighting, evasive manuvers, and accuracy. But while using this fighting style the user is more vulnerable and more likely to be harmed if hit. Level 1 rank: Gennin effects: Taijutsu +60, Accuracy and Evasion +40, Deffense and Resistance -40. cost: 2 Gather Rank 1 cost:1 FREE TRAINED SKILLS Name: Stroke of Genius! Effect: Used in the Setup Phase. Once per battle, when character is reduced to 10% Health or lower (choose one of the following): 1. You may not lose your next Response Phase. When dodging, roll twice for each attack and use the better of the two numbers. 2. Your next attack is considered a critical hit. 3. Recover 5% Total Stamina and 5% Total Chakra Description: By taking a 'time-out' and thinking about the situation, a Ninja is able to find a flaw in the opponent's strategy and can take advantage of it. Requisite: May not be used in the same turn as 'My Way of the Ninja!' or 'Guts Pose!' or 'Hooray for the Big Boned People!' learned it here TECHNIQUES name: Bunshin no Jutsu ( clone technique) type: genjutsu rank: academy student cost: 10 genjutsu description: creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction. damage: none Effects: adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. name: Henge no Jutsu ( transformation technique) type: genjutsu rank: academy student cost: 5 genjutsu description: wrap chakra around your body to change your apperance. You can still use the features of the things you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal but not to the extent of if you were the thing damage: none effects: change your apperance name: Kawarimi no Jutsu ( body substitution technique) type: ninjutsu rank: academy student cost: 10 ninjutsu description: a lifesaver, and a must have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object , usually a log, which will take the full force of any inchoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this three times per battle. damage: none effects: evade the attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn after you use this. You can only use this technique 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge ninjutsu, genjutsu, or taijutsu techniques. name: Kagemane no Jutsu( shadow imitation) type: ninjutsu rank: gennin cost: 50, 30 chakra per turn damage: none effects: the target and the user are imobilized. If the user chooses , in his main phase he may make one small weapon attack, but the opponent does the same. If the opponent doesn't have a small weapon of the same kind, they throw a small weapon of their choosing. If they have no small weapons they will throw a rock/stick/etc ( which only deals one damage ) The user may also use an attack that requires Kagemane no jutsu to be in effect, but after the attack successfully hits, Kagemane no jutsu is dispelled. description: this technique lets you move/form/transform your shadow how you will. If you connect your shadow with your opponents you force your opponent to perform the same movements like a mirror. name: Totomoni Kagrmane no Jutsu type: Taijutsu rank: gennin cost: 5 damage: 20 effects: n/a description: must have kagemane no jutsu on play. You cheat the opponent to follow your movements and then make a movement to make him hit his head on something ( i.e. a tree or a wall), but you are safe. This dispels kagemane no jutsu. name: Leaf Spining Wind ( Konoha Senpuu) type: Taijutsu rank: Gennin cost:20 damage:10 effects: This move is incredibly hard to dodge. Lower the effective evading stat of the target by 20-30 if you have more than double their taijutsu. This move leaves the opponent vulnerable( only half dodge/defense) to the Kage Buyo technique for their next post only. description: The ninja dissapears in a blur of pure speed, appearing right under their target and thrusting a kick in their chin from bekow, launching them into the air. While weak and costle the move is very hard to avoid and makes a great opening. Shadow Shuriken Skill (Kage Shuriken no Jutsu) Type: Taijutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 stamina Effect: You throw two small ranged weapons of the exact same type. ie. 2 shuriken/ 2 kunai, etc. The first one is dodged regularly, and then the second one is dodged as if the user's accuracy was doubled. Description: A simple but often affective technique. When throwing a Shuriken, another Shuriken is underneath hiding in the shadow. The enemy will concentrate on the real one and not see the one in the shadow. Name: Protective Cross lvl 1 Type: Ninjutsu (Medical) Rank: Gennin Cost: 75 Effect: The next Gennin level Ninjutsu OR Genjutsu affecting target with cross is negated and the cross is erased. Description:The medical nin inscribes a small cross on any exposed skin of the target. This cross glows and protects the bearer from harm. Hidden Mist Skill (Kirigakure no Jutsu) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 20, and 10 everyturn afterwards to keep effective. Damage: N/A Effect: Raises your accuracy by 20, decreases enemy accuracy by 20. All eye clans (Uchiha, Hyuuga, any clan with a bloodline involving the eyes) take -40 accuracy. Description: A technique that uses moisture in the air to engulf the opponent in mist. This mist makes it harder for your opponent to see, which gives you more of a chance for a sucessful strike. Name: Geomancy (Water) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 + 10 upkeep/turn, Effect: Terrain is changed to water, everyone on the field must also pay five chakra every turn so that they are standing on thw water. If you do not pay the chakra you will sink into the water and your evasion is reduced by 10 ( not % ) Description: After performing the handsigns this technique causes water to seep out of the ground from sources such as underground rivers. The water will only rise to about three inches. This jutsu is used for providing a supply of water for water type jutsu and weapons that need a source of water. JUTSU TAUGHT BY OTHERS Name: Fire Type-Talon of the Phoenix(Katon-Tsume no Fenikkusu) Level 1 Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 chakra/70 stamina Damage: 60 Effects: Add 50% of the ninjutsu modifier, 50% of the taijutsu modifier, and 50% of the accuracy modifier to this attacks damage. If used without the Sharingan or Byakugan activated you lose your response phase if this attack misses. Description: A very powerful technique developed by Uchiha Mizujin, it is based partially off of the Chidori. The user grabs onto their dominant hand with their non dominant one, and focuses chakra into it. The chakra can be seen as a flaming red aura. This chakra is all quickly focused in the users hand as he vanishes in a blur of speed, then proceeds to attack the opponent at their vital points. ARMOR head: neck: body: WAIST: name= Wrist mounted dart launcher dart pouch (2x) description= A pouch that is designed to hold a maximum of 20 darts for the dart launcher. It is attached to the user's waist. Can only wear two at a time. ONE LOADED WITH 20 normal darts each. OTHER LOADED WITH 19 normal darts and 1 paralyzing mist dart FORARM(S): right forearm has his konoha village amulet hand(s): thigh(s): calve(s): feet: WEAPONS main weapon:weapon name: wrist mounted dart launcher weapon size: small weapon kind: bow weapon level: 5 special: none attributes: - Indestructable= your weapon is finely crafted and indestructable. -Hidden= your weapon is made too be hidden within your clothing or as a package so others do not notice. -unique= creator decides who can have this weapon. description: The dart launcher is a very dangerous weapon in the hands of a skilled user. Is is essintialy six metal rotating barrels that fire different types of 4 and a half inch long darts. The darts are propelled by a very strong spring. The spring is activated by a pull string that is located at the base of the barrels. This weapon was crafted by a very talented weaponforger so it is indestructable. The dart launcher is attached to a cloth bracer that is worn around either the left or right wrist. Attached to the cloth bracer are ten small circular rings that can hold one dart each. The dart launcher was also crafted so that it could easily be hidden by the user's sleeves. loaded with: 16 normal darts sub weapon: un-equiped slot one: un- equiped slot two: un- equiped slot three: ITEMS pouch: 3 shuriken, 3 kunai, Item Name: Ninja Wire Description: A tool used by many shinobi in multiple aspects of thier work. A long thin wire of woven metal. Specifically designed to be flexible, yet hard to break. Made thin enough to be invisble to the untrained naked eye. Often used in conjuction with Long range weaponry for more fine control of the attack. Also used in trap making for it's ability to set off the trap from concealment. Useful in binding, and attacks involving such, for its durability. Effects: When used in conjuction with a ranged attack, increase chance to hit by 10%. Can return weapons with wire attached and weapon is returned in setup phase. One wire per returned weapon. When used in a justu involving the status effects immobilized and ensnared, increase duration of effect by 1 turn (not surpassing the maximum). Can be used as a weapon that deals no damage, but lowers evasion by 10 for each wire that connects. The wire is destroyed after any use, save returning weapons. This only applies to weapons that miss. ( 10 pieces.) items in vault: nothing money on hand: $50 ANIMALS none UPDATED LOG character approval: Rei- Oct 28, Draseri- Nov 16, Khaos- Nov 16 leveled up: Up to level 13 May 6 Here skill points: jutsu i need to put in: 8 EXP till next level: 152/200 TXP:1185 GXP:0 MONEY LOG - received 200 for a B rank mission ( TST) - received 125 for D rank missions - spent a lot of money in buying weapons - bought 100 dollars worth of ninja wire - received 50 dollars for C rank mission - spent 160 buying paralyzing mist dart BATTLE LOG wins: 1 ( Azure) losses: draws: MISSION LOG rank D: 5 rank C: 2 rank B: rank A: rank S: Edited June 26, 2006 by shinobi523
Rei Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 (edited) So an average academy student managed to survive a punch into a brick wall by a Chuunin and continue fight? Logically the level gap between Chuunin and student is about 30+, alone the punch should have killed him. If this Chuunin kileld to low rakning Shinboi (Gennin)then a mere academy student shouldn't have lived. Use spaces! Edited October 28, 2005 by Rei
Guest Tao Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 other than what rei said..it looks ok. pretty sloppy though but cool. hmm another nara huh?? well if you make it i welcome you as a another nara. (i would say fellow nara but your not one et) but i do agree w/ Rei...that bg is faaarr fecthed..aint one way a acada could beat a chuunin, unless its Saba Ku No Gaara...>.>
shinobi523 Posted October 28, 2005 Author Posted October 28, 2005 Thanks for the compliments, and i just wanted to say that Naruto was able to beat that mizuki guy when he was an academy student
Hardcore Skittlez Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 If we were talking by the limits of the real world, it would be possible. Except for the punching through a wall thing. Children would actually be the best type of assassin, appearing innocent, and un-suspecting. Other than that, its pretty good.
shinobi523 Posted October 28, 2005 Author Posted October 28, 2005 It doesn't say he got punched through the wall he got punched into the wall
Rei Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 (edited) Thanks for the compliments, and i just wanted to say that Naruto was able to beat that mizuki guy when he was an academy student <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Naruto is the vessel of kyuubi [big advantage] and summoned over 2000 clones with a forbidden justu. Please get your facts right before making a comment. Please don't compair your chsracter to Naruto, he's one fo the few Gennin with a stockpile of A-rank(Jouunin/Sennin level) justu. Edited October 28, 2005 by Rei
Hardcore Skittlez Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 So, the mass shadow clone jutsu is forbidden? I think Naruto should have been, well, 'disciplined', if you know what I mean. And even though it says the Kage Bushin is a forbidden, why do we have it as a Chuunin level jutsu? It said it was a Jounin level jutsu in the show, although this does not follow the show, and I am perfectly fine with it being a Chuunin Jutsu, I just would like to know why it is so different from the anime.
Rei Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 Mass is forbidden, standard is B-rank much is around the Jounnin advance Chuunin level. Qoo and other mods during 3.0 thought it was such a common justu that it shouldn't be classed as forbidden. Mass will be released later, after I work out the other cloning bugs. Double Snake Assassination Skill (Souja Sousai no Jutsu) is also forbidden, but we classed it as a Jounnin justu.
shinobi523 Posted October 28, 2005 Author Posted October 28, 2005 Rei I wasn't trying to compare myself to Naruto, and I never said i beat the chunin. The Anbu that through the kunai into his back did.
shinobi523 Posted October 28, 2005 Author Posted October 28, 2005 I'm sorry about double posting but in my last post i ment to say threw but i accidentaly typed through. sorry
Guest Tao Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 then just hit the edit botton. because double posting within minutes is obserd.. just make sure u fix your bg.
shinobi523 Posted October 28, 2005 Author Posted October 28, 2005 (edited) Thank you for the advice Draseri. Will everyone please re-read my background story and tell me if it is better. If it is not please tell me what is wrong and i will try and fix it. Edited October 28, 2005 by shinobi523
Guest Tao Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 (edited) umm..yea its better than before. i can see that kinda thing happening. good good. we might have a new nara after all . Edited October 28, 2005 by Draseri
shinobi523 Posted October 28, 2005 Author Posted October 28, 2005 (edited) I need three approvels for my character right Edited October 28, 2005 by shinobi523
Guest Tao Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 yup so wait and be patient ... or pm if u want.
Rei Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 Rei I wasn't trying to compare myself to Naruto,and I never said i beat the chunin. The Anbu that through the kunai into his back did. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> By bring up Naruto you're compairng your character to Naruto. I'll approve. Another Nara to increase my hate.
Guest Tao Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 By bring up Naruto you're compairng your character to Naruto. I'll approve. Another Nara to increase my hate. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> what is that sopposed to mean??
shinobi523 Posted October 28, 2005 Author Posted October 28, 2005 yah Rei what do you have against the Nara clan
Rei Posted October 28, 2005 Posted October 28, 2005 Never said I had a problem with the clan, only it's members; Shikamaru is 2D character. I like the custom Nara's on NA, except for this one.
shinobi523 Posted October 29, 2005 Author Posted October 29, 2005 Please I need two more people to officialy approve my character
shinobi523 Posted October 30, 2005 Author Posted October 30, 2005 Please admins and moderators i need two more approvals so i can become a gennin.
Rei Posted October 30, 2005 Posted October 30, 2005 Please don't bump your topic within 72 hours. PM someone if you want an apporval, we don't check ever board.
Hardcore Skittlez Posted November 2, 2005 Posted November 2, 2005 name: Totomoni Kagrmane no Jutsutype: Taijutsu rank: gennin cost: 5 damage: 20 effects: n/a description: must have kagemane no jutsu on play. You cheat the opponent to follow your movements and then make a movement to make him hit his head on something ( i.e. a tree or a wall), but you are safe. This dispels kagemane no jutsu. That is an approved Jutsu? I thought gennin Jutsu damage was on a 1:1 thinger..
