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Rising Wing Blood Hawk Style Effect: Upon activation the user loses all <Crow Charges> and Additionally, When the user activates a gate for the first time in a battle they gain five charges. -When your opponent is affected by [Impaired Eyesight] or [Blind], they ignore the penalties attached and increase their Accuracy by 5X%. X is equal to the number of <Blood Hawk> charges you hold, to a maximum of 5. Then, each time you hit your opponent with a <Blood Hawk> taijutsu technique, they suffer Bleeding equal to the 1.5Y for one turn, where Y is the difference between their base and current accuracy. -When performing a <Blood Hawk> Taijutsu technique, you may spend 2 charges to gain one turn of Haste [2]. -When performing a Blood Hawk Weapon technique you may spend 1 charge to add one turn of burn with a damage equal or less than 70 this may exceed maximum -Additionally Each turn your opponent is not affected by Blind or Impaired Eyesight, lose two <Blood Hawk> charges. Requirements: Hachimon[Eight Gates], Kaimon or Higher. Eye Catching Crow Style Description: An even higher evolution for the eye catching crow style, Combing the the brute force of the eight gates and the deadly precision of eye-catching crow. a deadly whirlwind of lashes and powerful impacts is born. -2 sp

You started with best now try the rest with Tokei Hatake! This lovable dumbass has the charisma of the brave little toaster and every bit of his electric personality please choose him as your June champion this year http://www.ninja-academy-online.com/wiki/index.php?title=File:Ga9yA.png

The Argentum Blade Type: Rapier {Medium} Level: 10 Attributes: Special: Piercing Silver the first time each turn an opponent is hit by an attack from this weapon their defence is reduced by 40 for 5 turns. This effect can stack up to five times. $? Description: With a blade of sliver and titanium, Tokei hatake has once again made an attempt at forging himself a sword.

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StormRide Type: Ninjutsu & Taijutsu {Storm|Eye-Catching Crow} Rank: Chunnin Cost: 63 Chakra & 63 Stamina Effect: This techniques has four strikes. The first deals one turn of Exposed, and the remaining three deal 36 damage each. Description: Riding the aftertrail of a storm ball can give the user added momentum and destructive force. Points: 6

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Tokei would like to buy; Shiratsuyu Mk II | しらつゆ Mk II Armor Kind: Prosthetic Arm Body Placement: Left Arm Base Durability: 200 Attributes: Unique Special: Prosthetic Arm: The user may ignore the effects of 'Loss of Arm'. Practical Barrier: Each time the wielder utilizes a chakra based technique, 0.3x Chakra is stored within this item, where the value of x is equal to the Chakra cost the wielder paid. The maximum amount of Chakra that can be stored in the item is equal to 200y, where the value of y is equal to the wielder's ninja rank. Twice per battle the wielder may expend all stored chakra to activate this ability in the Response Phase or Main Phase: Response Phase: The wielder gains a barrier with 2x Health. This barrier is destroyed at the end of the phase and the wielder loses their Main Phase. Main Phase: The wielder gains a shield with 2x Health. This shield last for three (3) turns Description: The Shiratsuyu Mark Two (Mk II for short) is another one of Kumogakure's prosthetic limbs. Created for combat users, it is designed to withstand the pressure and damage sustained in combat, while giving the full functional abilities of having an arm. As with all Kumogakure prosthetic limbs, the arm is designed in proportion with the wielder. Within the center of the leg is an internal skeleton, composed of a mxiture of copper-nickel alloy, aluminum alloy, and carbon fiber. Additional machinery has been added to allow for the leg to be more durable in different weather conditions and channel chakra. The outermost layer is considered the 'skin', which is composed of the same materials as the skeletal base and a steel coat, in order to improve durability and protect internal components. The arm is connected to the user's nervous and chakra systems, allowing for proper chakra channeling and pain reception. Cost: 1950 Money on hand: 1,965

Tokei would like to sell 4 milk chocolate Shuriken for 50$

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Okay changed the cost to reflect what you said and also changed the description to better fit a nin/tai Hybrid

Editorial notes: Proof of concept jutsu I want to see how much stamina these cost. I know its going to need some stamina cost but at the moment i am unsure on how to cost it as all the effects are main site one

Art of the Crystal Bush Type: Ninjutsu | Taijutsu [Crystal] Rank: Chunnin Cost: 96 Chakra & 40 Stamina Damage: N/a Effect: The target gains one turn of [Exposed] and Bleeding [50] For three turns Description: Thorn seeds are attached on impact and slowly grow thorny vines while also keeping their center open. -6 Jp

Plight of One Sun Type: Genjutsu [Elemental Archetype| Scorch] Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Chakra Damage: 20 Chakra Damage Effect: Target is Tired for two turns Description: Once under the genjutsu, the afflicted will begin to see the sun grow in size and intensity. This causes the afflicted to use more chakra and grow fatigued -2 Jp Heat Wave Type: Genjutsu [Elemental Archetype| Scorch] Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Chakra Effects: -50 to Evasion for one turn Description: Once under the genjutsu, The afflicted will feel wave of pure heat that almost burns them when the dodge attacks. -2 Jp

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Storm Step Type Hybrid [Ninjutsu|Taijutsu|Storm|Eye-Catching Crow] Rank: Chunnin Cost: 75 Chakra & 75 Stamina Damage: 75 Description: Kicking the face with greats amounts storm energy and stepping off is a great way to humiliate an enemy and gain height. Effect: To the user two turns of haste and upon successful strike the opponent is afflicted with staggered for one turn -6 jp Staggered Haste You cannot block. Your total Speed is increased by 15%. Max Duration: 3 turns Max Duration: 3 turns Cost Points: 20/turn Cost Points: 35/turn

http://www.ninja-academy-online.com/jutsurules.php Problem: Medical Tag is next the the rank of the jutsu and not the type Gift of the Spirits II Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chuunin [Medical] Cost: 120 Chakra Effect: The target gains 120 chakra. This technique may only target a character once per battle and cannot target the user. Description: A bright blue beam strikes from the medical nin's palm and hits the target, infusing it with an immense amount of energy. Points: 4 [Evolving; 1 Gift of the Spirits] Expected: Move medical tag to the type line. Character rewarded: Tokei Hatake

Thank you for catching my blunders once more but i have fixed them

It has been fixed

Well dont i feel stupid for not reading basic rules But it has been fixed

Again Main site But yay its general just shoot a pm if you want this *Unless it exists which it totally could*