Ravage Nocturne Posted August 6, 2006 Posted August 6, 2006 (edited) I will be taking these when I become a Jounin, not right now. At any rate, I figured I'd attempt to get them looked over and approved ahead of time, since my Chuunin techs have yet to be approved...(That's a hint so I don't have to go bump them. Nin, Gen, AND Tai, kids) As I fulfill the requirements, I will be taking these Feza-Tacchi No Sunajin Shubou (Feathered Touch of the Plotting Sandman) Type: Genjutsu (Offense) Rank: Jounin Cost: 380 Chakra Damage: N/A Effect: Sleep: At the beginning of your response phase you roll a d10. If you roll an 3 or lower you wake up and continue your turn regularly. If you miss your roll you cannot do any actions in your turn, but in your Main Phase you gain +5% to your Health, Chakra and Stamina. If the person(s) in a sleep state is hit afterwards, he/she wakes up immediately afterwards (Lasts for 5 turns, or until awakened naturally or by being injured) Description: Named after the mythical Sandman that is said to deliver sleep and good dreams to children, this Genjutsu seeks to afflict all those around the user with a sense of sleepiness. The illusion is said to be almost non-existent, due to the quickness of it. Apparently, the vision of a man entirely made of sand quickly presses a finger to the eyes of each individual, resembling the person most loved by the individual victim. Soft and harmless, they lull the group of people into a deep sleep, and nothing more. Hopefully drawing the victims into a deep sleep, the user is capable of plotting more devastating jutsu, or to escape or conduct previously affirmed planning without fear of being found out Points: 8 Restrictions: Must learn this technique from Asher --------------------------------------------…………………..----------------------------------------- Shintekiseiha No Sentoumugen (Infinite Spire of Mental Conquest) Type: Genjutsu (Offense) Rank: Jounin Cost: 160 Chakra (112 Chakra per turn to maintain; up to 5 turns maximum) Damage: N/A Effect: -200 Resistance and Concentration Description: A complex Genjutsu involving only brief hand seals, the victim will find themselves believing that a large spire of esoteric nature has risen from their skull, ripping through their skin, and driving the bottom of it through their body, and into the ground. Raising high into the heavens, it commands the lightning around the heavens, and causes flashes of light to repeatedly dance behind the eyes of the victim, causing them distraction and mental agony. It is said that this spire has ‘brain-like' appearance, and that it causes the victim to believe that is their brain escaping from them. This Genjutsu seeks to cause extreme mental disruption and dysfunction, keeping the enemy pre-occupied with the strangeness and the shock of this illusion, such that the user may find an opening Points: 4 Restrictions: Must learn this technique from Asher --------------------------------------------…………………..----------------------------------------- Naitekikikan Auta-Bakuhatsu (Inner Organ Outer Explosion) Type: Genjutsu (Offense) Rank: Jounin Cost: 160 Chakra (112 Chakra per turn to maintain; up to 5 turns maximum) Damage: N/A Effect: -200 Speed and Evasion Description: This Genjutsu afflicts the enemy with the belief that their abdomen has become swollen, and continues to swell to the point that it bursts, spilling their innards all around them. A graphic and gory display of illusions, it looks and feels quite real, rendering the victim almost entirely useless in combat. Usually causing a panicked reaction, they tend to drop to their knees and attempt to scoop these organs back into their abdominal cavity, making them an easy target, and unaware of enemy movement Points: 4 Restrictions: Must learn this technique from Asher --------------------------------------------…………………..----------------------------------------- Sharingan Meimu No Yubijuu Heiteikonjou (Sharingan Illusion of the Ten Finger Spirit Suppression) Type: Genjutsu (Offense) Rank: Jounin Cost: 284 Chakra Damage: N/A Effect: [Requires The Mangekyou Sharingan be Active] Vulnerable: Lose your next Response Phase. Opponent is not affected by vulnerable if they were stunned in the previous post. This effect only occurs the first three times this jutsu is successfully used Disorganized: Lose your next Setup Phase. Opponent is not affected by disorganized if they were stunned in the previous pos. This effect only occurs the first three times this jutsu is successfully used Blind: Your accuracy is reduced to 20 (unless you had less accuracy than 20), unless your character has an unusual ability to use their other senses, and your evasion is likewise reduced to zero except in the aforementioned circumstances (Lasts for 2 turns) Numb: -60 Defense, opponent cannot hold any item and all held weapon damage is cut in half. Burn and Bleed effects last one post longer if the opponent is numb (Last for 2 turns) Dizzy: User is unable to use Genjustu based attacks, Concentration is cut in half, chance of hitting -20% (Lasts for 2 turns) Description: Uchiha Asher's "Finger Jutsu” that he performs by forcing an enemy to glance at his hand, in a subtle manner. It is said that with activation of the Mangekyou Sharingan, that you may translate a Genjutsu from even your fingers, instead of requiring direct eye contact. Asher will start this technique by using only one finger on his right hand. His target does not have to look into his eyes; a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, he can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see truly horrific visions that sicken and disgust them. They typically involve friends or family, and either torturous situation or condescending speech. This seems to ring true, as a mere glance at his finger when he sends Chakra into it may result in an awful series of illusions. Typical symptoms seem to cause a victim to suffer from feeling cold and numb, dizzy and ill, disorganized and confused, and often times left vulnerable to further attack. It is a crafty and under-handed way to perform Genjutsu, but is known to be a very difficult technique to perfect. Does not affect anyone suffering from the status "Blind” Points: 7 Restrictions: Must learn this technique from Asher and have the Mangekyou Sharingan --------------------------------------------…………………..----------------------------------------- Fuuchouin Jigen (Dimension Sealing Method) Type: Fuuinjutsu (Sealing) Rank: Forbidden Cost: 600 + 10x (X=Level of Summon) Damage: N/A Effect: Banishment: Target Animal or Item Summon (All Ranks) is unavailable to the victim until this seal is removed. They are instantly banished from the field of battle if they previously have been summoned. This must be used for every individual contract an enemy has, to keep them from summoning at all Description: A powerful technique said to hold the potential to negate a contract that a summoned object or animal may have with a person. The seal forms a permanent series of intricate tattoos around the area where a summoning tattoo is kept, or if none exists, it appears upon the torso of the victim; if the summon is on the battlefield, it is immediately banished back to the dimension from which it hails, leaving the person alone once again. Legend says that a desperate Kage created this Fuuinjutsu due to his lack of summoning potential. It seems that only one contract may be broken at a time, and due to the enormous amount of Chakra that is consumed in this practice, it is difficult to negate a series of contracts at once. Apparently, the dimension from which the summon comes is locked from the victim, unless the seal is removed Points: 10 Restrictions: Must Learn from Uchiha Asher ((This one is more of an idea, than a personal creation. I figure it might be a fair addition to the Main Site's Fuuinjutsu, for those people who just hate summons, and don't want to use their own. Anyways, the cost is less than the "Ultimate" Sealing Method, and higher than all others. I also placed the JP cost in a similar design)) --------------------------------------------…………………..----------------------------------------- Kaihou Fuuchouin Jigen (Dimension Sealing Releasement Method) Type: Fuuinjutsu (Sealing) Rank: Forbidden Cost: 600 Damage: N/A Effect: Releasement: Target Animal or Item Summon (All Ranks) is now available to the victim of the Fuuchouin Jigen skill. (Must be performed during combat. Otherwise, ten 100 word posts must be made by the victim, and five 100 word posts must be made by a person with this ability; must be used once per unsealing (One use will not release two sealed summons) Description: A powerful technique said to hold the potential to re-valididate a contract that a summoned object or animal may have with a person, when it has previously been negated or sealed. The seal forms a permanent series of intricate tattoos around the area where the Fuuchouin Jigen seal has been placed, Negating the effects of the awful seal. It seems that only one contract may be released at a time, and due to the enormous amount of Chakra that is consumed in this practice, it is difficult to release a series of contracts at once Points: 8 Restrictions: Must Learn from Uchiha Asher --------------------------------------------…………………..----------------------------------------- Edited August 12, 2006 by Ravage Nocturne
Nappers Posted August 6, 2006 Posted August 6, 2006 Feza-Tacchi No Sunajin Shubou (Feathered Touch of the Plotting Sandman); - App'd. Shintekiseiha No Sentoumugen (Infinite Spire of Mental Conquest); You're upkeep need only be 112. - App'd. Naitekikikan Auta-Bakuhatsu (Inner Organ Outer Explosion); Same. - App'd. Sharingan Meimu No Yubijuu Heiteikonjou (Sharingan Illusion of the Ten Finger Spirit Suppression); - App'd. Fuuchouin Jigen (Dimension Sealing Method); mmmm - App'd...
Ravage Nocturne Posted August 6, 2006 Author Posted August 6, 2006 Excellent, thanks for the insight. Made the appropriate changes
Ravage Nocturne Posted August 12, 2006 Author Posted August 12, 2006 Guys. For real, I hate bumping, and you know it. Let's go through the basics: 1. These are all legit, following the book (Except for the Fuuinjutsu; also added the 'counter' to it, costing less since it is less 'useful' in that regard) 2. Nappers has proven that they are not 'broken' or 'overpowered' in any fashion 3. Go look at my Genjutsu, Taijutsu, and remaining Ninjutsu, before I have to go bump THEM. I need these jutsu soon, hence my 'making' them, it turns out. Thanks, since now I'm sure for real you'll actually go look them over (Rawrs, for crying out LOUD what does it take nowadays?)
