Skywhales Level 4; Kukailimoku

[Kouta]

Mobile Monolith, Kukailimoku

Kukailimoku, or Moku-sama, is a whale of absolutely staggering proportions. Whales are already large creatures. Kukailimoku is the size of a mountain. A juggernaught in the air, the massive creature moves with the patience of trees. Her language is a keening, earth rumbling bass, only intelligible by her summoner. Kukailimoku is beyond old. Many stories place her alive before the world was created, floating in the void, her own power giving her all the oxygen he needed to breathe. To summon Moku-sama is an act of herculean summoning strength, as she only appears in the human plane after 100 or more years of deliberation with herself and her family. Any other entrance into the world requires a summoner whose will is iron-clad. Once summoned she'll happily follow her summoner's orders however. She sees most humans as babies, and indulges their games like a doting grandmother.

Stats
[Health Power] 2250/2250
[Chakra] 1200/1200
[Stamina] 50/50
[Taijutsu] 0
[Defense] 2000 [2200]
[Ninjutsu] 400
[Genjutsu] 1500
[Concentration] 1000 [1300]
[Speed] 1600
[Accuracy] 0
[Evasion] 0

Skills
Summon Family Element: Cloud
Effect: This Summon Family has an affinity for Cloud Element Jutsu, and receives "Combinatorial Elements: Cloud" for free. When a Cloud element technique is used, the user may subtract 20-x from their Speed Percentile, where the value of x is the character's level divided by 6, rounded up; the subtraction applied through this effect may never be less than 4. This effect may not be applied more than once per turn. In addition, the user may choose to apply the bonus from one of the Subtle Elements skills required to learn this element if they own it.
Cost: 0

Subtle Elements; Wind

Effect: May use Wind element techniques. Any response phase techniques used in response to a Wind Techniques have an additional 10% chance to fail. All 5 'Subtle Element' skills share ranks.
Cost: -1

 

Time Archetype

Effect: Time Archetype genjutsu gain an additional 10% to total stat addition and subtracts on Speed, Accuracy and Evasion.

Cost: -1
 

Brahma, The Creator
Effect: Genjutsu of the user will deal an additional 20% more base ghost damage and an additional 20% stat reduction. This multiplier, in this case and this case only, allows you to break the base caps. You may not use any Taijutsu and may not have any skills that give negative effects towards Taijutsu abilities.
Cost: -3

Genjutsu Shaper [Rank 3]
Effect: For every rank in this skill, status effects the user inflicts with Genjutsu on opponents have a chance to last one post longer based on the opponent's dodge roll. This will not allow you to break the maximum post duration of any status effect.

Rank 3: On a dodge roll of a 1-60, status effects last one turn longer.

Cost: -3

 

Genjutsu Creator [Rank 6]

Effect: Genjutsu reduces non-tank stats of opponents by 30x additional points per rank in this skill, where x is equal to your ninja rank. If an attack reduces multiple non-tank stats the user may choose to divide this bonus between those stats however they want. You may never apply more than 10 combined ranks of Genjutsu Creator, Martial Artist, and Ninjutsu Mastery to a single attack.

Cost: -6

Knowledge of the Ages [Rank 1]

Effect: This summon may learn an additional jutsu of the maximum rank it is allowed to learn per rank in this skill. All jutsu point costs for this jutsu must be paid.

Cost: -1
 

Equipment

Gargantuan Cloud Bank
Placement: Stomach
Description: The Clouds that support Kukailimoku are so dense that they can support her mountain-sized weight. They are also naturally infused with her chakra, so that she can direct her attacks through the clouds with ease.
Effect: +200 Defense, +300 Concentration

Edited April 23, 2020 by Kouta

[Kouta]

Time Archetype Genjutsu

• Cloud Release; Giant’s Huff
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype | AoE ]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 115 Chakra
Damage: 5 Ghost Damage
Effect: AoE Jutsu. This jutsu does not target any of the user’s Allies. Targets lose 5 Speed for 3 Turns and are Fazed.
Description: The ninja will give a large, deep throating huffing sound. With it will come a large and sudden "whumpf" of clouds expelling in all direction. Enemies in a nearby area will suddenly find themselves rocking back a little, a tiny bit disorganized and sluggish to act.
Cost: 4 JP

 

 

• Cloud Release; Giant’s Keening
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 210 Chakra
Damage: 5 Ghost Damage
Effect:  Target is Fazed for 1 Turn, Slow for 2 Turns, Deafened for 2 Turns, Tired for 4 Turns, and Loses 10 Evasion for 3 Turns.
Description: The ninja will open their mouth wide and let loose a single, high-pitched wail that whales often do. The concussive nature of the attack will propel clouds forward from the user's mouth like a wall. The enemy who hears the sound, however, will suddenly feel the weight settle against their bones as clouds wash over them, feeling a bit of weariness and hearing loss from the chakra-amplified sound.
Cost: 6 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Giant’s Rebuke

Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 170 Chakra

Damage: 5 Ghost Damage

Effect: Target is Deafened, Prone, Shackled [Paired Legs] and Vulnerable for 1 Turn. Target Loses 15 Evasion for 1 Turn.

Description: The ninja will snap their fingers, and the enemy who hears their sound will suddenly see their vision clouding over with foglike clouds. Once in the genjutsu-scape, they will hear sharp words of rebuke from someone who commands a position of authority over them, often highly exaggerated and louder than life. Often dredged from someone’s past, the words take them out of the fight to a time when they had done something wrong, and the enemy is left vulnerable to attack while they get berated.

Cost: 5 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Blind Man’s Fear
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 170 Chakra
Damage: 10 Ghost Damage
Effect: Inflicts “Blind” for 2 Turns. Target Loses 50 Accuracy for 2 Turns.
Description: The ninja will blow a concentrated stream of clouds into their target’s face. The air is laced with chakra and aimed at the eyes, and for a brief period of time, the target will find themselves unable to see.
Cost: 5 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Giant’s Opening
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 230 Chakra
Damage: 5 Ghost Damage
Effect:  Target is Fazed for 1 Turn, Receptive for 1 Turn, Tired for 4 Turns, and suffers a Migraine for 3 Turns. Target Loses 5 Speed for 3 Turns.
Description: The ninja will sway slightly, gathering clouds around their target and moving hypnotically. The action is a subtle trick to get the target to lose focus, opening their mind and allowing the ninja’s genjutsu to slip through. But this forced opening feels wrong, and often leaves a splitting headache behind in its wake.
Cost: 7 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Giant's Self Fulfilling Prophecy
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 230 Chakra
Damage: 5 Ghost Damage
Effect: Inflicts “Destroy Weapon” on the Target. Target Loses 5 Speed for 3 Turns and is Fazed for 1 Turn.
Description: The ninja will lock eyes with their target, and in the brief moment of contact, they will inject the victim with a host of thoughts, mostly bad ones about how their own weapon will be used against them. Clouds will surround them and create a fake landscape upon which their fantasy will be played out live in front of them. Driven to a frenzy by the thoughts and visions, a target will often bash their own weapon onto the ground until it shatters, making sure the vision cannot come to pass. Upon seeing their handiwork, most enemies find themselves intensely confused or foggy for several moments.
Cost: 7 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Giant's Time Dilation

Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 270 Chakra

Damage: 5 Ghost Damage

Effect: Target 1 Opponent. They suffer “Slow” for 3 Turns, Fazed for 1 Turn, and Lose 20 Speed for 3 Turns. Target 1 Ally (or Yourself). They receive “Haste” for 3 Turns.

Description: With a single snapping sound, a target will suddenly experience very rapid time dilation. Cloudy, fog-like tufts of air will obscure their vision and cling to them, altering their perception of time. Time in both directions will seem to stretch forward and back, as their own body begins to move much slower than normal, they'll notice they are existing in a sort of lag, their enemy's motions finishing and landing their blows before their cloud addled mind even sees them move.

Cost: 7 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Giant’s Challenge!

Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 320 Chakra

Damage: 5 Ghost Damage

Effect:  Target is Fazed for 1 Turn, Startled for 2 Turns, Charmed for 2 Turns, Afraid;2 for 3 Turns, and Taunted for 3 Turns. Target Loses 5 Speed for 3 Turns.

Description: With a mighty roar, the user will lace their voice with chakra, and any who hear it will suddenly find themselves staring, slack-jawed, at the monster who issued this challenge. Using subtle Genjutsu and artful manipulation of the Clouds, the user will veil their teammates in banks of clouds, while parting them around themselves so that the sunlight shines directly upon them. Most enemies will be suddenly in fear and awe of the skillful ninja who conjures such a holy and terrifying sight.
Cost: 8 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Giant’s Wall

Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 375 Chakra

Damage: 5 Ghost Damage

Effect:  This jutsu may only be used Twice per Battle. Target the user or one of their Allies. Erects a Barrier around the target with 760 Physical Health. This barrier’s max duration is 4 turns. Target one Enemy in Battle. This jutsu deals it's Ghost Damage to that target and reduces their Speed 5 for 3 Turns.

Description: With a nod, a swarm of clouds will surround a ninja of the user’s choosing. Once surrounded, the clouds will touch down, the chakra laden within them sinking beneath the surface of the target’s skin. Once inside, the chakra can either solidify, creating a physical barrier, or they can use the chakra imbued within them to transmit information directly to the ally’s brain, lending them the advanced knowledge of how Ninjutsu works directly from the mind of the caster, increasing their prowess with Ninjutsu techniques.
Cost: 9 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Giant’s Boon!

Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 375 Chakra + 270 Chakra Per Turn Upkeep

Damage: 5 Ghost Damage

Effect:  Target the user or one of their Allies. Increase that Target’s Ninjutsu or Defense by 600 for the duration of this jutsu. This jutsu’s max duration is 4 turns. Also target one enemy in Battle. This jutsu deals its Ghost Damage to that target, and reduces their Speed by 5 for 3 Turns.

Description: With a nod, a swarm of clouds will surround a ninja of the user’s choosing. Once surrounded, the clouds will touch down, the chakra laden within them sinking beneath the surface of the target’s skin. Once inside, the chakra can either solidify, creating a physical barrier, or they can use the chakra imbued within them to transmit information directly to the ally’s brain, lending them the advanced knowledge of how Ninjutsu works directly from the mind of the caster, increasing their prowess with Ninjutsu techniques.
Cost: 18 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Whaling Roar
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 320 Chakra
Damage: 90 Ghost Damage
Effect: Target is Fazed for 1 Turn, Slow for 1 Turn, Stunned for 1 Turn, and Loses 265 Speed for 1 Turn.
Description: With a massive, concussive sonic sound, the ninja will make a roaring sound that sounds very similar to a whale’s loud, guttural roar. This force will fling a solid wall of clouds forwards, to break over an enemy like a wave on the ocean. Those on the receiving end will be physically halted by the sound’s intensity and the throbbing pain in their skulls.
Cost: 8

 

• Cloud Release; Force of Will
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 340 Chakra
Damage: 270 Ghost Damage
Effect: Target is Clobbered and Weakened for 2 Turns. Target Loses 15 Speed for 1 Turn.
Description: With a mighty roar of effort, the ninja will launch the whole of their will forward, slamming it into their target’s mind. Their sheer force of personality will press down like a great weight upon their enemy. From above, one will notice a gentle spiraling of clouds, with an empty space in a perfect circle around the target, the forces of the user's chakra drawing in clouds like a magnet. The sudden exertion of the weight often knocks people physically to the ground, and they describe a great pressure holding them still. Few can even move under a skilled practitioner, and those who can find themselves greatly hampered.
Cost: 9 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Sweet Release of Death
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Sennin
Cost: 785 Chakra
Damage: 700 Chakra Damage or 700 Stamina Damage
Effect:  This jutsu is dodged as if it were a Genjutsu. Target is Fazed. Target suffers Hypothermia;2 for 2 Turns. Target Loses 5 Evasion for 3 Turns
Description: With gentle, nonsensical words, the ninja will place the target in a trancelike state where they release their body’s unconscious hold on their own muscles and reserves of chakra, causing it to harmlessly leech out of their skin into the air, depleting their reserves and opening them up for an attack at the same time. The releasing of so much bodily energy, however, causes a severe hypothermic reaction from the body, since it’s bleeding off its stores of heat along with the leaking chakra.
Cost: 26

[Kouta]

Everything on this Summon is APPROVED!

 

Skills

-1 Subtle; Wind
-1 Time Archetype
-3 Brahma the Creator
-3 Genjutsu Shaper
-6 Genjutsu Creator [Rank 6]
-1 Knowledge of the Ages [Rank 1]

Total: 15/15 SP

 

Jutsu

-26 Sweet Release of Death
-9 Force of Will
-8 Whaling Roar
-18 Giant's Boon
-9 Giant's Wall
-8 Giant's Challenge
-7 Giant's Time Dilation
-7 Giant's Self-Fulfilling Prophecy
-7 Giant's Opening
-5 Blind Man's Fear
-5 Giant's Rebuke
-6 Giant's Keening
-4 Giant's Huff

Total: 119/120 JP
Senin: 1/1

Edited April 23, 2020 by Kouta

[almondsAndRain]

Cloud Release; Sweet Release of Death has two options, which means it is technically two techniques. That puts it over the 1 Sennin technique limit. Buying one rank of this skill would allow you to go over the limit, or you can just switch the technique out for another. If you do buy the skill, be sure to let Tony know even though it's a general skill, he requests it in the second post in the thread.

 

Other than that, there is just two minor things:

1. Your ledger says you took 7 ranks in Genjutsu Creator, but you only have 6 listed in the sheet.
2. Summons can only have one piece of equipment. 

 

[Kouta]

Collapsed the Equipment into one. Took "Knowledge of the Ages" and corrected my spenditure log.

[almondsAndRain]

Approved.

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