Skywhales Level 3; Okohola

[Kouta]

Razor-Finned Rebel, Okohola

Okohola is a young whale to be so powerful. His intense skill at manipulating time and mental energies makes him second only to Kukailimoku himself, and that has caused his star to rise. But Okohola is impulsive and reckless (as far as Whales are concerned). He eagerly answers the calls of Summoners, hoping to test his might against wave after wave of enemies. He is the only whale who has learned some of the human tongue, although his sentences are still pretty monosyllabic. His more complex thoughts remain mentally related. Okohola's dream in life is to slow an opponent to a complete standstill with the power of his mind alone. He seeks a powerful summoner to make that happen.

Stats
[Health Power] 1550/1550
[Chakra] 800/800
[Stamina] 50/50
[Taijutsu] 0
[Defense] 1700
[Ninjutsu] 200
[Genjutsu] 1300
[Concentration] 1000 [1300]
[Speed] 1400
[Accuracy] 0
[Evasion] 0

Skills
Summon Family Element: Cloud
Effect: This Summon Family has an affinity for Cloud Element Jutsu, and receives "Combinatorial Elements: Cloud" for free. When a Cloud element technique is used, the user may subtract 20-x from their Speed Percentile, where the value of x is the character's level divided by 6, rounded up; the subtraction applied through this effect may never be less than 4. This effect may not be applied more than once per turn. In addition, the user may choose to apply the bonus from one of the Subtle Elements skills required to learn this element if they own it.
Cost: 0

Subtle Elements; Wind

Effect: May use Wind element techniques. Any response phase techniques used in response to a Wind Techniques have an additional 10% chance to fail. All 5 'Subtle Element' skills share ranks.
Cost: -1

 

Time Archetype

Effect: Time Archetype genjutsu gain an additional 10% to total stat addition and subtracts on Speed, Accuracy and Evasion.

Cost: -1
 

Brahma, The Creator
Effect: Genjutsu of the user will deal an additional 20% more base ghost damage and an additional 20% stat reduction. This multiplier, in this case and this case only, allows you to break the base caps. You may not use any Taijutsu and may not have any skills that give negative effects towards Taijutsu abilities.
Cost: -3

Genjutsu Shaper [Rank 2]
Effect: For every rank in this skill, status effects the user inflicts with Genjutsu on opponents have a chance to last one post longer based on the opponent's dodge roll. This will not allow you to break the maximum post duration of any status effect.

Rank 2: On a dodge roll of a 1-40, status effects last one turn longer.

Cost: -2

 

Genjutsu Creator [Rank 2]

Effect: Genjutsu reduces non-tank stats of opponents by 10x additional points per rank in this skill, where x is equal to your ninja rank. If an attack reduces multiple non-tank stats the user may choose to divide this bonus between those stats however they want. You may never apply more than 10 combined ranks of Genjutsu Creator, Martial Artist, and Ninjutsu Mastery to a single attack.

Cost: -2

Knowledge of the Ages [Rank 1]

Effect: This summon may learn an additional jutsu of the maximum rank it is allowed to learn per rank in this skill. All jutsu point costs for this jutsu must be paid.
Cost: -1

 

Equipment

Pointed Cloud Bank
Placement: Stomach
Description: The Clouds that support Okohola represent his eager nature. They form a sharp arrowhead around his nose, allowing his attacks greater reach and greater effect.
Effect: +300 Concentration

Edited April 23, 2020 by Kouta

[Kouta]

Time Archetype Genjutsu

• Cloud Release; Huff
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype | AoE ]
Rank: Chunnin
Cost: 45 Chakra
Damage: 5 Ghost Damage
Effect: AoE Jutsu. This jutsu does not target any of the user’s Allies. Targets lose 5 Speed for 2 Turns.
Description: The ninja will give a general, dissatisfied huff of air. With it a large bank of clouds will roll out in all direction and push against their enemies. All of the enemies in a nearby area will suddenly find themselves rocking back a little, a tiny bit disorganized and sluggish to act.
Cost: 3

 

• Cloud Release; Keening
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Chunnin

Cost: 90 Chakra
Damage: 5 Ghost Damage
Effect:  Target is Fazed for 1 Turn, Slow for 1 Turn, Deafened for 1 Turn, and Loses 5 Evasion for 1 Turn.
Description: The ninja will open their mouth wide and let loose a single, high-pitched wail that whales often do. The enemy who hears the sound, however, will suddenly feel the weight settle against their bones as a host of clouds begin to swarm around them, feeling a bit of weariness and hearing loss from the chakra-amplified sound.
Cost: 4

 

• Cloud Release; Challenge!

Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Chunnin

Cost: 120 Chakra

Damage: 5 Ghost Damage

Effect:  Target is Afraid;1 for 1 Turn, Charmed for 1 Turn, and Taunted for 2 Turns. Target Loses 5 Speed for 1 Turn.

Description: With a mighty roar, the user will lace their voice with chakra, and any who hear it will suddenly find that they are the most dangerous opponent in combat. The intense force of the shout is often disorienting, but really that’s just to hide the subtle Genjutsu at work affecting their thought patterns. With the addition of the Cloud Element, the roar is timed with a particular shift in the clouds, making it look like the clouds part and beams of sunlight shine through to perfectly illuminate the user, granting an effect of both fear and awe for those who look on.
Cost: 5 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Sharp Words

Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Chunnin

Cost: 115 Chakra

Damage: 5 Ghost Damage

Effect: Target is Deafened, Prone, and Vulnerable for 1 Turn. Target Loses 5 Evasion for 1 Turn.

Description: The ninja will snap their fingers, and the enemy who hears their sound will suddenly see clouds obscure their and vision and hear sharp words of rebuke from someone who commands a position of authority over them. Often dredged from someone’s past, the words take them out of the fight to a time when they had done something wrong, and the enemy is left vulnerable to attack while they get berated.

Cost: 5 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Blind Man’s Fear
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Chunnin
Cost: 115 Chakra
Damage: 10 Ghost Damage
Effect: Inflicts “Blind” for 2 Turns. Target Loses 5 Accuracy for 2 Turns.
Description: The ninja will blow a concentrated stream of clouds into their target’s face. The air is laced with chakra and aimed at the eyes, and for a brief period of time, the target will find themselves unable to see.
Cost: 5

 

• Cloud Release; Self Fulfilling Prophecy
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Chunnin
Cost: 130 Chakra
Damage: 10 Ghost Damage
Effect: Inflicts “Destroy Weapon” on the Target. Target Loses 5 Speed for 2 Turns and is Fazed for 1 Turn.
Description: The ninja will lock eyes with their target, and in the brief moment of contact, they will inject the victim with a host of thoughts, mostly bad ones about how their own weapon will be used against them. Their vision will cloud over, almost foglike, and driven to a frenzy by the thoughts and visions, a target will often bash their own weapon onto the ground until it shatters, making sure the vision cannot come to pass. Upon seeing their handiwork, most enemies find themselves intensely confused or foggy for several moments.
Cost: 6

 

• Cloud Release; Time Dilation

Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Chunnin

Cost: 150 Chakra

Damage: 5 Ghost Damage

Effect: Target 1 Opponent. They suffer “Slow” for 2 Turns and Lose 5 Speed for 1 Turn. Target 1 Ally (or Yourself). They receive “Haste” for 2 Turns.

Description: With a single snapping sound, and a sudden rush of clouds forming around them like the funnel of a tornado, a target will suddenly experience very rapid time dilation. Time in both directions will seem to stretch forward and back, as their own body begins to move much slower than normal, while their enemy moves much faster than normal.

Cost: 6 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Whaling Roar
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 320 Chakra
Damage: 90 Ghost Damage
Effect: Target is Fazed for 1 Turn, Slow for 1 Turn, Stunned for 1 Turn, and Loses 265 Speed for 1 Turn.
Description: With a massive, concussive sonic sound, the ninja will make a roaring sound that sounds very similar to a whale’s loud, guttural roar. This force will fling a solid wall of clouds forwards, to break over an enemy like a wave on the ocean. Those on the receiving end will be physically halted by the sound’s intensity and the throbbing pain in their skulls.
Cost: 8

 

• Cloud Release; Force of Will
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 340 Chakra
Damage: 270 Ghost Damage
Effect: Target is Clobbered and Weakened for 2 Turns. Target Loses 15 Speed for 1 Turn.
Description: With a mighty roar of effort, the ninja will launch the whole of their will forward, slamming it into their target’s mind. Their sheer force of personality will press down like a great weight upon their enemy. From above, one will notice a gentle spiraling of clouds, with an empty space in a perfect circle around the target, the forces of the user's chakra drawing in clouds like a magnet. The sudden exertion of the weight often knocks people physically to the ground, and they describe a great pressure holding them still. Few can even move under a skilled practitioner, and those who can find themselves greatly hampered.
Cost: 9 JP

 

• Cloud Release; Sweet Nothings
Type: Ninjutsu | Genjutsu [ Cloud | Time Archetype ]

Rank: Jounin
Cost: 350 Chakra
Damage: 320 Chakra Damage or 320 Stamina Damage
Effect:  Target is Fazed. Target Loses 10 Evasion for 2 Turns.
Description: With gentle, nonsensical words, the ninja will place the target in a trancelike state where they release their body’s unconscious hold on their own muscles and reserves of chakra, causing it to harmlessly leech out of their skin into the air, depleting their reserves and opening them up for an attack at the same time. As the words take effect, soft beds of clouds will rise up to support the target, making the comforting thoughts that much easier to listen to.
Cost: 18

[Kouta]

Everything on this Summon is APPROVED!

 

Skills

-1 Subtle; Wind
-1 Time Archetype
-3 Brahma the Creator
-2 Genjutsu Shaper [Rank 2]
-2 Genjutsu Creator [Rank 2]
-1 Knowledge of the Ages [Rank 1]

Total: 10/10 SP

 

Jutsu

-18 Sweet Nothings
-9 Force of Will
-8 Whaling Roar
-6 Time Dilation
-6 Self-Fulfilling Prophecy
-5 Blind Man's Fear
-5 Sharp Words

-5 Challenge!
-4 Keening
-3 Huff

Total: 69/70 JP
Jounin: 3/3

Edited April 23, 2020 by Kouta

[almondsAndRain]

Cloud Release; Sweet Nothings has two options, which means it is technically two techniques. That, Whaling Boar, and Force of Will puts the summon over the 3 Jounin technique limit for level 3 summons. Buying one rank of this skill would allow you to go over the limit, or you can just switch a technique out for something else. If you do decide to purchase the skill, be sure to let Tony know even though it's general, he requests it in the second post of that thread.

 

Everything else checks out, though!

[Kouta]

Took one rank of "(Kn)owledge of the (Kn)ages" and adjusted ledgers to account.

[almondsAndRain]

Everything checks out! (Kn)approved!

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