Draiko Posted March 2, 2019 Share Posted March 2, 2019 (edited) Peaking Desert Heat I | Sabaku no Mōsho I Type: Genjutsu [Sunagakure | Desiccation] Rank: Genin Cost: 50 Chakra Damage: 20 Stamina Damage or 20 Chakra Damage, chosen when the technique is used. Effect: The opponent is afflicted with 3 turns of [Tired]. Description: The user manipulates the opponent’s mind, forcing them to believe that the temperature around them is steadily increasing, like someone has been holding a magnifying glass over them. As such, their energy begins to drain, and their body grows more and more tired from this ‘exposure’ to dangerous temperatures over time, skin turning coarse and cracked from lack of moisture. Points: 6 Peaking Desert Heat II | Sabaku no Mōsho II Type: Genjutsu [Sunagakure | Desiccation | Evolving] Rank: Chuunin Cost: 105 Chakra Damage: 45 Stamina Damage or 45 Chakra Damage, chosen when the technique is used. Effect: The opponent is afflicted with 1 turn of [Exhausted], followed by 2 turns of [Tired]. Description: The user manipulates the opponent’s mind, forcing them to believe that the temperature around them is steadily increasing, like someone has been holding a magnifying glass over them. As such, their energy begins to drain, and their body grows more and more tired from this ‘exposure’ to dangerous temperatures over time, skin turning coarse and cracked from lack of moisture. Points: 8 [Evolving 2; Peaking Desert Heat I] Peaking Desert Heat III | Sabaku no Mōsho III Type: Genjutsu [Sunagakure | Desiccation | Evolving] Rank: Jounin Cost: 230 Chakra Damage: 100 Stamina Damage or 100 Chakra Damage, chosen when the technique is used. Effect: The opponent is afflicted with 3 turns of [Exhausted], followed by 1 turn of [Tired]. Description: The user manipulates the opponent’s mind, forcing them to believe that the temperature around them is steadily increasing, like someone has been holding a magnifying glass over them. As such, their energy begins to drain, and their body grows more and more tired from this ‘exposure’ to dangerous temperatures over time, skin turning coarse and cracked from lack of moisture. Points: 12 [Evolving 4; Peaking Desert Heat II] --------- Math stuff. Spoiler For reference, here is the Desiccation genjutsu archetype [here]. Peaking Desert Heat I 20 Stamina Damage or 20 Chakra Damage; 20 3 Tired; 30 Choice: 3 JP x 2 = 6 JP Peaking Desert Heat II 45 Stamina Damage or 45 Chakra Damage; 45 1 Exhausted; 40 2 Tired; 20 Choice: 4 JP x 2 = 8 JP Peaking Desert Heat III 100 Stamina Damage or Chakra Damage; 100 3 Exhausted; 120 1 Tired; 10 Choice: 6 JP x 2 = 12 JP Edited March 16, 2019 by Draiko Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peregine Posted March 16, 2019 Share Posted March 16, 2019 Exhausted shares stacks with Tired, so inflicting both at once is a waste of CP. If you want the effects to happen one after the other, that needs to be specified in the effects line. Otherwise, these look solid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draiko Posted March 16, 2019 Author Share Posted March 16, 2019 Oh shoot, thanks! Adjusted so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peregine Posted March 16, 2019 Share Posted March 16, 2019 Approved! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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