Ichigo Posted June 2, 2019 Share Posted June 2, 2019 (edited) Light Release | Beam of Revelations Type: Genjutsu [Elemental; Light | Kinjutsu; Unacceptable] Rank: Sennin Cost | 800 Chakra Damage | 1600 Effect | Nil Description | Trapping her opponent within their sub consciousness Hikari calls down a massive beam of light that engulfs them. Once trapped inside the beam they are helpless to move as they are forced to live out their past transgressions. Everything they have ever done wrong they replay over and over until they can no longer take it and their mind snaps. Points |13 Edited July 26, 2019 by Ichigo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudnine Posted June 28, 2019 Share Posted June 28, 2019 (edited) -Forbidden/Kinjutsu is not a rank, so change the rank to sennin and add [Kinjutsu; Powerful or Kinjutsu: Unacceptable] after it. Main site has details on both tags if you aren't sure which one to pick. -Adjust Light to: Elemental: Light to use Elemental Archetype. -800 CP = 13 JP Edited June 28, 2019 by Cloudnine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ichigo Posted July 9, 2019 Author Share Posted July 9, 2019 Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudnine Posted July 11, 2019 Share Posted July 11, 2019 Tweak the tags to what's below and we're good to go: Type: Genjutsu [Elemental; Light | Kinjutsu; Unacceptable] Rank: Sennin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ichigo Posted July 26, 2019 Author Share Posted July 26, 2019 Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peregine Posted July 27, 2019 Share Posted July 27, 2019 Approved, but it feels a little odd that the description mentions Hikari specifically when there's nothing tying it to her personally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudnine Posted August 20, 2019 Share Posted August 20, 2019 Approved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
