Hyūga Jōnin Techniques

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• Hakkeshō Kūten | Eight Trigrams Palms Vacuum Heaven | 八卦掌空天
Type: Taijutsu [Jūken | Hijutsu; Hyūga | Dōjutsu; Byakugan | AoE]
Rank: Jōnin
Cost: 90 Stamina; 90 Chakra
Damage: 75
Effect: All targets of this technique are afflicted with 1 turn of the status effects 'Damaged Tenketsu; 1-2' and 'Damaged Muscles; 1-2'. The user of this technique may choose to spend 1 'Trigram Charge' when performing this technique to apply the terrain effect 'Rocky Ground' to the battlefield.
Description: Hakkeshō Kūten is the almalgamated product of two other Hyūga clan jutsu. When Revolving Heaven and Vacuum Palm are performed together, the expelled chakra becomes a large, three hundred and sixty degree dome of compressed and chakra. The force of which can cause severe damage to all trapped within the sphere that emanates out from the user. Like most of the Hyūga family's taijutsu, this attack damages the chakra pathway system of those caught within it. The attack's spherical aura is strong enough to destroy the earth and plant-life within it, often causing a large area on the battlefield to be reduced to little more than rocky ground.
Points: 6
 

• Eight Trigrams Palms Twin Handed Back | Hakkeshō Sōshutsūhai | 八卦掌双手通背
Type: Taijutsu [Jūken | Hijutsu; Hyūga | Dōjutsu; Byakugan]
Rank: Jōnin
Cost: 75 Stamina; 75 Chakra; 1 Trigram Charge
Damage: 100
Effect: The target of this technique is afflicted with 2 turns of the status effect 'Metabolic Breakdown'.  The user of this technique may choose to spend 2 'Trigram Charges' when performing this technique to increase the duration of Metabolic Breakdown inflicted by this technique by 1 turn.
Description: One of the many martial arts jutsu of the Hyūga clan, the Eight Trigrams Palm Twin Handed Back appears basic in its physical execution but the chakra manipulation required takes years to master. By striking a target's midsection with both palms simultaneously, a user of this technique is capable of forceably expelling chakra into their foe. This disruption of chakra stalls the flow of their chakra, making it impossible for them to regenerate expended chakra for an amount of time based on the amount of chakra expelled into them.
Points: 7
 

• Jūkenhō Ichigekishin | Gentle Fist Art One Body Blow | 柔拳法一撃身
Type: Taijutsu [Jūken | Hijutsu; Hyūga | Dōjutsu; Byakugan]
Rank: Jōnin
Cost: .5x Stamina; .5x Chakra
Effect: This technique may performed in the Response Phase. When determining the cost of this technique, the value of 'x' is considered to be the base cost of 1 unresolved physical attack of Jōnin-rank or lower targeting the user. All damage and effects of that attack are negated. This techniqe has a 5% chance to fail when performed, and may be performed 2 times per battle.
Description: A technique born of a the Hyūga clan's ability to expel chakra from every tenketsu in their body, the Gentle Fist Art One Body Blow is a jutsu that is designed to be used in conjunction with Byakugan's incredible range of view. By tightly controlling the way that chakra is expelled from their body, a user of this technique is able to expell a concentrated blast of chakra in any direction, blowing away both enemies and attacks that may try to harm them.
Points: 8

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Designer's Notes:
These are fairly standard, as far as I'm aware. Math as follows:

Technique 1 - 75(.5) = 38 + 20 (Status Effects) * 3 AoE = 174/2 = 87 (or 90 if you're anal) (The JP Cost is a total that reflects being able to spend a trigram charge for applying Rocky Ground to the field which is a straight exchange, 40 value for 40 cost)

Technique 2 - 100(.5) = 50 +140 (Status Effects) = 190/2 = 95 (I shaved off 20 on each side because you have to spend a trigram charge and then rounded up to a nice clean 5 on each cost. Lastly, you over-pay a little bit on the Trigram Charges to add a third turn of Metabolic Breakdown, but I don't feel like it's a terrible cost pay. Also, the JP reflects the max cost if you were to put that third turn of the effect on.)

Technique 3 - It's an RPJ. 5% fail chance, straight cost... max JP. 

[Cloudnine]

Jounin ratio for tai damage is 1:2- looks like you used 2:3 as the ratio. 

 

The RPJ one looks fine.

[Cellar Door]

Oop, you're right. Should be fixed now.

[Cloudnine]

Ratios check out now! It seems to have dropped both tech down one in the JP bracket. Vacuum Heaven is 220 CP = 5 JP, Twin Handed Back is 260 CP = 6 JP

[Cellar Door]

They're fine being a little higher, since they have "may" clauses in them.

[Cloudnine]

Approved

[Peregine]

Approved.