K Mitsuhide Posted March 14, 2021 Share Posted March 14, 2021 (edited) Spirit Form: Kenjutsu Spirit Kenjutsu; Concentrated Burst Wave Rank 1 Type: Ninjutsu [Medium Katana] Rank: Gennin Cost: 70 Chakra Damage: 10 Effect: Target is afflicted with Burning; 25 for 2 turns Description: This Kenjutsu condenses Shigeru's chakra over the spirit katana’s edge. A burning layer of Ryō's spirit energy forms over it, and with a stroke the attack is released as a slicing wave. The unfortunate target is overcome by the raging blue spirit flame. Restrictions: Requires Spirit Mask Rank 1 JP: 4 Spirit Kenjutsu; Concentrated Burst Wave Rank 2 Type: Ninjutsu [Medium Katana] Rank: Chuunin Cost: 150 Chakra Damage: 50 Effect: Target is afflicted with Metabolic Shock for 2 turns Description: This Kenjutsu condenses and refines a layer of Shigeru's chakra over the spirit katana’s edge. A burning layer of Ryō's spirit energy forms over it, and with a stroke the attack is released as a slicing wave. Unlike the base form, this attack damages the target's spirit flow causing metabolic shock. Restrictions: Requires Spirit Mask Rank 2 JP: 5 Spirit Kenjutsu; Concentrated Burst Wave Rank 3 Type: Ninjutsu [Medium Katana] Rank: Jounin Cost: 300 Chakra Damage: 180 Effect: Target is afflicted with Metabolic Breakdown for 2 turns Description: This Kenjutsu condenses a deadly layer of Shigeru's chakra over the spirit katana’s edge. A burning layer of Ryō's spirit energy forms over it, and with a stroke the attack is released as a slicing wave. The most potent of all, this attack can completely disrupts the flow of spiritual energy in the target's body, causing metabolic shutdown. Restrictions: Requires Spirit Mask Rank 3 JP: 7 Effect Text: Spoiler Bleeding; x / Burning; x / Poison; x You take x unmodified damage every turn, starting the turn after this attack hits. This can stack with itself. The total Bleeding/Burning/Poison damage in a single technique cannot exceed the damage cap for that technique when added with the regular damage dealt, and the value of y is equal to the CP cost of x as if it were damage. Max Duration: 3 turns Cost Points: 0.8y/turn Metabolic Shock All your regeneration is halved. Shares stacks with 'Metabolic Break Down'. Max Duration: 3 turns Cost Points: 40/turn Metabolic Break Down All your regeneration is halted. Shares stacks with 'Metabolic Shock'. Max Duration: 3 turns Cost Points: 70/turn @cntrstrk14 [Abe Clan] Edited March 25, 2021 by K Mitsuhide Removing personal tag Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PandaMattMatt Posted March 14, 2021 Share Posted March 14, 2021 In an effort to push clarity over conciseness, I would rather see these effects have... actual words. "Burning; 25 For 2 turns" or even "The target is i inflicted with 'Burning; 25' or 2 turns." Limiting words is fine, but at a certain point we lose too many words and end up with an ambiguous technique because it lacked unifying lingo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Mitsuhide Posted March 14, 2021 Author Share Posted March 14, 2021 Makes sense. Look better now? Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PandaMattMatt Posted March 14, 2021 Share Posted March 14, 2021 Your first one breaks damage caps when you add the burning and regular savages together. The cap is 60, so you can either deal 10 regular damage or 20 Burning Damage for 2 turns. Either way though, the damage has to come down by 10. The rest of these look fine though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Mitsuhide Posted March 14, 2021 Author Share Posted March 14, 2021 Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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K Mitsuhide Posted March 21, 2021 Author Share Posted March 21, 2021 Edited: Removed Abe tag, replaced with Unique; Abe Shigeru Altered descriptions of techs to include Shigeru and Ryō Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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