Kassiel Posted September 25, 2009 Posted September 25, 2009 (edited) Raito no Rongubo [Longbow of Light] Type: Ninjustu {Clan} Clan: Awaiken Rank: Chuunin Cost: 16 Per Arrow (max of three arrows) Damage: 20/per arrow Effects: NA Description: The bow is created via the absorption of light into photo-sensitive receptors in the skin of an Awaiken clan member. The light is then manipulated at the expense of chakra to form a Longbow entirely made out of light. Thin, and frail looking, it is anything but. The entire bow is scathingly hot, but for the grip, which has been altered so as not to give off as much heat. It can glow a variety of colors, generally depending on the user. Multiple arrows can be fired at once, once one has had a good amount of practice of course. This technique has saved many a clan member from gruesome and painful ends. Points: -3 Raito no Rongubo - Fusen Raito Shotto [Longbow of Light - Sticky Light Shot] Type: Ninjustu {Clan} Clan: Awaiken Rank: Chuunin Cost: 36 Chakra + 12 Per turn of burn damage [Maximum of three] Damage: 45 Effects: 15 Burn Damage per Turn [Maximum of three] Description: The bow is created via the absorption of light into photo-sensitive receptors in the skin of an Awaiken clan member. The light is then manipulated at the expense of chakra to form a Longbow entirely made out of light. Thin, and frail looking, it is anything but. The entire bow is scathingly hot, but for the grip, which has been altered so as not to give off as much heat. It can glow a variety of colors, generally depending on the user. Multiple arrows can be fired at once, once one has had a good amount of practice of course. This technique has saved many a clan member from gruesome and painful ends. As with any good technique, there are bound to be variations, little tweaks here and there that each particular person might add to it. This particular modification takes away from speed and adds power. With a somewhat steeper chakra cost, the clan member is able to change the structure of the light so that it is viscous rather than solid. If the arrow makes contact, rather than piercing the opponent, it will scatter over them, leaving serious burns. Points: -3 Just to say, I am a little unsure if I did the second one properly, and you'll have to excuse me if I didn't. If I have to clarify on what it's supposed to do and how I want it done, just ask. Edited September 28, 2009 by Kassiel
Warr Posted September 25, 2009 Posted September 25, 2009 Raito no Rongubo - Remove the base chakra cost of 20, and up the cost of 16 per arrow (the proper damage for that), raise the JP to 3. Then it's Approved Sticky Light Shot - 12 Chakra per turn of burn, not 10 chakra per turn of burn. Damage costs 27 total.
Kassiel Posted September 25, 2009 Author Posted September 25, 2009 (edited) Okay, fixed the first tech and changed the burn cost of the second, but I'm a little unsure of what you mean when you say "Damage costs 27 total." Do you mean the base cost gets lowered to 27? Edit: I have done so just in case, but if I was wrong I will fix it however necessary. Edited September 25, 2009 by Kassiel
Warr Posted September 28, 2009 Posted September 28, 2009 (edited) Okay, fixed the first tech and changed the burn cost of the second Okay. , but I'm a little unsure of what you mean when you say "Damage costs 27 total." Do you mean the base cost gets lowered to 27? Edit: I have done so just in case, but if I was wrong I will fix it however necessary. Yes, that's what I meant. If there's no innate dealing of burn, but the basic damage is standard, then it should be 27. 軽い連発 Edited September 28, 2009 by Warr
Azure Posted September 28, 2009 Posted September 28, 2009 Base should be 36 chakra on the second one.
Warr Posted September 28, 2009 Posted September 28, 2009 Yep, my bad. Approved when it's fixed to 36, I have no idea what brain fart changed my calculations like that.
