Zann Rath Posted October 28, 2006 Posted October 28, 2006 (edited) Note: These are the bloodlines of my clan, Soushirui-Yokujin. ~Gankoukeikei (Piercing Eyes)~ Name: Gankoukeikei (Piercing Eyes) Description: One of the first noticeable changes to overcome the Soushirui-Yokujin clan was its members’ eyes. Their eyes became very sharp, like that of a falcon’s, and they found that they could see greater distances in incredible detail. While the average gennin in the clan can count your eyelashes at ten paces, the most experienced shinobi of this clan can clearly see any point at a mile’s distance, with the aid of his chakra. This trait causes many clan members to have deadly accuracy when trained properly with the use of ranged weapons such as kunai, shuriken, senbon needles or even a bow and arrow. They are also able to see weakness in defenses and armor that may elude the eye of other attackers, or even the creator of the armor. Requirements: Clan Membership Rank Requirements: 1 - Membership; 2 - Rank 1; 3 – Chuunin Rank, Rank 2 and Rank 1 of Doudou Chisoku; 4 - Jounin Rank, Rank 3, Seikuuken Rank 1 Rank 1: Ranged attacks initiated by the user deal an additional 10 damage. This affects only thrown items and ranged weapon attacks, not ranged jutsus, unless the jutsu requires a thrown item or ranged weapon attack. If multiple ranged attacks are made in one turn, add this bonus to the damage tag and follow the multi-attack rules. Requires: Clan Membership Cost: -1 Rank 2: Ranged attacks initiated by the user deal an additional 20 damage. This affects only thrown items and ranged weapon attacks, not ranged jutsus, unless the jutsu requires a thrown item or ranged weapon attack. If multiple ranged attacks are made in one turn, add this bonus to the damage tag and follow the multi-attack rules. This replaces the previous rank in Gankoukeikei. Requires: Gankoukeikei Rank 1 Cost: -2 Rank 3: Ranged attacks initiated by the user deal an additional 30 damage. This affects only thrown items and ranged weapon attacks, not ranged jutsus, unless the jutsu requires a thrown item or ranged weapon attack. If multiple ranged attacks are made in one turn, add this bonus to the damage tag and follow the multi-attack rules. This replaces previous ranks in Gankoukeikei. Requires: Chuunin rank, Gankoukeikei Rank 2, Doudou Chisoku Rank 1 Cost: -3 Rank 4: Ranged attacks initiated by the user deal an additional 40 damage. This affects only thrown items and ranged weapon attacks, not ranged jutsus, unless the jutsu requires a thrown item or ranged weapon attack. If multiple ranged attacks are made in one turn, add this bonus to the damage tag and follow the multi-attack rules. This replaces the previous rank in Gankoukeikei. Requires: Jounin Rank, Gankoukeikei rank 3, Seikuuken Rank 1 Cost: -4 ~Doudou Chisoku (Majestic Speed)~ Name: Doudou Chisoku (Majestic Speed) Description: The one obvious trait that marks a member of the Soushirui-Yokujin clan is his wings. While they are small at birth, rarely reaching outside of their shoulder blades, they grow just as quickly as the clan member. By the time a Soushirui-Yokujin member is ten years of age, his wingspan is about half of his eight, and generally reach the small of his back. By this age he can move his wings as freely as any other limb on his body, though except in the rarest cases, he is unable to use them to take flight. At this time, and even after the clan member is able to fly, he may use his wings to increase his movement speed. Instead of taking rapid steps, added force from short flaps of his wings increases the distance of his bounding pace. The length of each bound increases with experience and strength. The same case is true once flight is achieved, and works on the same basis as learning to walk after crawling, and learning to run after walking. It takes time and practice. Requirements: Clan Membership, Rank 2 in Gankoukeikei Rank Requirements: 1 - Gankoukeikei at Rank 2; 2 - Rank 1; 3 – Chuunin Rank, Rank 2; 4 - Jounnin Rank, Rank 1 of Seikuuken, Rank 3 Rank 1: The user gets +60 to their speed stat. Requires: Gankoukeikei Rank 1 Cost: -2 Rank 2: The user gets +80 to their speed stat. This effect stacks with previous ranks. Requires: Doudou Chisoku Rank 1 Cost: -3 Rank 3: The user gets +100 to their speed stat. This effect stacks with previous ranks. The user may take flight at a cost of 10% of their total chakra and 5% of their total stamina in activation, and must pay 7% of their total chakra and 4% of their total stamina in upkeep. They may stay in flight for up to four consecutive turns. While the user is in flight, opponents may only initiate a melee attack or jutsu against the user if the opponent was the target of a melee attack initiated by the user that turn. Otherwise, only ranged attacks or jutsu may be used against the user. Requires: Chuunin Rank, Doudou Chisoku rank 2 Cost: -4 Rank 4: The user gets +140 to their speed stat. This effect stacks with previous ranks. The user may take flight at a cost of 7% of their total chakra and 4% of their total stamina in activation, and must pay 5% of their total chakra and 3% of their total stamina in upkeep. They may stay in fight for up to six consecutive turns. While the user is in flight, opponents may only initiate a melee attack or jutsu against the user if the opponent was the target of a melee attack initiated by the user that turn. Otherwise, only ranged attacks or jutsu may be used against the user. Requires: Jounin Rank, Doudou Chisoku Rank 3, Seikuuken Rank 1 Cost: -5 ~Seikuuken (Mastery of the Air)~ Name: Seikuuken (Mastery of the Air) Description: Once a clan member has fully grown into his wings, he is allowed the time to fully master their use. With focused time and practice, they find that flight and all previous uses of their wings come as naturally to them as walking. They also find that they tend to have a natural affinity for the air around them, and are able to shift minor currents and create gusts of wind at a whim. Many great minds have used this ability to direct their projectiles in mid-flight, making them much more deadly. Requirements: Clan Membership, Gankoukeikei at Rank 3, Doudou Chisoku at Rank 2, Jounin Rank Rank Requirements: 1 - Gankoukeikei at Rank 3, Doudou Chisoku at Rank 2, Jounin Rank; 2 - Rank 1 of Current Ability; 3 - Doudou Chisoku at Rank 3, Seikuuken at Rank 2; 4 - Admin Approval, Rank 3 Rank 1: The total stat increase granted by Doudou Chisoku is increased by 3%. Ranged attacks initiated by the user deal an additional 5 damage. This effect stacks with Gankoukeikei. Requires: Gankoukeikei at rank 3, Doudou Chisoku at Rank 2, Jounin Rank. Cost: -2 Rank 2: The total stat increase granted by Doudou Chisoku is increased by 5%. Ranged attacks initiated by the user deal an additional 10 damage. This effect stacks with Gankoukeikei. This rank replaces Seikuuken rank 1. Requires: Seikuuken rank 1 Cost: -3 Rank 3: The total stat increase granted by Doudou Chisoku is increased by 8%. Ranged attacks initiated by the user deal an additional 15 damage. This effect stacks with Gankoukeikei. This rank repalces Seikuuken rank 2. Requires: Doudou Chisoku at Rank 3, Seikuuken Rank 2 Cost: -4 Rank 4: The total stat increase granted by Doudou Chisoku is increased by 10%. Ranged attacks initiated by the user deal an additional 20 damage. This effect stacks with Gankoukeikei. The activation and upkeep cost of Taking Flight is decreased by 1% of your total chakra and stamina, and the user may stay in flight for as long as the upkeep cost can be paid. This rank replaces Seikuuken rank 3. (IE: At Doudou Chisoku rank 4, activation costs 6% of your total chakra (instead of 7%) and 3% of your total stamina (instead of 4%), and upkeep costs 4% of your total chakra (instead of 5%) and 2% of your total stamina (instead of 3%). Requires: Seikuuken Rank 3, Admin approval Cost: -5 Edited October 30, 2006 by Zann Rath
cntrstrk14 Posted October 31, 2006 Posted October 31, 2006 I believe there are too many Doujutsu clans that increase accuracy. Maybe come up with a more original effect?
Zann Rath Posted October 31, 2006 Author Posted October 31, 2006 The bloodlines don't increase the accuracy stat or the % chance to hit, actually. >_> The first one adds damage to ranged attacks, the second increases the speed stat and eventually allows flight, and the third increases the effects of all of the above. Although I suppose the wording I chose for the first bloodline probably led to the misinterperitation. I changed that description to better fit the actual bloodline's effect.
experimental lover Posted November 2, 2006 Posted November 2, 2006 I agree with Counter, I like how this is just what it says. Good job!
