Warr Posted February 24, 2016 Posted February 24, 2016 (edited) Suiton; Kiyari (Water Release; Power Spear) | 水遁・力槍 Type: Water Ninjutsu (Personal) Rank: Genin Cost: 80 Damage: 60 Effects: Any response phase jutsu used to negate this technique has a 20% chance to fail. Description: This technique manipulates the surroundings around the user and siphons the principal element of Water. This method of assault forces an incredible volume of water to implode within its own dimensions becoming nothing bigger than a fist. At will, the commendable breadth of water will split into a thin, long rivulet towards their targeted intention with impossible speeds. The true force of the technique is developed on contact however, as the connection between its source severs whence the target is hit; the manipulation aspect of this technique generates such a possibility. Points: 4 Warusu Hiden Ōgi; Kimori | Warrusu Secret Technique; Power Lance | わるす秘伝奥義・力銛 Type: Water Ninjutsu (Personal) Rank: Jounin Cost: 380 Damage: 275 Effects: Any response phase jutsu used to negate this technique has a 30% chance to fail. After being hit by this technique, on the next turn, the opponents Evasion, and Accuracy are reduced by 20, and speed is reduced by 40. This reduction is for the next turn alone. Description: An advancement of Water Manipulation; Power Spear, this technique uses the same basic movements, but more water which is more tightly compressed than the former technique, and which is spun even more quickly than the former as well, the tendril of water decompressing as it hits the opponent, and hitting much harder than the other, as well as hitting in a way that knocks them off balance. Points: 8 Warusu Hiden Ōgi; Enka Kiyari | Warrusu Secret Technique; Blazing Fire Power Spear | わるす秘伝奥義・炎火力槍 Type: Fire Ninjutsu (Personal) Rank: Jounin Cost: 377 Damage: 258 Effects: Any response phase jutsu used to negate this technique has a 22% chance to fail. Opponent is dealt the status 'Burned' for the next 3 turns. Burned: The target takes 120% damage from taijutsu, basic and weapon attacks, takes 10 damage a turn. DP: 30/turn Description: A modification of the 'Water Manipulation; Power Spear' technique, created by Warrusu after plenty of experience with his primary elemental speciality, this technique is created via a burst of fire chakra from the user's arms, a handseal 'Dragon', formed, before the fire chakra incircles the user in a twirling almost mystical direction, and then is shot forth with immense speed. Points: 8 JP Notes: To cost these, given I knew the old effect wouldn't have flown, I used a modified version of the cost ratio for critical hits. The ratio was as follows: Cost of Technique in CP x 1.(2 x .Y% where Y is the percent to fail for Response phase jutsu.) = Technique Cost. Edited February 26, 2016 by Warr
Hardcore Skittlez Posted February 24, 2016 Posted February 24, 2016 First one: Comes to 84. I'm okay with rounding down to 80. Second one: I'm getting 380.8 for the cost. I'm okay with a flat 380 here. Third: This one is fine. Any particular reason you chose such off numbers, though?
Warr Posted February 24, 2016 Author Posted February 24, 2016 First one: Comes to 84. I'm okay with rounding down to 80. Second one: I'm getting 380.8 for the cost. I'm okay with a flat 380 here. Third: This one is fine. Any particular reason you chose such off numbers, though? Huh, my math must've been off on 1 and 2. On three, it just happens to be the math that I used before on it, damage wise and that percentage (22%) is the highest I could get it to work with the damage and the effects 3 turns of burn, being applied to it.
Hardcore Skittlez Posted February 26, 2016 Posted February 26, 2016 Second still needs a lil bump up in its cost to 380.
Warr Posted February 26, 2016 Author Posted February 26, 2016 Second still needs a lil bump up in its cost to 380. Ah, well, should be fixed now.