Itazuki Kaiten

[Guest horus]

If theres something i cant do didnt do or something that i should change please tell me. thx

(will under go change as i learn new things about the site)

~User Data~

-Username: horus

-Posting: daily

-Time Zone: Central Standard Time

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Name: Itazuki Kaiten

Village: The Village Hidden in the Mist

Clan: N/A

Age: 13

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~Appearance~

-Height: 5.7f

-Weight: 105

-Hair Color: raven black

-Eye Color: scarlet red

-Clothing: his kiri headband is on his forehead preferring to keep it in sight of others. He wears a black sleeveless jacket with red lining that has pockets that allows him to store many items along with a cloth forearm protector which hides a metal forearm protector underneath it, the metal forearm protector contains a hidden pop-out blade. His cargo pants which he keeps his kuni and other tools in are black with red trimming and goes well with his jacket and his black boots.

-Physical Description:

Raven black hair that falls down around his face and he tends to brush back the right side with his hand

He is fairly fit although he tends to gets tired easily from trying to hard

His skin is lightly tanned with a few cuts across his arm from kuni practice.

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Story/Background:

The traditions of the Itazuki are something that most people do not understand due to the nature of their clan. They are assassins and quite people preferring to keep everything within the clan, growing up in this clan means training and killing at a young age. Their training includes such things as the art of silent killing, human anatomy, and many other things. As training is their way of life they often put this before anything else leaving other people behind them.

Being a failure in the clan tends to cause the failure to become an outcast shunned by the rest of the clan, one such person was Kaiton Itazuki who often failed in training and did poorly in classes. He grew up being teased by his cousin's even his father and mother looked down on him.

Although the clan shunned him he still trained hard, not to please his clan but to please his father and mother who despite his hardest effort still looked down on him. Training hard and practicing his mother finally looked upon him with favor after seeing how hard he had worked this led Kaiton to try harder then ever now gaining the interest of some of the other clan members.

However his father still did not acknowledge him instead ignoring him and often forgetting he existed, this led Kaiton to believe that his father who he had always wanted to be close to hated him. After this realization Kaiton stopped trying to impress him although always feeling empty in his presence. Training with his mother he continued to grow doing well in the academy where he now held the best grades as opposed to the worst.

Now his father began to take interest in him watching him while training and helping him, this made Kaiton reach a new level of happiness now being with both his parents…however this was not to last. On graduating day neither of his parents could come due to their missions instead his uncle attended the ceremony but knowing his father and mother would be waiting he quickly went home to show his parents the headband he had gotten.

As he came to his house he saw his older cousins blocking the entrance to his house thinking they were there to tease him and bully him he went over the fence that surrounded his home. As he came closer to his house he heard sounds coming from a window to his left, curious he quietly sneaked up to the window and listened to the voices " you must do it, the clan demands it” knowing it was his fathers voice. "I will do what I must” that was his mother, wondering what was happening Kaiton looked into the window at the same moment his mother sank the sword that she held into her heart. Kaiton screamed in horrific discovery as he watched the chain of events unfold in front of him his father looking at him in disgust and the other people in the room looking at him with an empty stare. Then suddenly Kaiten blacked out as he was struck from behind and forced to relive the painful memory in his dreams.

When he awoke he was in his bed and wondered if it was all a dream he then looked around his room and noticed the headband lying beside him. He knew the truth now he had watched his mother die and so had all those people in the room, he thought. Why hadn't anyone stopped it, why did she do it, and why was he knocked out, all these questions and more raced through his mind as he thought of what he should do. Getting up he walked over to his screen door opening it and walking over to his father and mother's room seeing no one there he quickly went to the clan meeting house which was down the street. There he saw his father and all the other people who had been there when his mother had died. He glared at them all demanding to know what had happened, his father looking at him sighed as he explained "your mother failed in her duties as a clan member, she disgraced the clan and deserved and accepted her fate” now looking down at Kaiton "she did the right thing, you should accept this and live with it and someday you can be head of the clan” .

All Kaiton could do was stare at him in disbelief knowing that had she not done it he would have killed her, he exclaimed

"I hate this clan and all of you, I wont uphold your traditions and I wont be a member of your clan if it means being like you”. He then ran away going to his small apartment where he often went to think and train, he decided it would be best to live alone and be registered as a ninja of the village not a member of the Itazuki clan. His father tried several times to return him to the clan however felled in this attempt and soon gave up saying that if he wished to return he could. Now Kaiten lives alone hoping to find a family for him somewhere, and training part to make himself stronger and part to delude himself in thinking his mother would be proud of him.

Personality:

since his mothers death hes hesitant to kill and often gets scared at the sight of blood although despite this he is still a hard working ninja of the village. He trys not to be a bother for people and avoid starting fights instead trying to find a place in the world

Likes: ramen, training, and missions

Dislikes: being in trouble, being hated, and people who mock others

Level:0

TXP:0

-Stats (out of 500)-

(Health Power)60

(Stamina) 20

(Chakra) 100

(Taijutsu) 20

(Defense) 40

(Ninjutsu) 60

(Resistance) 40

(Genjutsu) 20

(Concentration) 20

(Speed) 40

(Accuracy) 40

(Evasion) 40

Skills: 8/9

Subtle Elementals (thunder) You may learn an elemental jutsu that is not from your village (IE: Fire jutsus in Mist village). Remember that you must specify which element you bought with this skill –1 rank 1

Quick Learner It takes 1 less post per 10 to learn a new technique. Must always post at least 2 posts to learn a technique. n/a -1 rank 2

Skill Name: Chakra Flow

Bloodline: Skill

Description: The user's chakra flow's much more smoothly due to spiritual allignment.

Effect: gain 10% of your base chakra every turn.

Cost: -5; Must be genin

~Hindering~

Merciful Whenever you would deal the finishing blow in combat to an opponent, you must let them live with one HP left, only applies once a battle. n/a +1 1

Hemophobia User is paralyzed for one post after first blood appears in the fight n/a +1 1

Self-Defense Opponents always act first, no matter what. n/a +2 1

Slow to Adapt A negative for being in terrain not of your current village. Gives -%10 speed when not in your village's terrain n/a +1 [1]

Poor Stamina Manipulation Before using a Taijutsu technique, roll a d10. On 1or2 Jutsu fails. You may not take another action this turn, but the stamina is not lost.. n/a +2 1

Techniques:

Basic Academy Jutsus:

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)

Type: Genjutsu

Rank: Academy Student

Cost: 10 Genjutsu

Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction.

Damage: None

Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)

Type: Genjutsu

Rank: Academy Student

Cost: 5 Genjutsu

Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g. use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you were that thing.

Damage: None

Effects: Change your appearance.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique)

Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: Academy Student

Cost: 10 Ninjutsu

Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle.

Damage: None

Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques.

Genin Jutsu:

Spin Cycle (Jiten Shuuha)

Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: Gennin

Cost: 30

Damage: 25

Effect: A successful strike reduces defense by 20 for the next three posts.

Description: A small whirlpool of water is created under the target and stabs up with great force, causing damage and disorientation.

Name: (thunder type) karai no jutsu-thunder cyclone

Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: Genin

Cost: 20

Damage: 40

Effects: cost 20 however if misses causes user 10 damage and 2x charka expenditure.

Description: Making the appropriate hand signs the ninja vibrates his arm to a high degree and then releases a burst of charka through the palm causing the charka to take the form of lightning that swirls in a circular pattern bursting from the users palm and into the target or rebounding back at the user.

Armor:

-Head: Village headband

-Neck:

-Body:

-Waist:

-Forearm(s):

-Hand(s):

-Thigh(s):

-Calve(s):

-Feet:

Weapons:

-Main Weapon:

-Sub Weapon:

-Un-equipped Slot one:

-Un-equipped Slot two:

-Un-equipped Slot three:

Items--

-Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and/or 4 Needles

-Items in Vault: Nothing

-Money on hand: $125

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~Update Log~

Character Approval:

Leveled up:

Exp Earned:

~Money Log~ (how much money you spent, when, and who approved it)

~Battle Log~

Wins: (against whom?)

Losses: (against whom?)

Draws: (against whom?)

~Mission Log~

Rank D: 0

Rank C: 0

Rank B: 0

Rank A: 0

Rank S: 0

Edited March 17, 2006 by horus

[Nappers]

Could add a lot to the background, what are the clans traditions and why did he become an outcast; for no aparant reason is so simplistic. He still has a father so why does he go to seek out another to 'care for'. Why does he desire things that 'other families have'?

[Guest horus]

thx for posting

well the background used to be diffrent

this is my 3rd or 4th version

i had a much better and more detailed one but it had a bloodline connected to it meaning id have to make a blood line, and then i had jutsu the clan passed down that i would have to be allowed to make, along with haveing to make the clan, so that got way to complicated (this may seem lazy but i just dont understand how to do that stuff even after reading tips and the others people created, then i wanted to make an uchia and be in leaf so i rewrote his background again i found out that it would be to hard seeing as how they are locked, i then made one for sand which is also locked, so i finally added it here.

i will work on the background and edit it l8er i will pm you if you want. i guess i did take the easy way out and thats not good. i can afford waiting another day to play.

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ok there i filled in all details

i had to rush the last part cause my moms telling me lo get off and go to sleep lol but ill work on that tommowo...mabe

Edited March 10, 2006 by horus

[triva]

dang horus i like the discreption. You need to run it through spell/gramer check and it well get it's approval.

[Guest horus]

thxs much triva i wanted to include u somehow but theres like noway we could have met. well mabe at chuunin exams next time we can be friends in rp

also can i see your guy? i trd but it never let me view it

pm me k

and...i got question to anyone...its about transfusions can i get it from someone in a clan that is in a diffrent village??? and can i make a bloodline later and use it

Edited March 10, 2006 by horus

[Nappers]

Nice to see you added more depth to the background. Your skill points do not add up though, you do not have 5 skill points, with the hindering abilities included you have only 4.

[Guest horus]

thx

lol its cause i added twisted colors and forgot to add a hindering

i guess ill get rid of ninjutsu

also wat does it mean when it says u have to have training posts with a jounin or a chuunin

[Guest Losernin]

I believe it means that, in order to learn the skill, you must RP with a character (probably an NPC) who's of chuunin or jounin rank, depending on the skill in question. In other words, you can't take it at start.

[Lemon]

No 9 year old is 5.7 feet.

[Guest horus]

lol i just put my hight i guess ill age him a bit...13 should be good thx

so an npc, how do i do that just simulate one or will someone else do that?

Edited March 11, 2006 by horus

[Tantan]

Most of the time us modmins will be playing NPCS

Anyway sheet looks pretty goood, aprpoved.

[Guest MrSako]

My advice to you is to -drop- Genjutsu Creator. It is actually a waste of a skill. Here is why:

+5 Drain is the same as having +20 Stats in Genjutsu, right? If you put Natural Growth: Genjutsu, in 4 levels you'll have the same effect (for the same number of points) as that one skill, and it will continue to grow. My advice is: get Gifted: Chakra and Gifted: Genjutsu as that will lead you to more growth. Another option is Genjutsu Shaper, which is much more effective than Genjutsu Creator. Just an advice from an oldie...

[Guest horus]

k thankyou very much

i didnt understand the concept of posting and getting xp so iv been searching around trying to find all the ruleings on it

i added gifted with charka and removed genjutsu creator

i like genjutsu but im going to try and make my character a ninjutsu taijutsu user but i think its important to be able to use genjutsu in certain situations which is why i had that stuff...however l8er i plan on putting everything to ninjutsu and taijutsu probably when i hit chuunin...i hope ...well thxs for help

iv been wanting to rp for a while and was getting discouraged after a couple days lol

Edited March 11, 2006 by horus

[Kouta]

OK, I was worried when you had your mother die..I swore it'd be a avenger BG...then I would've had to yell at your after that great RP sample. Glad it wasn't, just a slightly less cliche' loner BG. Then your personality made all your Hindering Traits flow...so:

approved

[Guest horus]

thankyou very much its thx to everyone who gave me tips to improve him...thx everyone...also i dont see the point of revenge it brings nothing but more despair...after losing your reason to live which is to get revenge you have nothing but the empty feeling of despair

so not much point in making a character like that

Edited March 11, 2006 by horus

[Ironwolf]

I guess that my only problem is that your background is damn hard to read, you could try to break it up into paragraphs. Whatever,

Approval No Jutsu

Moved

[Guest horus]

k ill do that

sorry for inconvience

and thx much for approval