Ryu Keichi

[TheJoker]

Player information

Posting Schedule:

 

• High

 

Time Zone:

 

• GMT +1 [PST]

 

Character Slot:

• 1

Edited January 28, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Basic information

Name:

•Ryu Keichi

Aliases:

• Dragonmaster

Age:

• 21

Gender:

• Male

IQ:

• - [Average]

Birth Date:

• -

Sexual Orientation:

• Bisexual

Blood Type:

• AB-

Ninja Registration:

• 744139

Clan:

• -

Advanced System:

• -

Laterality:

• Right-handed

Nationality:

• Land of Wind

Village:

• Sunagakure

Current Whereabouts:

• Sunagakure

Edited January 28, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Appearance

Height:

• 1,87m

Weight:

• 78kg

Eyes:

• Hazel with a red hue

Hair:

• Spikey, blonde lockes

Civilian Attire:

• Keichi's outfits are rather varied, though he has a love for robes, silk and open jackets.

Mission Attire:

• -

Physical Description:

• Before you stand a tall man, with brown hair that falls just over the face. He has a whole array of different outfits, but clearly has a sense of style. In fact, you would be safe to say he is quite the fashionista. Most of his clothing however has one commonality, it's left open down the middle, showing off his chiseled abdomen and chest. He has a strong good physique and during summer he carries a healthy tan.

His hazel ruby eyes are fairly unique, and something that often begets attention. He doesn't know where he has got them from, most likely a genetic mutation. But he can't complain. Along his chest on the left side is a small scar that's clearly done by some sort of knife. But otherwise his skin is fair and mostly undamaged. Keichi is quite fond of accessories. He can often be found wearing necklaces, flashy belts and other accessories. The more extravagant the better!

[Pending creation of puppet.] His puppet Mandoreku is the shape of a traditonal Japanese dragon. Long and thin, made of wood. With forearms and claws, a long slithering body.. with small hind legs. While that's his natural form the pieces can all be separated and shifted to make him look somewhat ike a human, if his body is shrouded with a piece of rag and a cowl. Since the head remains a dragon head. A henge can also do wonders. In his normal form, Mandoreku has the tendency to coil up around Keichi like a snake. With his head resting on Keichi's shoulder.

Edited January 28, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Persona

Personality:

• ""The chemist who can extract from his heart's elements compassion, respect, longing, patience, regret, surprise, and forgiveness and compound them into one can create that atom which is called love.""

Keichi often seems wise beyond his years. He has a tendency to speak using ""cute"" phrases. He is an obsessive fashionista. Easily excitable. And carrying himself with a fiery passion. He loves what he does and does what he loves. Keichi enjoys drinking, eating spicy (new) things, exploring and adventuring. Other things he loves are puppets for obvious reasons, and has a serious dragon obsession. Mostly to do with his family name.

Keichi loved woodcarving and craftsmanship. And has a penchant for chemistry. Spending a lot of his time with a simple carving knife and pieces of wood making small, often mechanic-animals he can manipulate via Kugutsu.

Goals:

• To bring and advocate balance and harmony

• Find his own spiritual guidance and purpose in this world

• To become the greatest Kugutsu-ist he can be

Likes:

• Spicy food

• Dragons

• Hot guys

• Hot girls

• Harmony

• Budhism

• Verisimilitude

• Puppets

• Perfection

• Engineering and construction

Dislikes:

• Lack of passion

• Moral or Ethically misguided points of view

• Shortsightness

• Bad arguments

• Bad logic

• A lack of respect

• Wanton disregard for nature

• Destruction

• Elitism

• War

Fears:

• To get entangled in a war he doesn't want to fight

• To lose those close to him

• To be hunted over his Kugutsu

Favorites:

Food - Gochugang and Kimchi

Drink - Spicy cherry sake (chili and cherry)

Color - Red

Music Genre - Traditional flute

Book Genre - -

Hang-Out - Baa-chan's tea place downtown

Hobby - Working on his puppet, smoking a waterpipe.

Season - Spring

Animal - Dragon (It totally counts)

Desired Opponent - -

Phrase - -

Edited January 28, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Relationships

- Relationships go here -

Edited January 28, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Background

Ryu Keichi was born in the puppeteers clan collection. Both his parents were nin. And effectively, they both perished during their work. Keichi himself was an orphan. But the damaged heart of a small child losing his parents left him in a twilight of switching foster families that Suna tried to provide. Running away or causing too much domestic trouble to stay. Eventually he was given away to an orphanage a little ways outside of Suna. A monastery. Living among monks. Who gave him the space to develop his abilities, spiritual guidance and most importantly, shelter. Teaching Keichi to deal with the pain and develop himself in a positive way.

Keichi spent most of his youth growing up out of place however. He was no monk at heart. And the monks respected the way he manifested himself. Keichi was interested in clothing. Crafting. Weaponry and Chakra. He soon found out he could use chakra strings for his ability, and found himself quite adapt at manufacturing hidden weapons, and eventually full small creations. His favorite and current puppet prototype Mandoreku, made from very pliable wood, treated with fire resistant chemicals. This puppet is still under construction. And will be one of his first greater creations, and the only one he keeps. It's been a project spanning multiple years that is about to come to it's fruition.

During the time of the wars. The monks declared themselves neutral with permission from the Daimyo. Avoiding most of the conflict and living mostly in isolation of their monastery. Living off the occasional food tribute from the local population as well as home-grown crops.

Keichi left the monestary when he turned seventeen. Because unfortunately. Asides from liking all those things many monks accepted. Keichi also liked boys. And while the older monks weren't worried about his orientation. The others boys were. Frequent fights and bullying prompted them to make a decision with Keichi. One for him to make his own way in the world. He wasn't made to spend his entire life in the monastery anyways. So they send an envoy to Suna, asking if they were willing to take the seventeen year old in by giving him a house.

Keichi felt like a stranger at home. The war with Kumo just ended. But there was still violence. He wanted to see what all this village commotion was about. More importantly, he wanted to find a teacher in his puppet jutsu. He knew it was his families, the monks had told him. He just didn't know where to go look for them!

Keichi spent his youth doing odd jobs and travelling when he found that most puppeteers were very exclusionary. He might share their ability. It wasn't easy to find someone who wanted to share their master craftsmanship. So for now. Keichi was made to fend for himself. He spent his time alone developing his abilities. And continuing to collect parts for Mandoreku. Until he was 20 and decided to petition Sunagakure to bestow upon him the rank of Genin. Giving him access to official training material. He passed, and now officially calls himself a Suna nin. Still eagerly looking for someone to teach him the fine prints of being a puppeteer.

Edited January 28, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Statistics

Rank:

Genin

Primary Elemental Affinity:

• Lightning | Locked

User has a +10% chance to hit with all Ninjutsu -or- Taijutsu -or- Genjutsu attacks (choose one when this skill is learned). Lightning Jutsu cost one less JP to a minimum of 1. This effect may stack with other skills, to a maximum of -2 JP per technique. User receives the skill “Subtle Elements: Lightning” for free and may purchase an additional rank of “Subtle Elements”. If the user already has “Subtle Elements: Lighting”, they may have their points refunded. *This skill may be learned before level 30, but the effects are not granted until level 30 is obtained.

Description: Naturally aligned to the element of the lightning, this character has a natural tact at using and manipulating lightning to their bidding. This chakra is known for its ability to pierce barriers and move at rapid speeds, making it optimal for being able to strike an opponent.

Secondary Elemental Affinity:

• Fire | Locked

User has a +10% chance to dodge any attack. Fire Jutsu cost one less JP to a minimum of 1. This effect may stack with other skills, to a maximum of -2 JP per technique. User receives the skill “Subtle Elements: Fire” for free and may purchase an additional rank of “Subtle Elements”. If the user already has “Subtle Elements: Fire”, they may have their points refunded. *This skill may be learned before level 30, but the effects are not granted until level 30 is obtained.

Description: Naturally aligned to the element of the fire, this character has a natural tact at using and manipulating fire to their bidding. The user's chakra is very fierce and can flow through the body, giving it heightened reaction speed and agility, much like the flickering of a flame.

Level:

• 10

Total Experience:

• 4176

Statistics:

• Health - 220

• Stamina - 40

• Chakra - 260

• Taijutsu - 20

• Ninjutsu - 100

• Genjutsu - 80

• Defense - 100

• Concentration - 80

• Speed - 160

• Accuracy - 200

• Evasion - 240

Statistical Modifiers:

• Taijutsu;

• Taijutsu Damage; +5

• Basic Attack Damage; +0

• Ranged Weapon Damage; +0

• Ninjutsu;

• Ninjutsu Damage; +25

• Genjutsu;

• Genjutsu Statistic Damage; +20

• Genjutsu Ghost Damage; +8

• Genjutsu Statistic Reduction; -20

• Defense;

• Physical Damage; -25

• Concentration;

• Genjutsu 'To-Hit'; +4

• Genjutsu 'To-Dodge'; -4

• Taijutsu Critical Chance; +0

• Ninjutsu Cost Reduction; -0

• Speed;

• Speed Percentile; 3,85

• Accuracy;

• Physical 'To-Hit'; +0,2

• Ranged Weapon Damage; +25

• Evasion;

• Physical 'To-Dodge'; -0,24

Current Effects & Conditions:

• NA [NA]

Edited February 19, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Skills

Skill Point Gains: 15

Skill Point Expenditures: 15

Remaining Skill Points: 0

Hindering Skills:

• Bisexual

Effect: Any and all effects that specifically target gender now apply to this character, regardless of the intended target audience.

Description:

Cost: +1

• Obtrusive

Effect: Attack strikes that target this character in a Team Battle have their Chance to Hit increased by 7%.

Description:

Cost: +

• Skinny

Effect: Effect: When targeted by any attack that has a chance of inflicting the status effect ‘Prone’, characters with this skill have a 100% chance of being inflicted with ‘Prone’ for the duration indicated by the attack.

Description:

Cost: +

Beneficial Skills:

• Primary Path: Path of the Puppeteer

Description: Some shinobi love the feeling of manipulation, the sensation as those strings pull through the air and the masterful weapon of death they have slaved over slices through their enemy like a hot knife through butter. They love to create things to destroy thing, and tinker with the inner machinations of both.

Effect: Players receive $1500 towards the purchase of puppets and/or puppet parts.

Manipulation Mastery::

-Juggernaut: For every 20 points of Durability a Puppet has, they take 10 less damage instead of 5.

-Mercantile Mechanic: May gain 2 ranks of 'Merchant' for 1 skill point. In addition, User gains an additional $2 per line when creating puppets. This effect does not stack with itself.

Advanced Paths: Path of the Engineer, Path of the Guardian.

Cost: -1

• Subtle Element: Wind | 1

Effect: May use Wind element techniques. Any response phase techniques that blocks a Wind Techniques costs an additional 10% to use, rounded up. All 5 “Subtle Element” skills share ranks.

Description:

Cost: -0

• Merchant | 10

Effect: You get a 5% discount at stores.

Description:

Cost: -5

• Marionette Mastery | 1

Effect: Puppet-based techniques deal a bonus +5 damage per ninja rank of the technique (per skill rank). Ex: Genin techniques gain +5 damage, Chuunin techniques gain +10 damage, etc.

Description:

Cost: -1

• Private Contractor | 1

Effect: The user may assign themselves missions up to the rank that their 'equivalent Ninja rank' would be. These missions may be anything from simple side jobs or money making schemes (such as playing music on a street for money, pickpocketing, or watching some shepherd's sheep while the shepherd goes to market.), and they may do so without problem or orders from someone else.

Description: Some shinobi are fanatically loyal to their village, and would never consider doing any work on the side, or any work without being ordered to. Other shinobi are happy to be busy, and actively look for 'side-jobs', this is also true of “PC” who were not affiliated with a hidden village in the first place or are from a now destroyed hidden village or organization.

Cost: -1

• Freelancer | 1

Effect: Whenever you would gain money, you may gain an additional $3 for every $10 you are given.

Description: Some people are weak willed sheep who'd let someone ream the wool right off their back if the person did it in a kind enough seeming way. Others are wolves, biting at their allies and enemies, making sure they get their cut for every job done. A person with this skill is of the latter sort. They have less 'overhead', and therefore keep a bigger cut of the cash they make.

Cost: -2

• Investor | 5

Effect: For every 1000 words written IC, roll a d11, and multiply it by x, where x is your rank in this skill. Gain the resulting roll in money. On a roll of 11, consider the value of the roll to be -1. Character must choose the location of their investment, and can't collect their returns until returning to that location. Cost: -1 and $200 per rank, 10 ranks, ranks may be taken in exception of the 'one rank per 5 levels' rule.

Description: You see the benefits in long term investment, whether it be in business or other ventures.

Cost: -5

Edited February 19, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Techniques

Jutsu Point Gains: 14

Jutsu Point Expenditures: 4

Remaining Jutsu Points:

•10

• Puppet Technique

Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: Genin

Chakra Cost: 5% of total chakra or stamina

Stamina Cost: 5% of total chakra or stamina

Effect: Effect:

- This is an Advanced System.

- Allows the user to use a puppet. Puppets cannot be used without this technique.

- May be activated in the setup phase, counts as drawing your puppet.

- Must be activated multiple times for multiple puppets.

- The technique can be paid for using either Chakra or Stamina. If the puppet is used as a medium for taijutsu-based techniques, the User must pay the cost of this technique in Stamina. If the puppet is used as a medium for ninjutsu-based techniques, the User must pay the cost of this technique in Chakra.

- Kugustus no Justu is always considered to be the rank of the user.

Description: Using their energy like the strings of a marionette, Kugutsu no Jutsu allows the user to manipulate the delicate mechanisms of their puppet creations. Only shinobi who dedicate themselves to the art of being a puppeteer can master this ability.

Points: 4

Edited February 19, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Logs

Experience

+400 Planting the seeds

+400 Making Sand Castles

+800 Contractor: Private Tutoring 1

+800 My Kingdom for a Farm

+800 My kingdom for a Farm II

+525 Wiki

+361 Watering Hole

+800 Tomb Raider

 

Transactions

+$1500 Puppet pocket money

+$75 - Planting the seeds

+100 - Making Sand Castles

+200 - Private tutoring

+200 +60 - My Kingdom for a Farm

+200 +60 - My Kingdom for a Farm II

-1000 - Investor

+100 + 30 wiki

+45+5 - Investor (5) | Watering Hole

+200 + 60 - Tomb Raider

+90 - Investor (5) | Tomb Raider

Mission Log:

Rank D: 2

Rank C:

Rank B:

Rank A:

Rank S:

Edited February 26, 2016 by TheJoker

[TheJoker]

Changelog:

Statistics change, Tai -10 chakra +10

History addition: Monks role during war

Appearance: Added superficial details.

26-1-2016: Added a picture under appearance.

28-1-2016: Heavy update using my char-gen. IT WORKED

Edited January 28, 2016 by TheJoker

[wolfnin]

Overall, your character looks great. Just a few things

 

Appearance and Personality

 

Your appearance section is missing these 

 

-Height: (How tall your character is)

-Weight: (How much your character weighs)

-Hair Color: (What color your character's hair is)

-Eye Color: (What color your character's eyes are/eye is/thought to be)

 

 

 

and for personality, while not needed (you don't have to add them), it's a nice way to flesh out your character

 

 

 

Likes:

 

Dislikes:

 

Favorites:

 

 

 

 

Stats

 

Your stats all check out, however I'd just like to offer some advice. All of the offensive stats have modifiers that work off of 20s, therefore it's best to have stats in increments of 20s. Your taijutsu is at 30, and while it's not a big deal, the modifiers will be the same as if it was at 20. So the extra 10 points can go somewhere or you can add another 10 points. 

 

Skills

 

Your skills gain says 6, but it should be 5. 

 

History

 

I like his history, it's neat. The only thing is, since he was alive during the NCIA invasion and occupation, what did he do during then? Did the monks go into hiding or move somewhere?

[TheJoker]

Overall, your character looks great. Just a few things

 

Appearance and Personality

 

Your appearance section is missing these 

 

 

and for personality, while not needed (you don't have to add them), it's a nice way to flesh out your character

 

 

 

 

Stats

 

Your stats all check out, however I'd just like to offer some advice. All of the offensive stats have modifiers that work off of 20s, therefore it's best to have stats in increments of 20s. Your taijutsu is at 30, and while it's not a big deal, the modifiers will be the same as if it was at 20. So the extra 10 points can go somewhere or you can add another 10 points. 

 

Skills

 

Your skills gain says 6, but it should be 5. 

 

History

 

I like his history, it's neat. The only thing is, since he was alive during the NCIA invasion and occupation, what did he do during then? Did the monks go into hiding or move somewhere?

Thank you for the feedback. Fixed on all accounts. I'm leaving the tropes out. Because they are tropes. And I'd rather have personality be a bit more complex than that!

Edited January 25, 2016 by TheJoker

[Hardcore Skittlez]

You have Path of the Puppeteer listed as -4 SP in your SP expenditure log for some reason. Paths are only -1.

 

You have 3 JP listed as expentitures when you are really at -4, as the Puppet technique is 4 jp.

[TheJoker]

You have Path of the Puppeteer listed as -4 SP in your SP expenditure log for some reason. Paths are only -1.

 

You have 3 JP listed as expentitures when you are really at -4, as the Puppet technique is 4 jp.

Thank you! made fixes accordingly!

[Hardcore Skittlez]

I think this looks good now. Approved

[Cellar Door]

And bam.

Edited January 25, 2016 by Cellar Door

[PandaMattMatt]

Due to Inactivity this character will be moved to "Inactive". Please contact a member of staff if you would like to have this character put back!