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Blitzkrieg Vest Body Placement: Chest Attributes: +40 Defense | +40 Evasion | +10 Weapon Slots Special: The Storm Cloud (Choose One): The wearer of this armor gains an additional 2% of their chakra or stamina (Chosen upon purchase) each turn. This effect counts as advanced regeneration. The wearer of this armor gains an additional 1% chakra and stamina each turn. This effect counts as advanced regeneration. Description: The standard vest for a B.O.L.T.S shinobi. While they keep the same design as the traditional Kumogakure vest, these vest are colored dark grey. The padding within the vest are made to be more comfortable and enhanced with light metal to increase durability and protection. Requirement: Chuunin Rank. Must be a member of B.O.L.T.S to purchase. RP Requirement: 60 RP with B.O.L.T.S Cost: 620 Storm Vest Body Placement: Chest Attributes: +100 Defense | +100 Evasion | +20 Weapon Slots Special: Eye of the Storm (Choose one): The wearer of this armor gains an additional 4% of their chakra or stamina (Chosen upon purchase) each turn. This effect counts as advanced regeneration. The wearer of this armor gains an additional 2% of their chakra and stamina each turn. This effect counts as advanced regeneration. Description: Upgraded version of the Blitzkrieg Vest, this is given to B.O.L.T.S shinobi that have made their way into the upper ranks of B.O.L.T.S. Keeping the same design as the traditional Kumogakure vest, these vest are now black or navy blue in color. In order to ensure a successful mission, these vest have been imbued with chakra to aid shinobi on long or tedious missions. Requirement: Jounin Rank. Must be a member of B.O.L.T.S to purchase. This vest replaces Blitzkrieg Vest when obtained and all upgrades are transferred to this vest. RP Requirement: 120 RP with B.O.L.T.S Cost: $1200 Stratos A.T.F (All Terrain Footwear) Body Placement: Feet Attributes: +40 Evasion Special: Natural Explorer: The wearer of this armor is immune to the following terrains: 'Muddy Ground', 'Rocky Plateau', and 'Water'|'Thick Mud'. Description: Created by Kumogakure's Research and Development, the Stratos A.T.F is designed to help maneuver the harsh environment that surrounds Kumogakure no Sato. Available in many styles, such as the traditional shinobi shoes, these shoes are crafted with a soft rubber sole to help grip on wet surfaces and prevent slips. The outside construction of the shoe is reinforced with light and strong mesh fabrics to provide sturdiness and protection for the feet. As with all Stratos equipment, these shoes have been imbued with chakra to aid with chakra control when climbing mountains, trees, or whatever you wish to climb. RP Requirement: 60 RP with B.O.L.T.S Cost: 660

Organization Items: Organization Missions: Strange Sightings C-Rank Mission Recent reports have indicated yokai approaching Kumogakure no Sato from the south area. Your orders are to investigate their path and try to detour them away from the village. If unsuccessful you have permission to engage and kill them. Word Count: 4000 Rewards: 800 Exp, $160, 20 RP for B.O.L.T.S Hunt Down The Mole B-Rank Mission Recent investigations in our own staff have discovered that there exist a spy within our organization. Discover who they are and detain them. Priority is to keep them alive for questioning. Word Count: 6000 Reward: 1200exp, $250, 30 RP for B.O.L.T.S

.:B.O.L.T.S:. Blitzkrieg Offensive Lightning Task Squad Organization Head: Sensukai Sato Organization Location: Kumogakure No Sato Organization Joining Requirements: Chuunin Rank. Successfully passing B.O.L.T.S admission test or invitation by Raikage or Head of B.O.L.T.S. Organization History: The lifespan of the Kumogakure Empire had spawned numerous organizations, but none of them was successful and efficient as the NCIA Hunting-Nin squad. An elite squad of shinobi, whose task focused on hunting down and capturing missing-ninjas or bandits that threatened the peace of the Kumogakure Empire. Within years the decline of the empire came and it's kingdom collapsed leaving behind a torn and chaotic Kumogakure. The death of the former Raikage and the fall of the NCIA left Kumogakure in a shattered state and the reconstruction and restoration process had begun. The Blitzkrieg Offensive Lightning Task Squad or B.O.L.T.S was founded by Tokeiza Jishin within the few months of his appointment to Raikage. Similar to the Ninja Crime Investigation Agency's Hunter-Nin organization, B.O.L.T.S was created for the protection of Kumogakure no Sato and hunt down, capture, and eliminate any missing-shinobi or shinobi that defected from Kumogakure after the defeat of Raikou and beyond. With the creation of B.O.L.T.S, Sensukai Sato, jounin of Kumogakure, was appointed as the Commander of B.O.L.T.S. The organization would soon pick up in speed as Kumogakure shinobi were recruited, trained, and placed into squads to aid in the rebuilding of Kumogakure. B.O.L.T.S now functions as the black ops squad of Kumogakure No Sato, similar to the well known ANBU. Most of their older divisions being pulled into a singular unit after the events following the Quo insurrection and the small insurrection groups. B.O.L.T.S report directly to the Raikage with the day-to-day activities monitored and taken care of by the Commander of B.O.L.T.S.

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You did put shields, correct. I should have been more clear, my fault on that one. I was referring to the above statement from princess, stating that it can only burn barriers created by techniques. Hence, why in my wording I did put 'active on the field that was created by a technique.' Which I agree with, so I think if we put that clause in there this is good to go.

So I don't see the changes that princess requested? That being said, I rewrote the beginning to be a bit more clear/concise/cleaner-ish, but I bolded the part that should be included in the ability: The user may use their set-up phase in order to sacrifice the HP of one (1) barrier they have active on the field that was created by a technique. The HP sacrificed this way can be used to pay for any attack that is of the same type and rank of the barrier, so long as its not another barrier." Continuing forward, I think this: "Any unused Barrier HP is considered unused, and is returned to the barrier at the end of that turn's main phase." Can be re-written as: "Any Barrier HP not used by this ability is returned to the barrier at the end of the user's main phase during the turn this ability was used."

To keep the wording similar, best to change it to: "The first strike of a Projective Archetype Genjutsu afflicts its target with one (1) turn of 'Confused'."

Upon another review: Nano Beetles: Let's update this to -2sp to keep it at the same line with other resource skills. Venomous Injection: This is fine. At -3sp combined with the upgraded nano beetles, you're now at -5 sp which is similar to a path. Approved Merciless Venom: So the more I look at this, the more that "If an opponent is inflicted with ‘Rejective’ this way, the duration may not be reduced" does not make for a fun and balanced mechanical effect. While mostly medics are the one that deal with removing status effects (and this whole ability feels just like a specific "shut down medics"), having any status effect that is unable to be removed or reduced goes down a very strange, unbalanced, and unpleasant path. My suggestion would be to replace it with: "If an opponent is inflicted with 'Rejective' this way, they must pay an additional 60 chakra or stamina when attempting to remove 1 turn of 'Rejective'." Venom of the Infinite: Approved

Plant style: Grasp of Dryad shackles lvl 1: Approved Plant Style: Uzia arrows lvl 1: "The weapons do not deal physical damage to their target, but may inflict status effects and damage to their chakra and/or stamina reserves." So this line over here creates some issues here. Mainly because that standard senbon, kunai, and shuriken do not have these capabilities. Which means, that these types of small weapons would be custom small weapons that can potentially or significantly break the damage cap for gennin techniques. Ex: Using a senbon that now does 50 chakra damage and since you can use two, you now are doing 100 chakra damage for only 12 chakra. That's broken. Granted, this is just an hypothetical situation but that's where this territory can go. I would suggest that if you have plans to use small weapons that do chakra/stamina damage, that you specifythose in this technique. So that way the technique and cost can be balanced accordingly.