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Have to agree with Cntr, this sheet is insanely good for a first time submission. I read through a lot of it just for the joy of it and because the aesthetics drew me in. I saw a few small things that could be corrected that are all minor so feel free to take with a grain of salt or disregard: Physical description: First paragraph ends mid sentence at “represent” Likes: Inconsistent capitalization for each item (I may bullet them in someway too just for presentation) Personality: Third paragraph, sentence that begins “But after his father’s death” needs revision. I would split into two sentences. The sentence beginning “This often leads to people around Jin to become surprised”, I would consider revising as well. Relationships: Under Nara Shinjiro, second paragraph. “He dedication to his clan” should be His That is as far as I took notes. The only reason I even bring them up is because the whole sheet is so good that I thought you may want to fix the small things

Updated to include that specification!

Raitoningukurō l Lightning Claw l ライトニングクロー Type: Hybrid [Ninjustu-Taijutsu; Lightning; Claw (Medium)] Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Chakra + 40 Stamina Damage: 10 Effects: Target is 'Stunned' for one turn. Description: The user takes their chakra and infuses their claw(s) with electricity. When the user’s blade(s) touches a foe, the electricity is immediately discharged, affecting their nervous system and temporarily stunning them. Points: 5

Not sure if this will effect my activity noticeably or not, but figured I would give a warning that I may be a little less active now that the new Super Mario came out. Will likely still be posting as normal during the week. This is more of a "just in case" for my team members than anything.

Mishra Haro

Mishra Haro- Eijirou Kirishima (if his hair was white it would be perfect!)

You’re far too kind :dance:

Don’t know if this is the appropriate section for this question, but is there any possibility of adding missions for Kumogakure that could be focused around helping get setup for the Chuunin Exams? Seems like a relevant RP opportunity for people in the village leading up to the event.

Welcome back! Hope you’re able to really get going this time around!

Purchasing two of the following weapon: Weapon Type: Claws Size: Medium Level: 5 Special: None. Description: Adorning these metal plated leather gloves are two six inch blades that straddle the middle knuckle. These blades were forged using standard methods; they are nothing particularly special. They simply act as blades that can be attached to one’s hands. Cost: $100 per glove ($200 total) Money on hand: $225 Cost of Items: $200 New money on hand total: $25

While I don’t think this is necessarily the appropriate occasion for this, I don’t know if there is an inappropriate situation for it: Happy Birthday!

You’re too kind, thank you so much!

Username: Atlas Character Name: Mishra Haro Skin Tone: Naruto’s Skin Color- Reference Hair Colour: Pure White Hair Length: His hair goes up not down so hard to say, maybe 6 inches off the top of his head? (Naruto’s hair length is also a good reference point) Hair Style: Can also be based on Naruto; the spiky above the head style. Bangs: No bangs, hair above forehead protector. Eye Colour: Aquamarine Eyes Based on Which Character: Do as you please! Judging by the rest of my choices I guess Naruto’s are a pretty safe pic XD Body Based On Which Character: Uzumaki Naruto from Naruto Shippuuden era. Top Clothes: Black Gi with white trim Bottom Clothes: Black Gi with white trim Accessories: Forehead protector, worn titled slightly on the forehead (don’t care which direction its tilted) Headband: Kumogakure Additional Items: None Background: None Pose: Relaxing, hands held on the back of his head. Sorry if my descriptions are poor, but pretty much my guy looks fairly similar to what Naruto would like in Shippuuden, except with white hair and wearing a black gi with white trim.

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~Experience and Mission Logs~ Exp Earned: +220 EXP, Bent on Bento: D-Rank Mission. Link (200+20, Quick Learner) +275 EXP, Baby Fight Club: D-Rank Mission. Link (250+25, Quick Learner) +741 EXP, Training with Nishiki (GM Training with Pwnzie). Link (674+67, Quick Learner) +387 EXP, Personal Training. Link (352+35, Quick Learner) +550 EXP, Clean the Streets: D-Rank Mission. Link (500+50, Quick Learner) +960 EXP, Operation; Icebreak: C-Rank Mission. Link (800+80; RP bonus from Pwnzie+80; Quick Learner) +223 EXP, Lost spar vs. Rinha Otome's Reflection. Link (203+20, Quick Learner) +578 EXP, Village Registration: D-Rank Mission. Link (525+53, Quick Learner) +605 EXP, Back to Basics: D-Rank Mission. Link (550+55, Quick Learner) +220 EXP, Gate Guardians: D-Rank Mission. Link (200+20, Quick Learner) Transaction Log: +$50, Bent on Bento: D-Rank Mission. Link +$50, Baby Fight Club: D-Rank Misson. Link -$200, Weapon Purchase: 2 Claws. Link +$100, Clean the Streets: D-Rank Mission. Link +$220, Operation; Icebreaker: C-Rank Mission. Link (200+20; RP bonus from Pwnzie) +$110, Village Registration: D-Rank Mission. Link -Added "All Hallows Eve 2017" items to inventory. +$50, Gate Guardians: D-Rank Mission. Link Mission Log: Rank D: 6 Rank C: 1 Rank B: 0 Rank A: 0 Rank S: 0

~Inventory~ 15/15 slots used Armor: -Head: Hitai-ate -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weapons: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: Item Listing Items on Hand: 2 Shuriken 3 Kunai 3 Milk Chocolate Shuriken 2 Pumpkin Juice 2 Black Licorice Bats Items in Vault: None Money on Hand: $505 Money in Bank: $0

~Techniques/Jutsu~ Jutsu Points: 15/15 used Basic Jutsu Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Kumo Taijutsu Touch and Go (Tachi Kyou Go) Kumo Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Hybrid Bastard Sword of Lighting | Banki Zenpuu no Jutsu Raitoningukurō l Lightning Claw l ライトニングクロー Jutsu learned from Jounins: (You can learn up to 12 JP of jutsu from Jounin for free! Link to where you learned these techniques.)

~Skills~ Skill Point Tally: 16/19 SP Gains: SP Expenditures: Skill Breakdown General Skills Quick Learner Overcome Your Problems (Sealed Ninjutsu) Overcome Your Problems (Chakra Leak) Overcome Your Problems (Chakra Burn) Strategist Second Wind Red Thread of Fate | 赤い糸 | Akaiito Equipment Skills Warrior (Claws) Rank: 2 Taijutsu Skills Martial Artist (Styleless) Rank: 2 Path Skills The Path of the Warrior (Warrior's Way) Kumo Skills Subtle Elements; Lightning Hindering Traits Sealed Ninjutsu Chakra Burn Chakra Leak Skills learned from Jounins: (You can learn up to 4 SP worth of skills for free, if a Jounin teaches you them. Link to where you learned the skill.)

~Statistics and Modifiers~ Death Bonus: None Rank: Gennin Level: 11 TXP: 4759 EXP to Next Level: 41 Total Stat Points: 1600/1600 -Stats- (Health) 160 (Stamina) 160 (Chakra) 80 (Taijutsu) 160 (Defense) 160 (Ninjutsu) 60 (Genjutsu) 20 (Concentration) 40 (Speed) 240 (Accuracy) 260 (Evasion) 260 Modifiers: Taijutsu: +50 Damage (40+10, Martial Artist) Ninjutsu: +15 Damage Defense: -40 Damage Basic Attack: +31 Damage (25+6, Martial Artist) Ranged Weapon: +25 Damage Speed Percentile: 295 Accuracy: +26% Chance to Hit Evasion: +26% Chance to Dodge Genjutsu: +2% Chance to Hit, +2% Chance to Dodge

~Background/History~ Current Allegiance: Kumogakure Relationships: -Parent(s): Mishra Onagy and Mishra Tohira -Sibling(s): None. -Significant Other(s): None currently. -Pet(s): A goldfish named Oro. -Teacher(s): None. -Friend(s): Cai Hakashi and Omi Kera History: Born the son of a skilled Taijutsu user, Mishra Haro’s childhood was filled with training. At an early age Haro’s father, Onagy, identified that Haro had a natural gift for Taijutsu, just as he had when he was a child. With this knowledge Onagy began training Haro every day in the basics of Taijutsu. Onagy had been a Jounin for many years, training groups of Gennin up through their Chuunin exams and then going on to assist a new group. He had a lot of experience in training young shinobi and applied that training to his son early on. By the time Haro was six, they would spend six to eight hours each day training, mostly endurance and strength which Haro’s father believed to be the key to mastering Taijutsu. ”Your stamina is the most important asset you have. We must build yours up so that you never have to concern yourself with running out”. This philosophy shaped Haro’s childhood, much to his dismay. He picked up things quickly, but his father was aware of this and only continued to push him harder. Haro preferred to move at the pace of his peers, not wanting to create a separation between himself and his friends. He enjoyed running around with his close friends, Cai Hakashi and Omi Kera in particular. They would go run around the academy, playing tag and other games all day, meeting up on the roof of Haro’s house at the end of the day. Once Haro became a teenager, his Taijutsu skills had become very refined for someone his age. His father discovered through their training that Haro was incapable of performing any Ninjutsu whatsoever. Not only that, but it appeared that Haro’s chakra was somewhat corrosive in nature; whenever he attempted to focus it for any period time he was pained by it. This realization drove his training to be even more stamina focused. As he continued to grow Haro started to make attempts to skip out on his training sessions. These attempts were futile obviously due to his fathers skill, but that did not stop him from trying. He would make his bed in a way that appeared he was sleeping and would sneak away early in the morning to meet up with Hakashi and Kera. These excursions typically did not last very long; his father would track him down usually within the hour. His punishment was always the same, double training for the day (with a minimum of 12 hours). ”You cannot afford to waste your time. You have an exceptional talent and we must do everything we can to foster it” Haro’s father would always say to him. He would simply smile and nod, not caring about any word leaving his fathers lips. The last section of his training was focused on the use of fist weapons mostly steel gloves with small blades at each end. These were his father’s specialty and so he felt obligated to pass on this knowledge to his son. This training was one of the only ones that Haro ever enjoyed; something about the weapons seemed very natural to his style of fighting. His father would not let him have his own pair though, ”You must practice far more before I will allow you to have your own. Once you can land one hit on me in a spar, I will give you my own pair”. Haro never came close. Haro wants nothing more than to leave the care of his parents, his father in particular, and join a team and start doing missions. Working and doing missions wasn’t necessarily the most appealing idea to Haro, but the idea of not having to endure his father’s training was more than enough incentive to push him in that direction.

I’ve been getting into Modern lately and I was excited to see what was gonna happen after the bannings so I watched a bunch. I also just watch a lot of Magic in general as boring as it can be to watch haha. I live pretty close to where it was being held so I was considering going to watch some live, but opted to just stay blobbed on my couch instead